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5sunneedee
Ginny seems to be worried about everyone else more than Harry lol. Loving this fic, very well written
5sunneedeeGinny seems to be worried about everyone else more than Harry lol. Loving this fic, very well written
3/29 c37 Allythecole
This story blew me away. I love it! I think you captured all of the characters brilliantly. I nearly cried, and I can't say that about any other fanfiction I've ever read. Keep on writing, you're very talented!
This story blew me away. I love it! I think you captured all of the characters brilliantly. I nearly cried, and I can't say that about any other fanfiction I've ever read. Keep on writing, you're very talented!
3/17 c6 7Shiki105
Indeed! WTF Neville? And I was thinking there were subtle Hannah/Neville hints dotted throughout the story xD
7Shiki105Indeed! WTF Neville? And I was thinking there were subtle Hannah/Neville hints dotted throughout the story xD
3/17 c5 Shiki105
I love your story! Judging by the staggering amount of reviews you now have, I'd say it was a success ;) Besides, you posted the whole story quite quickly; people tend to read and just forget reviewing, or review at the very last chapter.
I've said this before but your writing style is great! It is so nice to read a story that actually makes sense and has a great plot, on this site. I wish everybody here would be more conscious of what exactly they put up for others to read. I have no qualms with this story, as of yet!
Happy writing!
Shiki
I love your story! Judging by the staggering amount of reviews you now have, I'd say it was a success ;) Besides, you posted the whole story quite quickly; people tend to read and just forget reviewing, or review at the very last chapter.
I've said this before but your writing style is great! It is so nice to read a story that actually makes sense and has a great plot, on this site. I wish everybody here would be more conscious of what exactly they put up for others to read. I have no qualms with this story, as of yet!
Happy writing!
Shiki
3/17 c4 Shiki105
That was great! The action was amazing and the little moment at the end there where she says Harry's name made me tear up just a bit.
Happy writing!
Shiki
That was great! The action was amazing and the little moment at the end there where she says Harry's name made me tear up just a bit.
Happy writing!
Shiki
3/14 c37 18MagicGirl41
Thankyou, Lucy for this incredible story. As I read the end of the final battle scene, I had the same feeling in my chest that I had when I first read The Deathly Hallows. Nothing can compare to that warm, charged, proud and excitied feeling. I am so grateful to you for yoyr stories, and so happy that your writing exsists in this world, because it's like having the books again for the first time. I swear that yoy must be Rowling, writing undercover ;D But thank you again for this story-I've cried and laughed and gasped and I don't have the words to explain it's perfection, or the feeling it's left me with. I can only say, write on, Potteron, and have a magical day!
-Daria
18MagicGirl41Thankyou, Lucy for this incredible story. As I read the end of the final battle scene, I had the same feeling in my chest that I had when I first read The Deathly Hallows. Nothing can compare to that warm, charged, proud and excitied feeling. I am so grateful to you for yoyr stories, and so happy that your writing exsists in this world, because it's like having the books again for the first time. I swear that yoy must be Rowling, writing undercover ;D But thank you again for this story-I've cried and laughed and gasped and I don't have the words to explain it's perfection, or the feeling it's left me with. I can only say, write on, Potteron, and have a magical day!
-Daria
3/14 c30 MagicGirl41
Now I'm sobbing again. Every death is like a knife to the heart... WHY MUST THEY ALLDIE?! D'X D'X D'X D'X
Now I'm sobbing again. Every death is like a knife to the heart... WHY MUST THEY ALLDIE?! D'X D'X D'X D'X
3/14 c29 MagicGirl41
*continued* put down my ipod for five minutes to sob my heart out. I'm still crying. I was never able to cry during the books, I was only able to grieve, and now I cried for Fred and Remus and Tonks and Colin and all the characters that I loved and lost during the final battle. I haven't reviwed during this whole story, because I was too addicted to it and I had to keep reading, but I just want to say now how incredible it is. Thank you for this story.
*continued* put down my ipod for five minutes to sob my heart out. I'm still crying. I was never able to cry during the books, I was only able to grieve, and now I cried for Fred and Remus and Tonks and Colin and all the characters that I loved and lost during the final battle. I haven't reviwed during this whole story, because I was too addicted to it and I had to keep reading, but I just want to say now how incredible it is. Thank you for this story.
3/14 c28 MagicGirl41
You know how people always say that "they're crying" or "*sobs*", and, although they'rr really sad, they don't meam it? Well I actually cried. I had to put down my ip
You know how people always say that "they're crying" or "*sobs*", and, although they'rr really sad, they don't meam it? Well I actually cried. I had to put down my ip
3/13 c37 Kerri
Wow, I literally can not stop crying.
This was absolutely amazing. I have never read a fanfiction where the characters were so real, so full of emotion, to the point where I cried in several chapters.
You are a phenomenal writer, and I've read every single one of your fanfictions. Please, please never give up on your writing. It is a gift I'm honored to read and share, and I just wanted to thank you for letting me into your imagination. This was amazing.
Wow, I literally can not stop crying.
This was absolutely amazing. I have never read a fanfiction where the characters were so real, so full of emotion, to the point where I cried in several chapters.
You are a phenomenal writer, and I've read every single one of your fanfictions. Please, please never give up on your writing. It is a gift I'm honored to read and share, and I just wanted to thank you for letting me into your imagination. This was amazing.
3/13 c3 7Shiki105
I did think for a while that the sword plan came too soon but after trying to remember the time between events as they happened in the book, I'm coming up with blanks so it's all good XD
Your writing is excellent! Not even a single typo or spelling mistake, as far as I'm aware. But I will say that, instead of saying Luna did so and so "calmly" or "dreamily", how about trying to be more creative? I understand you're trying to keep her in-character, but I think you're not utilising your abilities as a writer enough by just plopping a few adverbs here and there. Someone once told me that adverbs don't make for very good writing.
Other than that, not much to report! I look forward to reading on!
Happy writing!
Shiki
7Shiki105I did think for a while that the sword plan came too soon but after trying to remember the time between events as they happened in the book, I'm coming up with blanks so it's all good XD
Your writing is excellent! Not even a single typo or spelling mistake, as far as I'm aware. But I will say that, instead of saying Luna did so and so "calmly" or "dreamily", how about trying to be more creative? I understand you're trying to keep her in-character, but I think you're not utilising your abilities as a writer enough by just plopping a few adverbs here and there. Someone once told me that adverbs don't make for very good writing.
Other than that, not much to report! I look forward to reading on!
Happy writing!
Shiki
3/13 c1 Shiki105
Hi!
I have liked what I've read so far so I shall continue! Brilliant writing, by the way!
All the best,
Shiki
Hi!
I have liked what I've read so far so I shall continue! Brilliant writing, by the way!
All the best,
Shiki
3/5 c37 Lydia
That was amazing! The last few chapters about the battle were especially well written and heartbreaking. Great job!
That was amazing! The last few chapters about the battle were especially well written and heartbreaking. Great job!
2/22 c2 24CityGirl419
STUPID CARROWS. I don't like them. They're evil and mean, and bastards. (Most probably in the rightful term of bastard because those two probably NEEDED both parents in their life, then maybe they wouldn't have turned out so awful.)
I did like how Ginny wouldn't tell them and everything. It gives her a sense of courage that she wouldn't otherwise have and such. I don't know. I just think it was good and cute and awesome. Okay? Okay. I always loved Ginny in the books, (even when some of my friends didn't) and I was sad we didn't get to learn more about her in general. :/ Can't wait to read more. Awesome writing!
-Dest
24CityGirl419STUPID CARROWS. I don't like them. They're evil and mean, and bastards. (Most probably in the rightful term of bastard because those two probably NEEDED both parents in their life, then maybe they wouldn't have turned out so awful.)
I did like how Ginny wouldn't tell them and everything. It gives her a sense of courage that she wouldn't otherwise have and such. I don't know. I just think it was good and cute and awesome. Okay? Okay. I always loved Ginny in the books, (even when some of my friends didn't) and I was sad we didn't get to learn more about her in general. :/ Can't wait to read more. Awesome writing!
-Dest