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12/15/2012 c36 32loveislouder94
Yet again you've reduced me to tears! Then again, I'm in a teary mood today. Anyway, wonderful! :)
12/13/2012 c1 laurawendenburg
Hello!
I'm delighted to discover that POV of the 7th book. You're very faithful to the genuine characters, thank you for that. And I like your fluent writing. Please keep on writing stories!
12/12/2012 c36 21isthisrubble
"His jaw dropped, and he turned, thinking that no one else could possibly have seen what he had, but Harry was not there to corroborate—and he would never be there again."
STOP MAKING ME CRY

I actually screamed 'HERMIONE NO' in front of my parents when she started dueling Bellatrix

I can't decide if I love this chapter or hate it. It's wonderful but I'm crying!
12/12/2012 c37 105Punzie the Platypus
My soda is my feelings, and I'm drinking them because I DON'T WANT THEM ANYMORE. You've written a gripping story, full of brilliantly detailed battle scenes, deaths that make me want to weep and friendships that touched my heart. You have NO IDEA how brilliant you are. Fantastic!
12/12/2012 c35 32loveislouder94
Wonderful, of course! :)
12/11/2012 c34 loveislouder94
Beautiful! So sad, but somehow uplifting. I wish I had better words!
12/8/2012 c37 2Musical Ravenclaw
Life, charged with magic.

Are you trying to make me cry?! Lucy, that was adorable! Especially Harry's awkwardness :') am I right in thinking that that's the first time they say ''I love you'' to each other?

On a more serious note, it's sad to see just how many have been pained by the war, and I don't just mean the 52 on the list. Like Ginny said, there's an infinitesemal part of them all which has been robbed from them by the horrors of war. The glass shards were a great analogy.

Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you! for sticking with this story until the end, no matter how long it took and how frustrrated you got. It is most definitely worth it :D your writing is absolutely brilliiant, don't ever doubt it. -If- WHEN you become a writer, just let me know and I'll definitely buy your books - I promise you.

I suppose all I can say now is thank you, and good luck with life! Hope to see you in my inbox soon :) Best wishes, T xxx
12/7/2012 c37 BookReader101
WOW! This was a SPECTUCULAR ending to this WONDERFUL story. I loved reading this and every moment of it.
12/7/2012 c36 Musical Ravenclaw
Harry had won.

What a perfect ending! I loved Minnie's POV, as it showed how even one of the most informed people in the war had no idea about half the stuff that Harry knows - and Slughorn returning was a nice touch ;)

The Weasley family really had a tough battle, didn't they? Charlie's comment made me choke up - the poor guy, not knowing his younger brother is dead :( though Molly's POV was great, you really showed her mother hen characteristics.

I wish there was more of Ron/Hermione's POVs, but I'm just a sucker for them :P still, I loved seeing their reactions from other POVs, as it really rams home how little everyone knows.

I know I said I'd read this earlier, but I've been postponing it as I didn't want the story to end :( childish, but still - it's too good to lose. DEFINITELY one of my favourite ff's of all time :D I will read the epilogue too, at some point... Anyway, until then, thanks for writing and DFTBA :) xx
12/7/2012 c37 confusehername
thank you, just thank you so much. I have been following this story for a long time and, while it was wonderful to see the final moments of the Battle, I can already tell it'll leave a hole in my fanfic anticipating life. Once a week I would check my WIP list and it would be with much hope and little skip of joy whenever I opened this story and found it had been updated. This is pure quality, one of the best DH fics around, a joy and a emotional wringer to read. Best wishes for the future.
12/6/2012 c34 105Punzie the Platypus
What really hit me was Oliver remembering Colin and being Oliver and Neville with his gran. I'm crying.
12/6/2012 c33 32loveislouder94
Your hard work is definitely worth it, please don't think otherwise. Wonderful job! :)
12/6/2012 c37 ap
I really love this story. And had I found it while you were still posting I would review more than just this last chapter but I think I'm at a loss for words. It's just... everything and more of what I imagined happened at Hogwarts during DH. You've done such a truly fantastic job writing this, with the characters, the plot, the action, everything. You are truly, truly talented.

The only thing I would have liked to see, though it didn't necessarily fit in the story, is some sort of conversation between McGonagall and Harry at the end. You gave us those absolutely fabulous chapters from her point of view before the battle - probably the best McGonagall I've come across in fanfiction. And I'm such a sucker for Harry and McGonagall's relationship I would have loved to see more.

But really I can't heap enough praise onto the work you've done here. Congrats on finishing this and I hope very much to see more stories from you.
12/5/2012 c37 15ermireallydontcare
Hi. I've been reading since the beginning but have kind of sucked at this whole reviewing lark. So just wanted to say that this is a wonderful story and I've enjoyed it very much :)

As much as I enjoyed the earlier parts with Ginny and Minerva my favourite part of all was getting all the different POVs of the battle. You made everything weave together so well with each other and the actual story, and offered a brilliant insight into all the minor characters.

In summary, wonderful story, thank you :)
12/5/2012 c32 32loveislouder94
Awww...poor Snape! I like how you demonstrated his desire to protect the students through hiding Alicia, it shows the attention to detail that you have consistently displayed throughout this story. Excellent!
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