for Contemplations About Flowers12/28/2012 c1 LeviRufact
It's very nice! May I suggest alternate endings for each choice to make it even better though?
It's very nice! May I suggest alternate endings for each choice to make it even better though?
9/16/2012 c1 
3blu.balloon
Love the atmosphere; the surroundings felt so clear. Something I particularly liked was the preservation spell- so simple, why didn't I think of that earlier? Little things like that. And leaving the ending open-ended was perfect. Overall, a simple, clean, enjoyable read!
3blu.balloonLove the atmosphere; the surroundings felt so clear. Something I particularly liked was the preservation spell- so simple, why didn't I think of that earlier? Little things like that. And leaving the ending open-ended was perfect. Overall, a simple, clean, enjoyable read!
6/12/2012 c1 12Luckenhaft
really i did the same thing in my game. getting everyone's freindship/love status to level 10. i picked raven. because i can honestly say i loved her.
12Luckenhaftreally i did the same thing in my game. getting everyone's freindship/love status to level 10. i picked raven. because i can honestly say i loved her.
5/15/2012 c1 26Celesta SunStar
Very sweet, I like this story. But I have to admit to picking Raven myself.
26Celesta SunStarVery sweet, I like this story. But I have to admit to picking Raven myself.
5/2/2012 c1 Nothing
Beautiful! Very beautiful! And just for the record, I would've chosen Daria too. Anyways, I like how you explained every character and tried to keep it nonbias. Also, good job on keeping the ending open. People don't always like some pairings, so that was good! Keep up the good work!
Beautiful! Very beautiful! And just for the record, I would've chosen Daria too. Anyways, I like how you explained every character and tried to keep it nonbias. Also, good job on keeping the ending open. People don't always like some pairings, so that was good! Keep up the good work!