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27Julie Horwitz
Another incredibly well written character study. Of the several stories I've read detailing Keith's leaving the team, this was the one I feel is the most accurate. It would explain Lance's issues with him at the beginning of VF. I was a little surprised by how you portrayed Pidge, but it worked in the story. I especially liked your inclusion of the much-ignored mice. An excellent story.
27Julie HorwitzAnother incredibly well written character study. Of the several stories I've read detailing Keith's leaving the team, this was the one I feel is the most accurate. It would explain Lance's issues with him at the beginning of VF. I was a little surprised by how you portrayed Pidge, but it worked in the story. I especially liked your inclusion of the much-ignored mice. An excellent story.
5/4/2012 c1 8SallyOn
Really like your backstory for Keith leaving! Great writing, and lots of good details!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
8SallyOnReally like your backstory for Keith leaving! Great writing, and lots of good details!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/4/2012 c1 1blue7772011
WOW...Lance is angry, I mean Pidge is too but Lance is really really angry. Well hope it all pans out.
1blue7772011WOW...Lance is angry, I mean Pidge is too but Lance is really really angry. Well hope it all pans out.
5/3/2012 c1 Lance4Ever
wow alot to this first chapter more detail of what actually happened in the beginning...so much detail there. And the talk and insight between Coran and Keith I liked. Seeing how it all ended was very cool to start will you continue?
wow alot to this first chapter more detail of what actually happened in the beginning...so much detail there. And the talk and insight between Coran and Keith I liked. Seeing how it all ended was very cool to start will you continue?