for Greatly Exaggerated4/8 c15 Mischief101
this story was amazing. I loved every part of it. Although the kids did seem old for their age who cares it worked. I loved Morgan she is exactly how I would picture a daughter of Veronica's. The best part though was probably the epilogue I loved the situation with the principal and Troy. So funny. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
this story was amazing. I loved every part of it. Although the kids did seem old for their age who cares it worked. I loved Morgan she is exactly how I would picture a daughter of Veronica's. The best part though was probably the epilogue I loved the situation with the principal and Troy. So funny. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
3/25 c15 
5PlrtzGlrb
I completely and totally enjoyed this story. You are so good at plot! And character. And dialogue. And writing. How do you do that?
5PlrtzGlrbI completely and totally enjoyed this story. You are so good at plot! And character. And dialogue. And writing. How do you do that?
3/9 c15 273Ultrawoman
Wow. I stumbled upon this story on somebody else's favourites list this morning. I was just curious as to what it was about, I planned to save it to read later if it looked interesting... instead I read it all at once! Well, more or less, I only stopped for lunch :)
I love it. I mean I really love the whole story. Logan leaving to keep Veronica safe, the whole fake death thing, her having his twins whilst he was gone. Its all just... epic, to coin a phrase ;)
The twist with Dick's father? So didn't see that coming, which makes it even more cool, because twists you do see coming aren't half so much fun. It made sense for it to be the Russian mob after Logan, but this also worked. His kids saving him? The most awesome and adorable thing in the history of ever!
Loved this Epilogue too. Stories with fledgling or recently re-established relationships as well as stories with small children need flashforward Epilogues, in my opinion. I use them a lot. Yours was a perfect end to your wonderful tale. Young Morgan, Trent who is Mini!Troy, and the next generation Logan & Lilly. I do, I love it! :)
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Ultra
273UltrawomanWow. I stumbled upon this story on somebody else's favourites list this morning. I was just curious as to what it was about, I planned to save it to read later if it looked interesting... instead I read it all at once! Well, more or less, I only stopped for lunch :)
I love it. I mean I really love the whole story. Logan leaving to keep Veronica safe, the whole fake death thing, her having his twins whilst he was gone. Its all just... epic, to coin a phrase ;)
The twist with Dick's father? So didn't see that coming, which makes it even more cool, because twists you do see coming aren't half so much fun. It made sense for it to be the Russian mob after Logan, but this also worked. His kids saving him? The most awesome and adorable thing in the history of ever!
Loved this Epilogue too. Stories with fledgling or recently re-established relationships as well as stories with small children need flashforward Epilogues, in my opinion. I use them a lot. Yours was a perfect end to your wonderful tale. Young Morgan, Trent who is Mini!Troy, and the next generation Logan & Lilly. I do, I love it! :)
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Ultra
3/8 c15 R18P
I am following another of your fantastic stories, you are really an amazing writer, from the emotions & dialogues of the characters, I was hooked from start to finish, the story itself is great, veronica had Logan's twins after he "died" you come up with really interesting & different ideas for stories.
The twins are great, mini versions of their parents, but just the right amount, snark & cuteness & chatter. Veronica's & friends keeping Logans memory alive at weekly dinners was great, Dick with little Lo, was really sweet but the chat up lines had me in fits of laughter. Mac, Dick, Duncan etc although there not In the story a lot, I felt it was enough to give a glimpse of their bonds & interactions, while not overshadowing the main characters as a new family unit. I really liked the epilogue told from Morgans & Lo's point of view.
As always you never let down with the LoVe,
Thanks for your story ( made work bearable today )
I am following another of your fantastic stories, you are really an amazing writer, from the emotions & dialogues of the characters, I was hooked from start to finish, the story itself is great, veronica had Logan's twins after he "died" you come up with really interesting & different ideas for stories.
The twins are great, mini versions of their parents, but just the right amount, snark & cuteness & chatter. Veronica's & friends keeping Logans memory alive at weekly dinners was great, Dick with little Lo, was really sweet but the chat up lines had me in fits of laughter. Mac, Dick, Duncan etc although there not In the story a lot, I felt it was enough to give a glimpse of their bonds & interactions, while not overshadowing the main characters as a new family unit. I really liked the epilogue told from Morgans & Lo's point of view.
As always you never let down with the LoVe,
Thanks for your story ( made work bearable today )
2/8 c15 3azerjaban
Hahaha this story is Awesome. I know a 5 yr old who talks just like Megan so your fine. I do wish we got to see Wallace though, what happened there?
" Am I the only one who never realized that the emo-werewolf Josh on 'Being Human' is played by the same guy who played pinata-smuggling fence-vaulting GHB-sharing Luke?"
LOL I was just re watching the first season and it hit me just HOW MANY side actors in VM went on to make their own shows. The girl who accused the teacher of assault for her friend? BLAIR from Gossip Girls. Deputy Leo? SHMITT on New Girl. And of Course Luke as the JOSH on Being human - which I love him as, the awkward nervousness he plays so perfectly. Anyway it was funny constant pausing and Google in people.
Thanks for the awesome read! I love the ending. I never hated Troy. I wish they brought him back for a cameo.
3azerjabanHahaha this story is Awesome. I know a 5 yr old who talks just like Megan so your fine. I do wish we got to see Wallace though, what happened there?
" Am I the only one who never realized that the emo-werewolf Josh on 'Being Human' is played by the same guy who played pinata-smuggling fence-vaulting GHB-sharing Luke?"
LOL I was just re watching the first season and it hit me just HOW MANY side actors in VM went on to make their own shows. The girl who accused the teacher of assault for her friend? BLAIR from Gossip Girls. Deputy Leo? SHMITT on New Girl. And of Course Luke as the JOSH on Being human - which I love him as, the awkward nervousness he plays so perfectly. Anyway it was funny constant pausing and Google in people.
Thanks for the awesome read! I love the ending. I never hated Troy. I wish they brought him back for a cameo.
11/27/2012 c15 amy
I just had to read this wonderful story again! U r definitely one of my absolute favorite writers on this cm fanfic world.I truely think u master the emotions and dialogue like no other...right now I'm so into ur other story! Please keep giving us ur brilliant renditions of LoVe!
I just had to read this wonderful story again! U r definitely one of my absolute favorite writers on this cm fanfic world.I truely think u master the emotions and dialogue like no other...right now I'm so into ur other story! Please keep giving us ur brilliant renditions of LoVe!
11/23/2012 c15 Guest
God this was amazing! I think it was the best e ending to Veronica Mars! I love how you made Veronica and Logan getting back to get be about their kids. i love how you made their kids like them. I was basically crying when you made Lo like Lilly and Veronica like trent. I just wish lo would fall in love with a veronica. but i understand why you didn't make it that way. Welll now i can go on in my life having an ending that i love. So thank you so much!
God this was amazing! I think it was the best e ending to Veronica Mars! I love how you made Veronica and Logan getting back to get be about their kids. i love how you made their kids like them. I was basically crying when you made Lo like Lilly and Veronica like trent. I just wish lo would fall in love with a veronica. but i understand why you didn't make it that way. Welll now i can go on in my life having an ending that i love. So thank you so much!
11/23/2012 c7 Guest
Good this is amazing. I love how lo is just like his dad and has a crush on Lilly. I almost died at that. I love Morgan she is Veronica. I love this story
Good this is amazing. I love how lo is just like his dad and has a crush on Lilly. I almost died at that. I love Morgan she is Veronica. I love this story
10/30/2012 c15 12ShanghaiLily
Really loved the epilogue. Normally I hate epilogues (I also hate writing them!) but this one was cute, and I love Morgan and Lilly2. Great story!
12ShanghaiLilyReally loved the epilogue. Normally I hate epilogues (I also hate writing them!) but this one was cute, and I love Morgan and Lilly2. Great story!
10/30/2012 c7 ShanghaiLily
I have an aspie son who is six, so I totally get it. He sounds like a mini-adult too. You write Morgan like a mild spectrum kid, so obviously I think she's adorable :)
I have an aspie son who is six, so I totally get it. He sounds like a mini-adult too. You write Morgan like a mild spectrum kid, so obviously I think she's adorable :)
10/17/2012 c15 owlgirlib
I know this is complete, but I had to review, because I think it's so good. I usually don't like post-series fics, but I just kept coming back to this one, because Logan was built as such a fascinating character. He's different, more mature than he was in the series, but there's still enough recognizable Logan to make him in-character. The kids, unlike many OC kids I've read, are perfect for them. I felt like all of the characters were believable and the plot was tight and smoothly executed. I really enjoyed it!
I know this is complete, but I had to review, because I think it's so good. I usually don't like post-series fics, but I just kept coming back to this one, because Logan was built as such a fascinating character. He's different, more mature than he was in the series, but there's still enough recognizable Logan to make him in-character. The kids, unlike many OC kids I've read, are perfect for them. I felt like all of the characters were believable and the plot was tight and smoothly executed. I really enjoyed it!
7/21/2012 c15 spk
OMG! I loved this! I cannot get over how great Morgan's character is and I just adored this last chapter. Great job! :)
OMG! I loved this! I cannot get over how great Morgan's character is and I just adored this last chapter. Great job! :)