for The Universe Opposition7/3/2012 c1 
20princesstaranee
A witty story about an outsider's perception. He was believable and fun and your characterisation of the group was spot on. Well done. :)
20princesstaraneeA witty story about an outsider's perception. He was believable and fun and your characterisation of the group was spot on. Well done. :)
6/5/2012 c1 11Tomasina
Hi. I've noticed this is the third time you've posted this story and your other one without any new chapters. Did you know you can revise existing chapters without having to completely repost your stuff and it will update the link for you? They might give you trouble if you keep posting your revisions this way.
11TomasinaHi. I've noticed this is the third time you've posted this story and your other one without any new chapters. Did you know you can revise existing chapters without having to completely repost your stuff and it will update the link for you? They might give you trouble if you keep posting your revisions this way.
5/23/2012 c1 Someone
So, about that update... Any chance you may post it soon? ;)
So, about that update... Any chance you may post it soon? ;)
5/6/2012 c1 theophilusrex
i dont know what to say about this, but at the same time, i do (?)
its an interesting and original concept, story from the point of view of an outsider, poor steve :(
but on the other side i find myself liking this story immensely :)
will you be carrying it on? if you do i gladly promise to review every chapter (but sometimes i get tired and lazy, just dont expect them straight away)
i'll even suggest ideas, but they might not be that good since i have no writing experience or creativity. im an audience member and basically a cheerleader (the non-beautiful non-popular kind).
great story!
i dont know what to say about this, but at the same time, i do (?)
its an interesting and original concept, story from the point of view of an outsider, poor steve :(
but on the other side i find myself liking this story immensely :)
will you be carrying it on? if you do i gladly promise to review every chapter (but sometimes i get tired and lazy, just dont expect them straight away)
i'll even suggest ideas, but they might not be that good since i have no writing experience or creativity. im an audience member and basically a cheerleader (the non-beautiful non-popular kind).
great story!
5/5/2012 c1 19rubyanjel
WOW THIS WAS AWESOME. I must agree with someone that i thought this was some cliche kind of fanfic. but thank god it was under the sheldon and amy filter and that I was bored this sunday afternoon and read it. I love how canon-ic the view was and not some silly infantile way of other people bashing on these couples. Haha! Sorry for that little rant though. But yeah, please, continue?
19rubyanjelWOW THIS WAS AWESOME. I must agree with someone that i thought this was some cliche kind of fanfic. but thank god it was under the sheldon and amy filter and that I was bored this sunday afternoon and read it. I love how canon-ic the view was and not some silly infantile way of other people bashing on these couples. Haha! Sorry for that little rant though. But yeah, please, continue?
5/5/2012 c1 Someone
Well, hello there! I must admit that I was too, just like your first reviewer, skeptical about this fic. An OC, multiple pairings, The Notebook, Howard/Raj? I guess I was expecting some random author's version of the "hey, wouldn't it be awesome if I were to meet these guys and become friends with them, teehee" plot.
That's not what I found. This fic was funny, original and intriguing. I'm really interested in seeing where this may lead. And I agree, it is a good idea to observe the group dynamics from an outsider's perspective -especially when said outsider is amusing on his own right. Poor Steve indeed!
I hope to read more from you. Please update soon! ^_^
Well, hello there! I must admit that I was too, just like your first reviewer, skeptical about this fic. An OC, multiple pairings, The Notebook, Howard/Raj? I guess I was expecting some random author's version of the "hey, wouldn't it be awesome if I were to meet these guys and become friends with them, teehee" plot.
That's not what I found. This fic was funny, original and intriguing. I'm really interested in seeing where this may lead. And I agree, it is a good idea to observe the group dynamics from an outsider's perspective -especially when said outsider is amusing on his own right. Poor Steve indeed!
I hope to read more from you. Please update soon! ^_^
5/5/2012 c1 2NumbistheNewHigh
I'm not sure what I was expecting from this story but I'm glad I clicked on it. It was very, very funny. Also, I'm liking the idea of a third party looking into the dynamics of the group of friends.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned with this story.
2NumbistheNewHighI'm not sure what I was expecting from this story but I'm glad I clicked on it. It was very, very funny. Also, I'm liking the idea of a third party looking into the dynamics of the group of friends.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned with this story.