for Something's Gone Horribly Wrong9/2/2012 c1 
12Yami's Devil
Okay! Good start! Get your butt on the computer and start the next chapter!
12Yami's DevilOkay! Good start! Get your butt on the computer and start the next chapter!
8/21/2012 c1 3SoulWeaver Balinia
I loved how you called Naruto "Mcorangejumpsuit". It totally cracked me up! This is really really funny, even if you have some major spelling mistakes here and there. I would be delighted if you would let me beta for you, so you can work on the next chapter while I edit. Awesome stuff!
3SoulWeaver BaliniaI loved how you called Naruto "Mcorangejumpsuit". It totally cracked me up! This is really really funny, even if you have some major spelling mistakes here and there. I would be delighted if you would let me beta for you, so you can work on the next chapter while I edit. Awesome stuff!