for Heaven's Bane8/4/2012 c5 
8Rabenkopf
Interesting. So he got into prison...I ask myself, where this story will lead us in the end...Li Wei's journey seems to be long and full of obstacles...how this will end in the story you are drawing on DA?
Bad childhood experience are wounds for the whole life. It is almost impossible to heal them. But it is possible with the right help to make them into well healed scars...only when one wants to heal them...
8RabenkopfInteresting. So he got into prison...I ask myself, where this story will lead us in the end...Li Wei's journey seems to be long and full of obstacles...how this will end in the story you are drawing on DA?
Bad childhood experience are wounds for the whole life. It is almost impossible to heal them. But it is possible with the right help to make them into well healed scars...only when one wants to heal them...
6/7/2012 c4 Rabenkopf
(looks with a speechless face at it after reading)
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What can I say? Impressive. Wow. Amazing. Awesome.
Everyone of this words fits but also no one. It is ineffable how much I like this chapter. Remembers me of such wonderful romantic scenes in movies or books, which can be never forgotten.
That is the piece of a real master artist here not comparable to such a noob like me.
So what can I say at the end? I would like to say that you should keep up this good work, but somehow I think I don't need to.
You don't keep up the good work, but get even better from chapter to chapter without the need that I say it loud :)
(looks with a speechless face at it after reading)
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What can I say? Impressive. Wow. Amazing. Awesome.
Everyone of this words fits but also no one. It is ineffable how much I like this chapter. Remembers me of such wonderful romantic scenes in movies or books, which can be never forgotten.
That is the piece of a real master artist here not comparable to such a noob like me.
So what can I say at the end? I would like to say that you should keep up this good work, but somehow I think I don't need to.
You don't keep up the good work, but get even better from chapter to chapter without the need that I say it loud :)
5/19/2012 c3 4UnrealFox
Haha, good chapter!
So the Blue Butterfly is kind of a stuck up Bi#$ ? I like it. It makes me wonder how her and Li are actually going to come to terms and work together. Really, I wonder how all five of them will work together... It's going to be awesome!
Too bad she didn't display any of her power yet, but I know we'll see it eventually.
4UnrealFoxHaha, good chapter!
So the Blue Butterfly is kind of a stuck up Bi#$ ? I like it. It makes me wonder how her and Li are actually going to come to terms and work together. Really, I wonder how all five of them will work together... It's going to be awesome!
Too bad she didn't display any of her power yet, but I know we'll see it eventually.
5/13/2012 c2 UnrealFox
Wow, sorry it took so long for me to finally get around to reading this X3 I've been busy with commissions ... as usual.
But man, am I glad to be reading another one of your stories. These chapters are much shorter than the last ones, but... I think those make the most successful stories here on FanFiction.
I also gotta say, I'm loving the intro and the 2nd chapter so far. It's very sweet to see these characters in action. We had a glimpse of the Red Wolf and the Green Reaper before back when you were drawing the comic about the Red Dream, and that Dead Space Wolf ( who was also a kick ** looking guy X3 ), but it's still cool to read about them too. Especially now that Lei Wei's thoughts can be heard more now, instead of just being seen.
Hmm, in a way, Lei-Wei is kind of like an evolved Zhan, kind of how he keeps to himself, and doesn't do much to attract attention; unless he's forced to. Which makes him a very awesome character none the less, and probably the perfect main character for this story if that's what you were planning.
I also liked the way things were described, because imagining a lavish fort, surrounded by sleezy bars and dirty slums is a great comparison as to how well off these Mercenaries are, and usually whenever you think of Mercs, it's either Raiders from FallOut, or Ex-Military living out of their vehicles X3.
Can't wait to see Chapter 3 :3
Wow, sorry it took so long for me to finally get around to reading this X3 I've been busy with commissions ... as usual.
But man, am I glad to be reading another one of your stories. These chapters are much shorter than the last ones, but... I think those make the most successful stories here on FanFiction.
I also gotta say, I'm loving the intro and the 2nd chapter so far. It's very sweet to see these characters in action. We had a glimpse of the Red Wolf and the Green Reaper before back when you were drawing the comic about the Red Dream, and that Dead Space Wolf ( who was also a kick ** looking guy X3 ), but it's still cool to read about them too. Especially now that Lei Wei's thoughts can be heard more now, instead of just being seen.
Hmm, in a way, Lei-Wei is kind of like an evolved Zhan, kind of how he keeps to himself, and doesn't do much to attract attention; unless he's forced to. Which makes him a very awesome character none the less, and probably the perfect main character for this story if that's what you were planning.
I also liked the way things were described, because imagining a lavish fort, surrounded by sleezy bars and dirty slums is a great comparison as to how well off these Mercenaries are, and usually whenever you think of Mercs, it's either Raiders from FallOut, or Ex-Military living out of their vehicles X3.
Can't wait to see Chapter 3 :3