for Different8/18/2012 c1 lili
continu your fic
continu your fic
8/5/2012 c1
9Lady Island Rose
Even though you aren't continuing this, I checked it out anyway :) very funny how irritated Hitsugaya was and how dramatic Hinamori was xD
9Lady Island RoseEven though you aren't continuing this, I checked it out anyway :) very funny how irritated Hitsugaya was and how dramatic Hinamori was xD
5/21/2012 c1
162KousukeAsazuki
Shinji and Histugaya's conversation is bound to be hilarious. I can see Hitsugaya giving up on even trying to talk any sense into Shinji. Besides, it's not like Shinji would show him any respect, I would think. Poor kid is in for it.
Aha, I feel so bad for Hinamori. Hopefully she'll adjust well. I think Hisagi is probably the only one of the three that is actually glad to have the captain he does, now.
I can't wait for an update
162KousukeAsazukiShinji and Histugaya's conversation is bound to be hilarious. I can see Hitsugaya giving up on even trying to talk any sense into Shinji. Besides, it's not like Shinji would show him any respect, I would think. Poor kid is in for it.
Aha, I feel so bad for Hinamori. Hopefully she'll adjust well. I think Hisagi is probably the only one of the three that is actually glad to have the captain he does, now.
I can't wait for an update
5/9/2012 c1
7madin456
Shinji really is carefree... "slicing away at Hollows like cutting sushu"? I mean, sushi takes a lot of skill to cut! XD
Aha, the Kyouraku thing was funny. Everyone talks about him in front of him XD Kinda feel bad for him... Nah :P
"A tad bit shy"... isn't that a bit off, Shinji?
...Ditching on this first day back on the job... Get reputation you're gonna get Shinji...
The ending was amazing :)
Ooooh, I know what Hiyori's doing! She's... secretly stalking Shinji! ^_^
Anyways, you gotta update! Like, super-duper fast. Really. So fast, that you'll upload it before the guy (or girl) next to you will finish taking a sip outta the cup, which is, by the way, on you head. Ha, bet you didn't know that :P
7madin456Shinji really is carefree... "slicing away at Hollows like cutting sushu"? I mean, sushi takes a lot of skill to cut! XD
Aha, the Kyouraku thing was funny. Everyone talks about him in front of him XD Kinda feel bad for him... Nah :P
"A tad bit shy"... isn't that a bit off, Shinji?
...Ditching on this first day back on the job... Get reputation you're gonna get Shinji...
The ending was amazing :)
Ooooh, I know what Hiyori's doing! She's... secretly stalking Shinji! ^_^
Anyways, you gotta update! Like, super-duper fast. Really. So fast, that you'll upload it before the guy (or girl) next to you will finish taking a sip outta the cup, which is, by the way, on you head. Ha, bet you didn't know that :P
5/9/2012 c1
8EaSnowPw
Nice story. I'm so looking forward to their talk. I can already see Shinji exasperating Toushiro!
8EaSnowPwNice story. I'm so looking forward to their talk. I can already see Shinji exasperating Toushiro!
5/8/2012 c1
1tiggerbleach
This is an awesome start. I like the dynamics between Momo and Shinji. With Momo ready to devote herself to another Aizen only to find a person who not only does not fit her box, but smashes boxes for fun. Perhaps Nanao will have some advise for her after dealing with the captain of squad 8 for so long.
1tiggerbleachThis is an awesome start. I like the dynamics between Momo and Shinji. With Momo ready to devote herself to another Aizen only to find a person who not only does not fit her box, but smashes boxes for fun. Perhaps Nanao will have some advise for her after dealing with the captain of squad 8 for so long.
5/7/2012 c1
6AutumnsFlowers
I´m liking this very much! I´m so happy that other people write about their meeting, I think the relationship between them will be very interesting to analize.
Just one remark: I think you made Hinamori too cheerful. It´s not that she´s not like that. But after the Winter War, no even before that she had showed to have become more serious and calm.
Anyway, excellent story so far, keep writing, I´m looking forward to the next chapter!
6AutumnsFlowersI´m liking this very much! I´m so happy that other people write about their meeting, I think the relationship between them will be very interesting to analize.
Just one remark: I think you made Hinamori too cheerful. It´s not that she´s not like that. But after the Winter War, no even before that she had showed to have become more serious and calm.
Anyway, excellent story so far, keep writing, I´m looking forward to the next chapter!
5/6/2012 c1 Sony Ninja
a very nice start both of them seem to be how I imagine they would be for their first meeting, and was that a Ray william Johnson reference in the Author's note? either way awesome job and I look forward to the next chapter so till then see ya.XD
a very nice start both of them seem to be how I imagine they would be for their first meeting, and was that a Ray william Johnson reference in the Author's note? either way awesome job and I look forward to the next chapter so till then see ya.XD
5/6/2012 c1
6Gamma-Beta-Alpha
Wouldn't Shinji give anyone a heartattack if he was in leadership?
Heck, Shinji would use Hitsugaya as an arm-rest before any civil conversation could happen...
6Gamma-Beta-AlphaWouldn't Shinji give anyone a heartattack if he was in leadership?
Heck, Shinji would use Hitsugaya as an arm-rest before any civil conversation could happen...
