for What It Feels Like5/8/2012 c2 Q
Wow, I am impressed by this story. I feel the same, I am a big Makorra shipper, but since Episode 5, I have been reading a lot of Borra. This story is well written and so far everyone is in character! I can feel the angst! Great job, I will definitely read more if you write more.
Wow, I am impressed by this story. I feel the same, I am a big Makorra shipper, but since Episode 5, I have been reading a lot of Borra. This story is well written and so far everyone is in character! I can feel the angst! Great job, I will definitely read more if you write more.
5/8/2012 c2 
3Ocean Reflection
The first episodes of LoK had me fan girling for Makorra. But the fifth episode really opened up Borra. Bolin was just too gosh darned adorable to not love! I enjoyed your story so far, I do hope you'll continue. I was disappointed to see the team lose in the finals. But I was delighted to read about that silent, angry sibling rivalry. I'm one of four, mostly grown, siblings and we hate and love each other fiercely and MAN you're spot on! Update!
3Ocean ReflectionThe first episodes of LoK had me fan girling for Makorra. But the fifth episode really opened up Borra. Bolin was just too gosh darned adorable to not love! I enjoyed your story so far, I do hope you'll continue. I was disappointed to see the team lose in the finals. But I was delighted to read about that silent, angry sibling rivalry. I'm one of four, mostly grown, siblings and we hate and love each other fiercely and MAN you're spot on! Update!
5/7/2012 c1 31sheepeater
Jeez, way to rip out my heart. :/ But, I believe this was an excellent take on what would have been running through Bolin's mind in retrospect. Well done.
sora
31sheepeaterJeez, way to rip out my heart. :/ But, I believe this was an excellent take on what would have been running through Bolin's mind in retrospect. Well done.
sora
5/6/2012 c1 14animeroxsmyworld
Awwww poor Bolin! I liked how this portrayed his anger and jealousy. Oh Bolin, he needs some love.
14animeroxsmyworldAwwww poor Bolin! I liked how this portrayed his anger and jealousy. Oh Bolin, he needs some love.
5/6/2012 c1 4xXFireRoseXx
This is well written, and a very realistic portrayal of what Bolin's inner turmoil.
4xXFireRoseXxThis is well written, and a very realistic portrayal of what Bolin's inner turmoil.