for My little pony,friendship is extremely boring5/25/2012 c6 Guest
I like it,could use better grammer but overall its very interesting about Rarity and her brother and that a simple jole turned into a war.
I like it,could use better grammer but overall its very interesting about Rarity and her brother and that a simple jole turned into a war.
5/22/2012 c5 
1DarkRabbit77
not tryin to be a dick here but your story gave me a headache
the only interestin thing i like was sabre's relationship and past with rarity.
plus imagining how massive the earth ponies were but you had errors everywhere ,barely had a background story, and each chaptor is way too short with low dialogue
surely you can do better
1DarkRabbit77not tryin to be a dick here but your story gave me a headache
the only interestin thing i like was sabre's relationship and past with rarity.
plus imagining how massive the earth ponies were but you had errors everywhere ,barely had a background story, and each chaptor is way too short with low dialogue
surely you can do better