for The Kononokogan11/27/2012 c10 shadowfox5273
Kinda glad you put this up for adpotion has to many problem. chapters to small that justu thing just word filler not enough detail to rushed and if you write again remove a/n chapters when you next update other wise it tricks people thinking its longer then what it is
Kinda glad you put this up for adpotion has to many problem. chapters to small that justu thing just word filler not enough detail to rushed and if you write again remove a/n chapters when you next update other wise it tricks people thinking its longer then what it is
7/1/2012 c8 
3Lord Pwell
Well my impression for this chapter is that this is short and has short lived catching reader's interest and attention. Why not make more than 1500 word (without shout outs, review replies,etc. Post them after done typing the chapter) chapter? Btw, I have a request :pls replace Author's Note with a real chapter because it bothers me..maybe you should next time if you have some things to do within a day or so, include that at the end of chapter.
3Lord PwellWell my impression for this chapter is that this is short and has short lived catching reader's interest and attention. Why not make more than 1500 word (without shout outs, review replies,etc. Post them after done typing the chapter) chapter? Btw, I have a request :pls replace Author's Note with a real chapter because it bothers me..maybe you should next time if you have some things to do within a day or so, include that at the end of chapter.
6/28/2012 c4 Shepard Commmander
The title name an the ability name kills the story, the name Konoha was name by the Senju and Uchiha for the village. Konokogan name make it sounds like a breakfast cereal.
I'm cu-koo for konokogan.
The title name an the ability name kills the story, the name Konoha was name by the Senju and Uchiha for the village. Konokogan name make it sounds like a breakfast cereal.
I'm cu-koo for konokogan.
6/15/2012 c7 naruhinalltheway
well, happy b-day
well, happy b-day
6/12/2012 c6 ninetailednaruto
dude i know you say you get bored and i get that. but with a bit more effort you could make a decent read. i found it hard to get into the story
dude i know you say you get bored and i get that. but with a bit more effort you could make a decent read. i found it hard to get into the story