for The Balancing Act6/8 c18 IrisAmor
Hey! :) your story is ah-mazing! :)) ur a wonderful writer and the plot of your story is really interesting! I love love love your story! Totally addicting! :)) Hope you update soon :) but don't push urself too much until ur really better! Get well soon! :))
Hey! :) your story is ah-mazing! :)) ur a wonderful writer and the plot of your story is really interesting! I love love love your story! Totally addicting! :)) Hope you update soon :) but don't push urself too much until ur really better! Get well soon! :))
6/3 c18 Ileana
Please update this story! :) and get well
Please update this story! :) and get well
6/1 c9 Guest
75 suicides?
I'm sorry, but HAVE YOU EVER DONE A SUICIDE BEFORE IN YOUR LIFE?
I do tennis training and...
That's NOT exercise that's just literal SUICIDE.
I doubt that ANYONE in the world could do more than 40 suicides without collapsing on the spot or breaking a few bones...etc.
I don't think i could even do twenty.
75 suicides?
I'm sorry, but HAVE YOU EVER DONE A SUICIDE BEFORE IN YOUR LIFE?
I do tennis training and...
That's NOT exercise that's just literal SUICIDE.
I doubt that ANYONE in the world could do more than 40 suicides without collapsing on the spot or breaking a few bones...etc.
I don't think i could even do twenty.
5/2 c18 BooHooMtDew
This story is probably my favourite TVD fanfiction so far!
Good, no... Great job! And keep it coming!
This story is probably my favourite TVD fanfiction so far!
Good, no... Great job! And keep it coming!
3/11 c18 kitty
I hope you get better soon, and I hope it's nothing too serious! Loved the fanfic though and I hope Maddy ends up with Klaus but it your story soo...
I hope you get better soon, and I hope it's nothing too serious! Loved the fanfic though and I hope Maddy ends up with Klaus but it your story soo...
3/5 c18 Katherine Sparrow
Love your story. It's incredible. You've used some things from Secret Circle, right?
Anyway, hope you get better and can't wait for next Chapter:)
Love your story. It's incredible. You've used some things from Secret Circle, right?
Anyway, hope you get better and can't wait for next Chapter:)
3/2 c18 Guest
THE BEST STORY FOREVER! i hope you update soon
THE BEST STORY FOREVER! i hope you update soon
2/28 c18 Guest
I miss the joy he felt when looking this story in mine favorites and see that it had updated! I hope you update soon.
I miss the joy he felt when looking this story in mine favorites and see that it had updated! I hope you update soon.
2/23 c18 Guest
I'm glad you're feeling better! I can't tell you how much i love this story! Can't wait till the next chapter but your health comes first of course!
I'm glad you're feeling better! I can't tell you how much i love this story! Can't wait till the next chapter but your health comes first of course!
2/20 c18 Guest
this is one of the best stories I've ever read! I read and reread a million times, and i hope you update soon.
this is one of the best stories I've ever read! I read and reread a million times, and i hope you update soon.
2/11 c7 
1SheellbyT
Hello!
I was just reading your story when I noticed something familiar about the 'dream' part:
"You have to catch me!" A girl with long deep brown curly hair sang picking up her long pale green dress up running between the trees. Laughing lightly, she stopped and pressed her back against a tree a hand covering her mouth to control her heavy breathing.
She knew he wasn't far behind her.
"Elizabeth!" A young boy in his middle teens with blonde curly hair laughed as he stumbled through the forest, tripping over fallen branches and sticks. "This game is childish, is it not, come out please?" he stepped on another stick which let out loud crack and the girl hiding bit harder down on her lip trying not to erupt into a fit of giggles. He always was the worse at the chasing and catching game, he never had the patients for it like Elijah and Kol did. "Come now, Elizabeth! Your aunt and uncle must be worried about your wellbeing, no?"
Slowly peering out from behind the tree she saw his back facing back up the hill, waiting for a reply from her. She knew he was only trying to get her to make a noise so he could find her hiding place. He was a spoil sport sometimes. She shook her head holding in another giggle.
She smiled holding her breath and tried to make a quite dash towards the lake. "They do not care to what I do during the days as long as my chores are done silly, I have told you before!" Glancing over her shoulder, she saw his dazzling blue eyes on her and a smirk crawling onto his face before he broke off into a sprint after her.
Letting out a small yell, the young girl pulled at her dress gripping it in her hands running faster towards the river. Her feet dipped into the water right before his arms wrapped around her waist pulling her away from the river. He laughed and swung her around.
"Not fair!" She giggled. "You ran before you were allowed." She pouted as he placed her back onto her feet grinning down at her.
"Do not be like that." he stretched his back. "I am just the fastest person that you have ever met is all."
The young Elizabeth pointed a finger at him. "Watch what you say Niklaus, someone will come along someday and beat you at your own game."
He grabbed her finger and pushed it down to her side playfully. "You talk nonsense, Elizabeth. Are you trying to say that you will be faster than me someday?" Crossing her arms stubbornly she nodded. The young Niklaus laughed and shook his head. "When that day comes, I would like to be the first one to see."
"You shall, when I am running in front of you." And she gave him a smug smile before taking off into the woods again giggling as he chased her in circles.
And then I remembered, I wrote the almost exact SAME thing TWO months before your story was ACTUALLY POSTED:
"You have to catch me!" I sang and picked up my dress and ran between the trees. Laughing lightly, I stopped and pressed my back against a tree, my hand covering my mouth to control my breathing.
"Paulina!" he laughed as I heard him stumble through the forest. "This game is childish, is it not?" he stepped on a stick which let out loud crack and I bit harder down on my lip trying not to erupt into giggles. "Come now, Paulina! Your father must be worried about your well being."
Slowly peering out from behind my tree, I saw his back facing back up the hill, waiting for a reply. Holding my breath, I tried to make a quite dash towards the lake. "Father does not care about me, I have told you before." Glancing over my shoulder, I saw his blue eyes on me and a smirk crawling onto his face before he broke off into a run. Letting out a small yell, I pulled at my dress and gripped it in my hands and ran faster towards the river.
My feet dipped into the water before his arms wrapped around my waist. He laughed and swung me around. "Not fair!" I laughed. "You ran before you were allowed." he placed me back onto my feet and grinned down at me.
"Do not be like that." he stretched his back. "I am just the fastest person that you have ever met."
I pointed a finger at him. "Watch what you say Niklaus, someone will come along one day and beat you at your own game.
He grabbed my finger and pushed it down to my side. "You talk big, Paulina. Are you trying to say that you will be faster then me someday?" Crossing my arms, I nodded. Niklaus laughed and shook his head. "When that day comes, I would like to be the first one to see."
"You shall when I am running in front of you." and I gave him a smug smile.
Now now now deary, I'm not a fan of plagiarizing and it made me question how much of this story is ACTUALLY yours. I work ** my writings and I don't want people stealing them. At first, I thought "Oh maybe it's not the same" but when I looked closer it seemed like you only changed a few words WHICH IS STILL PLAGIARIZING. It's very hurtful and disrespective Please, delete MY work from your story.
-SheellbyT
1SheellbyTHello!
I was just reading your story when I noticed something familiar about the 'dream' part:
"You have to catch me!" A girl with long deep brown curly hair sang picking up her long pale green dress up running between the trees. Laughing lightly, she stopped and pressed her back against a tree a hand covering her mouth to control her heavy breathing.
She knew he wasn't far behind her.
"Elizabeth!" A young boy in his middle teens with blonde curly hair laughed as he stumbled through the forest, tripping over fallen branches and sticks. "This game is childish, is it not, come out please?" he stepped on another stick which let out loud crack and the girl hiding bit harder down on her lip trying not to erupt into a fit of giggles. He always was the worse at the chasing and catching game, he never had the patients for it like Elijah and Kol did. "Come now, Elizabeth! Your aunt and uncle must be worried about your wellbeing, no?"
Slowly peering out from behind the tree she saw his back facing back up the hill, waiting for a reply from her. She knew he was only trying to get her to make a noise so he could find her hiding place. He was a spoil sport sometimes. She shook her head holding in another giggle.
She smiled holding her breath and tried to make a quite dash towards the lake. "They do not care to what I do during the days as long as my chores are done silly, I have told you before!" Glancing over her shoulder, she saw his dazzling blue eyes on her and a smirk crawling onto his face before he broke off into a sprint after her.
Letting out a small yell, the young girl pulled at her dress gripping it in her hands running faster towards the river. Her feet dipped into the water right before his arms wrapped around her waist pulling her away from the river. He laughed and swung her around.
"Not fair!" She giggled. "You ran before you were allowed." She pouted as he placed her back onto her feet grinning down at her.
"Do not be like that." he stretched his back. "I am just the fastest person that you have ever met is all."
The young Elizabeth pointed a finger at him. "Watch what you say Niklaus, someone will come along someday and beat you at your own game."
He grabbed her finger and pushed it down to her side playfully. "You talk nonsense, Elizabeth. Are you trying to say that you will be faster than me someday?" Crossing her arms stubbornly she nodded. The young Niklaus laughed and shook his head. "When that day comes, I would like to be the first one to see."
"You shall, when I am running in front of you." And she gave him a smug smile before taking off into the woods again giggling as he chased her in circles.
And then I remembered, I wrote the almost exact SAME thing TWO months before your story was ACTUALLY POSTED:
"You have to catch me!" I sang and picked up my dress and ran between the trees. Laughing lightly, I stopped and pressed my back against a tree, my hand covering my mouth to control my breathing.
"Paulina!" he laughed as I heard him stumble through the forest. "This game is childish, is it not?" he stepped on a stick which let out loud crack and I bit harder down on my lip trying not to erupt into giggles. "Come now, Paulina! Your father must be worried about your well being."
Slowly peering out from behind my tree, I saw his back facing back up the hill, waiting for a reply. Holding my breath, I tried to make a quite dash towards the lake. "Father does not care about me, I have told you before." Glancing over my shoulder, I saw his blue eyes on me and a smirk crawling onto his face before he broke off into a run. Letting out a small yell, I pulled at my dress and gripped it in my hands and ran faster towards the river.
My feet dipped into the water before his arms wrapped around my waist. He laughed and swung me around. "Not fair!" I laughed. "You ran before you were allowed." he placed me back onto my feet and grinned down at me.
"Do not be like that." he stretched his back. "I am just the fastest person that you have ever met."
I pointed a finger at him. "Watch what you say Niklaus, someone will come along one day and beat you at your own game.
He grabbed my finger and pushed it down to my side. "You talk big, Paulina. Are you trying to say that you will be faster then me someday?" Crossing my arms, I nodded. Niklaus laughed and shook his head. "When that day comes, I would like to be the first one to see."
"You shall when I am running in front of you." and I gave him a smug smile.
Now now now deary, I'm not a fan of plagiarizing and it made me question how much of this story is ACTUALLY yours. I work ** my writings and I don't want people stealing them. At first, I thought "Oh maybe it's not the same" but when I looked closer it seemed like you only changed a few words WHICH IS STILL PLAGIARIZING. It's very hurtful and disrespective Please, delete MY work from your story.
-SheellbyT