for Change of Setting, Change of Mind10/6/2012 c2 MysteryConan
Oh well, this story had a happy end I guess. :)
I liked most of the things in this chapter, but not the fact that they just didnt care when they broke up. Especially kaito and shinichi. I mean shinichi loved heiji, but kaito still loved shinichi a bit, so i think that he shouldn't have be so cold to him when he broke up with him.
I liked how you pictured hakubas feelings,they felt real and i felt really sorry for him... But he finally got kaito. :)
And its a bit hard to picture kaito as a police officer, but it was funny. xD
Oh well, this story had a happy end I guess. :)
I liked most of the things in this chapter, but not the fact that they just didnt care when they broke up. Especially kaito and shinichi. I mean shinichi loved heiji, but kaito still loved shinichi a bit, so i think that he shouldn't have be so cold to him when he broke up with him.
I liked how you pictured hakubas feelings,they felt real and i felt really sorry for him... But he finally got kaito. :)
And its a bit hard to picture kaito as a police officer, but it was funny. xD
10/6/2012 c1 MysteryConan
Aww. Poor hakuba... T_T You always kinda torture him, with kaito not loving him and stuff, but its still good. I hope something will happan in the next chapter between those two... :)
Aww. Poor hakuba... T_T You always kinda torture him, with kaito not loving him and stuff, but its still good. I hope something will happan in the next chapter between those two... :)
7/20/2012 c2 
3Aniki-xvi
LOVE IT! I just ADORE it! I don't know how it went under my radar for so long!
3Aniki-xviLOVE IT! I just ADORE it! I don't know how it went under my radar for so long!
5/10/2012 c2 4Syrus07
wow it was surprising (in a really good way) I loved the way you had takeshi act! it was Fantabulous!
4Syrus07wow it was surprising (in a really good way) I loved the way you had takeshi act! it was Fantabulous!
5/10/2012 c2 16Athie Lestrade
Hah, Kaito's a police officer! Strange, it actually suits him. Great idea!
It's kind of weird reading all this HakuKai, but I'm really starting to like it. Though I still think KaiShin is more plausible in general.
I still really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to read more from you! :)
16Athie LestradeHah, Kaito's a police officer! Strange, it actually suits him. Great idea!
It's kind of weird reading all this HakuKai, but I'm really starting to like it. Though I still think KaiShin is more plausible in general.
I still really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to read more from you! :)