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5/16/2012 c1 4AlwaysABrandNewDay
Those were some interesting thoughts. :)

Incase you would want to fix it, there was some confusing word use, and you kept switching between first and third person limited. You also said 'off" instead of 'of' one time.

Caity :)

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