for Only Eighteen9/9/2012 c1 
15Kuri333
This is really good! Made me wish you'd elaborate a little longer, maybe a multichapter? Nah, just kidding. Wonderful though. Gave me ideas.
Cheers!
15Kuri333This is really good! Made me wish you'd elaborate a little longer, maybe a multichapter? Nah, just kidding. Wonderful though. Gave me ideas.
Cheers!
8/2/2012 c1 3RumbleRoar811
I love how you show that she never really bought into the prejudices, without making her seem like she was perfect from the time she was five.
3RumbleRoar811I love how you show that she never really bought into the prejudices, without making her seem like she was perfect from the time she was five.
6/1/2012 c1 25CierraLuv97
Awwwwww! Omg, I absolutely loved this. Your beginining was really nice and pretty (tied in with the stanza too) and innocent. And it provided really nice contrast to the Before Teddy Andromeda and the After Teddy Andromeda (that was my absolute favorite part). Your imagery was really, really excellent. And Cissy's one line was good too, although I don't know why I liked it so much. I'm just weird that way. But excellent job!
25CierraLuv97Awwwwww! Omg, I absolutely loved this. Your beginining was really nice and pretty (tied in with the stanza too) and innocent. And it provided really nice contrast to the Before Teddy Andromeda and the After Teddy Andromeda (that was my absolute favorite part). Your imagery was really, really excellent. And Cissy's one line was good too, although I don't know why I liked it so much. I'm just weird that way. But excellent job!
5/30/2012 c1 37rosemarried
Growing up in a pureblooded family, the same one that raised Bellatrix, it's amazing she wast brainwashed into believing the same pureblood nonsense Bellatrix did. Her dreams of a perfect wedding may have been shattered, but she gained something more valuable; love. And love is the one power Voldemort knows not. I hope Andromeda will be able to get over his death and doesn't linger in her sorrow, just holds onto that love. :) Good job and good luk in the competition.
Happy writing,
Remus Lupin/Blood and Moonshadows
37rosemarriedGrowing up in a pureblooded family, the same one that raised Bellatrix, it's amazing she wast brainwashed into believing the same pureblood nonsense Bellatrix did. Her dreams of a perfect wedding may have been shattered, but she gained something more valuable; love. And love is the one power Voldemort knows not. I hope Andromeda will be able to get over his death and doesn't linger in her sorrow, just holds onto that love. :) Good job and good luk in the competition.
Happy writing,
Remus Lupin/Blood and Moonshadows
5/13/2012 c1 61codependency
This was really beautifully written, and a great take on Tedromeda. I loved it!
61codependencyThis was really beautifully written, and a great take on Tedromeda. I loved it!
5/8/2012 c1 Guest
Loved the image of house elves carrying Bellatrix's train haha! Nice oneshot.
Loved the image of house elves carrying Bellatrix's train haha! Nice oneshot.