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6/23/2012 c10 ANONYMOUS
I LIKE IT. I'D LIKE IT MORE IF YOU UPDATED DAILY! ;)
6/6/2012 c10 12ginkies
WOW! Dude I am so in love with this story the more I read it! I love your OC Claire! I love how she reacts, how she isinsecure but funny! I love her interactions with Nate too XD

Loved the Avengers comment too and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with her and Deeks! Update soon pretty, pretty, pretty please?
6/3/2012 c10 Mary4Angelus
LOL

I love your fic! like you said, it's pratically illegal to have DeekOC fic, but it's worth it. :)

can't wait to read the new chapter about their date or is it just two-friends-going-out-together kind of date?

Well, I'll be sure to keep an eye out for an update.
5/28/2012 c10 8bookworm125
Yay! I finally had time to read! Actually, I should really be in bed right now, but I chose to read the chapter instead lol, nbd. I really liked this chapter, especially how there was some claire/deeks stuff going on. I think it's cute/funny how she seems to be drivinghim to work every day now and I love the banter that goes on between them. I absolutley loved how she was hiding from Nate under her desk, that was pretty amussing.And I liked the avengers stuff at the end too.

Really loved the chapter and I'm glad I finally got to read it! And I SO would not object to another chapter this week, since I don't work this week and would totally actually have time to read it! lol, can't wait for hte next update
5/25/2012 c10 1lanteaddicted
love the chapter
5/21/2012 c9 12ginkies
Loved the last two chapters! I like how she didn't like Callen to begin with, and with everyone and their mothers nagging her, she finally started to warm to him a little. I love Claire's relationship with Eric, reminds me of myself and my best friend. It's like reading about myself with that bit D

I truly love this story and can't wait to read more!
5/19/2012 c9 8bookworm125
I absolutely loved reading two chapters in one night! But that's what happens when I don't have time to read. Anyway, I really liked this chapter too. I love the relationship between Claire and Eric, it's so fun and awesome! And I love the way shes been acting around Callen. I really like that she doesn't instantly like him or anything. It's funny to watch them interact. I think seeing a bit more between the two of them would be cool. Also, I think her and Deeks need to have some parts together, because even Callen can see that there is something going on there. And I really liked when Claire was talking to Nate and Nate didn't put up with any crap, that was good.

AND absolutely loved the scene at the end with Claire and Callen, it was nice to see a little bit of a peace offering.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon!
5/19/2012 c8 bookworm125
I finally got to read this chapter! I've been trying and trying for the past few days, but life keeps seeming to get in the way. But now that I finally got to read it I loved it! I really enjoyed her reaction to Callen, and I can see her not letting it go any time soon. I feel like the attitude is going to stick around for a while and i can see her and Callen getting into it a couple of times. Great chapter! Gonna go read 9 now!
5/19/2012 c9 JasmineChyanne
love this story love Eric/Claire's friendship and how Deeks/Claire are with each-other good chapter.
5/19/2012 c9 1lanteaddicted
love the chapter
5/18/2012 c8 lanteaddicted
love the chapter
5/18/2012 c8 6SunnyCitrus10
So are you fully committed to a Deeks and Claire paring? I think Claire and Callen could go a long way unless you are a CaKe shipper. Anyway, I liked seeing Claire and Eric's interactions too.
5/18/2012 c7 12ginkies
Wow I loved these two new chapters made me laugh so much! Hope you update soon!
5/17/2012 c7 8bookworm125
Yay! Two updates in one day! Love it! great chapter, loved the closeness between claire and deeks! I always love that. Cant wait for more!
5/17/2012 c7 1lanteaddicted
great chapter
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