for Mirror, Mirror7/15/2012 c1 
4accioyourheart
Oh goodness, this was amazing. I really, really enjoyed this, and felt emotionally drained when it ended. It was beautifully written, with it's transitions going back and forth from the past and from the present. You kept them all in character, and you made Asami the character I believe her to be. At least in the sense that she has lost and she is strong, and she is kind, and just a wonderful character. You have done a fantastic job at bringing out her character, and telling the story.
4accioyourheartOh goodness, this was amazing. I really, really enjoyed this, and felt emotionally drained when it ended. It was beautifully written, with it's transitions going back and forth from the past and from the present. You kept them all in character, and you made Asami the character I believe her to be. At least in the sense that she has lost and she is strong, and she is kind, and just a wonderful character. You have done a fantastic job at bringing out her character, and telling the story.
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
Beautiful, the writing was very elegant and really got Asami's feelings across.
Beautiful, the writing was very elegant and really got Asami's feelings across.
6/28/2012 c1 14Buddy Williams
Concept: 10/10
Characterization: 10/10
Voice and Style: 10/10
Your worries about anyone being OOC are unfounded; I'd argue your version of Asami is more IC than Bryke's at this point. Excellent, excellent fic, looking forward to reading your other work.
14Buddy WilliamsConcept: 10/10
Characterization: 10/10
Voice and Style: 10/10
Your worries about anyone being OOC are unfounded; I'd argue your version of Asami is more IC than Bryke's at this point. Excellent, excellent fic, looking forward to reading your other work.
6/14/2012 c1 Jess
Just beautiful, beautiful. I love how you described Asami on the inside, and on the outside. I really enjoyed this.
You have a gift for writing.
Just beautiful, beautiful. I love how you described Asami on the inside, and on the outside. I really enjoyed this.
You have a gift for writing.
6/9/2012 c1 52erikai8
I love this. I absolutely love this.
The background you gave asami makes her a such a deep and complex character and that's what she needs in comparison to her seemingly perfect surface.
This was a wonderful read! I just had to find something to save my asami feels after watching that latest episode ;w;
52erikai8I love this. I absolutely love this.
The background you gave asami makes her a such a deep and complex character and that's what she needs in comparison to her seemingly perfect surface.
This was a wonderful read! I just had to find something to save my asami feels after watching that latest episode ;w;
5/24/2012 c1 7NinjaxSketcheartx
Y'know considering that she is filthy rich and all, she must have a sad background. Now, I was thinking that she was a spoiled, party girl but this seems to have changed my mind.
I really admire your writing. Keep at it! D
7NinjaxSketcheartxY'know considering that she is filthy rich and all, she must have a sad background. Now, I was thinking that she was a spoiled, party girl but this seems to have changed my mind.
I really admire your writing. Keep at it! D
5/23/2012 c1 PrincessLazyPants
I literally had goosebumps while reading this. It was terrific, and wonderful but so sad at the same time. With your writing, I could easily sympathize for Asami. I loved this. :)
I literally had goosebumps while reading this. It was terrific, and wonderful but so sad at the same time. With your writing, I could easily sympathize for Asami. I loved this. :)
5/12/2012 c1 mmkay
Wonderful story! I wish that Asami would get more screen time, I would love to see her character develop beyond "Mako's rich girlfriend". Love your characterization of her here. Nicely done!
Wonderful story! I wish that Asami would get more screen time, I would love to see her character develop beyond "Mako's rich girlfriend". Love your characterization of her here. Nicely done!
5/10/2012 c1 Anonnie Mouse
I liked ur fic. I think your Asami is awesome, I don't really like her in canon, she's such a flat character. But you gave her some depth and personality, even if it was angsty
I liked ur fic. I think your Asami is awesome, I don't really like her in canon, she's such a flat character. But you gave her some depth and personality, even if it was angsty
5/10/2012 c1 4xXFireRoseXx
Wow, this was great! Honestly. You really developed Asami as a character in here, and this piece just left me feeling melancholy.
4xXFireRoseXxWow, this was great! Honestly. You really developed Asami as a character in here, and this piece just left me feeling melancholy.