for The Selfless Fools11/4/2012 c5 
1purplepam
Ah..You know what they say...Less is more..I really don't mind the length of your chapters but it is kinda annoying and frustrating that the chapter is so short and we have to wait for so long to read the rest...don't worry about reviews because as you keep writing you get more 't feel down if get few reviews..you and your readers know your story is really good and even if we are sometimes too lazy to leave a review,we do read your story...Did i mention that i really like your writing style? Anyway update soon..i really want to know what happens..
1purplepamAh..You know what they say...Less is more..I really don't mind the length of your chapters but it is kinda annoying and frustrating that the chapter is so short and we have to wait for so long to read the rest...don't worry about reviews because as you keep writing you get more 't feel down if get few reviews..you and your readers know your story is really good and even if we are sometimes too lazy to leave a review,we do read your story...Did i mention that i really like your writing style? Anyway update soon..i really want to know what happens..
5/19/2012 c4 nicki
Really interested in what's going on with rukia! I loved the first interaction between ichiruki, isn't ichigo just taken with her. Glad you went for a longer chapter, keep it up! :)
Really interested in what's going on with rukia! I loved the first interaction between ichiruki, isn't ichigo just taken with her. Glad you went for a longer chapter, keep it up! :)
5/17/2012 c4 BleachFan
DoydleLlama, I love the concept of your fic! I definitely look forward to the rest of the story. I can't wait to see how Rukia's and Ichigo's relationship actually begins and goes from there. I love your writing style. However, I do wish that your chapters were a bit longer in length, but that's really all up to you. Keep up the amazing work! ;)
DoydleLlama, I love the concept of your fic! I definitely look forward to the rest of the story. I can't wait to see how Rukia's and Ichigo's relationship actually begins and goes from there. I love your writing style. However, I do wish that your chapters were a bit longer in length, but that's really all up to you. Keep up the amazing work! ;)
5/16/2012 c3 nicki
The plot is very interesting, and your writing's pretty good, but you should definitely aim for longer chapters. 1000 words at least, here good stories usually have even longer chapters. If you don't have anything yet, then wait til you've developed more and release it altogether - it'd difficult to review 500words. That said, I am enjoying ichigo's character, and I'm looking forward to rukia's introduction. The point of view is fine, it can be told by the omnipresent narrator. Hopefully you'll consider a longer chapter 4 :)
The plot is very interesting, and your writing's pretty good, but you should definitely aim for longer chapters. 1000 words at least, here good stories usually have even longer chapters. If you don't have anything yet, then wait til you've developed more and release it altogether - it'd difficult to review 500words. That said, I am enjoying ichigo's character, and I'm looking forward to rukia's introduction. The point of view is fine, it can be told by the omnipresent narrator. Hopefully you'll consider a longer chapter 4 :)
5/13/2012 c2 Lenuca
Very interesting beginning. I hope the "kid" sitting with Renji will be Rukia ;)
Please, update as soon as possible
Very interesting beginning. I hope the "kid" sitting with Renji will be Rukia ;)
Please, update as soon as possible
5/10/2012 c1 RimzthenonforgiveR
I won't lie, this story has my interest. Looking forward to the next update.
RiMI~
I won't lie, this story has my interest. Looking forward to the next update.
RiMI~