for Less Than Perfect5/19/2012 c1 
11mimosa eyes
Ah, hinty hints. May I just say that indeed, your dialogue here is in-character (assuming I'm a good enough judge of that). I like such snippets. This one in particular was especially nice, because even though it's a new situation we've never seen the characters in before, in-canon, you managed to keep the dynamic between Wally and Artemis convincing and realistic. I like the casualness of it all, the way they're so comfortable with each other's jibes.
For the record? I freaking miss them too. I'll probably steal off after this to write guiltless Spitfire fluff.
On another note: YOU LIKE THRIVING IVORY. 'Like pretty girls need cowboys / I need you here tonight'? 'We're gonna make it if it takes all night'? AND SNOW PATROL: 'show me a garden that's bursting into life'. AND COLDPLAY (Fix You). Plenty other examples of our similar musical preferences, but AGGGH. Continue being asterous, and good day to you.
11mimosa eyesAh, hinty hints. May I just say that indeed, your dialogue here is in-character (assuming I'm a good enough judge of that). I like such snippets. This one in particular was especially nice, because even though it's a new situation we've never seen the characters in before, in-canon, you managed to keep the dynamic between Wally and Artemis convincing and realistic. I like the casualness of it all, the way they're so comfortable with each other's jibes.
For the record? I freaking miss them too. I'll probably steal off after this to write guiltless Spitfire fluff.
On another note: YOU LIKE THRIVING IVORY. 'Like pretty girls need cowboys / I need you here tonight'? 'We're gonna make it if it takes all night'? AND SNOW PATROL: 'show me a garden that's bursting into life'. AND COLDPLAY (Fix You). Plenty other examples of our similar musical preferences, but AGGGH. Continue being asterous, and good day to you.
5/12/2012 c1 54Starlightlovesya123
Gahaha, I love the imagery of this. Wally and Artemis, rolling over and over on a couch, surrounded by pizzas and junk drawers full of menus. SUCH a wonderful headcanon. And well-written too. The way you phrased it made it much less boring than it might have been.
And agh! Can we fangirl out about today's episode, PLEASE?
54Starlightlovesya123Gahaha, I love the imagery of this. Wally and Artemis, rolling over and over on a couch, surrounded by pizzas and junk drawers full of menus. SUCH a wonderful headcanon. And well-written too. The way you phrased it made it much less boring than it might have been.
And agh! Can we fangirl out about today's episode, PLEASE?
5/12/2012 c1 22bluepianos
What the heck, the 'Review this Story' button suddenly became larger, thicker, and a lot bluer. I LIKE IT.
And you didn't need to know that.
This was so freaking adorable. Hahaha, perfect Wally makes an imperfect Artemis when it comes to the rules of a relationship and I love that. He's the more romantic one and she's the badass. I love it I love it I love it.
22bluepianosWhat the heck, the 'Review this Story' button suddenly became larger, thicker, and a lot bluer. I LIKE IT.
And you didn't need to know that.
This was so freaking adorable. Hahaha, perfect Wally makes an imperfect Artemis when it comes to the rules of a relationship and I love that. He's the more romantic one and she's the badass. I love it I love it I love it.