for Is Love Enough, Dealing with the Past, part 212/30/2012 c16 Christine1234
So I'm thrilled that Johnny and juli FINALLY got back together after so many conflicted situations but I knew it was too good to be true! I love drama but damn, these two have gone through so much already and now this damn car accident has to happen. It would be so unfortunate if she had another miscarriage and god I hope she's alright. Again, this story was amazing and I'm really interested to see what happens next in this series!
So I'm thrilled that Johnny and juli FINALLY got back together after so many conflicted situations but I knew it was too good to be true! I love drama but damn, these two have gone through so much already and now this damn car accident has to happen. It would be so unfortunate if she had another miscarriage and god I hope she's alright. Again, this story was amazing and I'm really interested to see what happens next in this series!
5/24/2012 c16 kathyb9760
Well THAT'S just mean! LOL J/K
That's very sad, and I hope she is still alive w/ the baby inside, but it doesn't sound like it's gonna happen that way. Poor Johnny. It sounds like within a period of just a few hours he going to go from the highest of highs on Cloud 999, to the lowest of lows. I hope Roy will be around to help him put his heart back together. Sounds like it's gonna be sad!
PLEASE hurry w/ the next story!
Well THAT'S just mean! LOL J/K
That's very sad, and I hope she is still alive w/ the baby inside, but it doesn't sound like it's gonna happen that way. Poor Johnny. It sounds like within a period of just a few hours he going to go from the highest of highs on Cloud 999, to the lowest of lows. I hope Roy will be around to help him put his heart back together. Sounds like it's gonna be sad!
PLEASE hurry w/ the next story!
5/22/2012 c14 jerseybelle
I'm glad Johnny's plan worked out...so far. Good three chapters. I'll admit J/J were making me feel really frustrated there for a while. And Bob's a really nice guy here.
I'm glad Johnny's plan worked out...so far. Good three chapters. I'll admit J/J were making me feel really frustrated there for a while. And Bob's a really nice guy here.
5/17/2012 c9 jerseybelle
I think you captured the feelings quite well. It was a short chapter, but you included all the important stuff. Good job.
I think you captured the feelings quite well. It was a short chapter, but you included all the important stuff. Good job.
5/17/2012 c8 
5Missionary Writer
Sweet! My sister loves the rattlesnake episode! I can't wait to see how it plays out in words! Keep it up!
5Missionary WriterSweet! My sister loves the rattlesnake episode! I can't wait to see how it plays out in words! Keep it up!
5/17/2012 c8 jerseybelle
Ooh, the snake bite. One of my favorite episodes. Enjoying this story a lot.
Ooh, the snake bite. One of my favorite episodes. Enjoying this story a lot.
5/11/2012 c6 Missionary Writer
You're killin' me! I love mystery and suspenseful stuff, but this is so suspenseful I'm not sure if I can hang on until the next chapter! I've been wondering like crazy what happens to Johnny and Julianna.
P.s. Glad to see another little-more-talkative Mike Stoker story!
You're killin' me! I love mystery and suspenseful stuff, but this is so suspenseful I'm not sure if I can hang on until the next chapter! I've been wondering like crazy what happens to Johnny and Julianna.
P.s. Glad to see another little-more-talkative Mike Stoker story!
5/11/2012 c6 Johnnysgurl51
Your stories are nice, but Julianna is definitely a mary-sue from start to finish. Not that that's a bad thing, some people do enjoy such stories, but I guess for me the stretch is having two separate story series with her in it, both series with very different plots, wouldn't it have just been easier to create a new female OC for one series? Because it's kind of a jolt for the reader to read two separate series with the same character in them, but with different plots. Plus, you're not letting the reader get caught up on the story when you post several chapters a day, most intelligent writers know to post maybe every other day or once a week so that readers don't get bogged down in trying to keep up with constant updates. But other than that, your writing isn't too bad at all.
Vee
Your stories are nice, but Julianna is definitely a mary-sue from start to finish. Not that that's a bad thing, some people do enjoy such stories, but I guess for me the stretch is having two separate story series with her in it, both series with very different plots, wouldn't it have just been easier to create a new female OC for one series? Because it's kind of a jolt for the reader to read two separate series with the same character in them, but with different plots. Plus, you're not letting the reader get caught up on the story when you post several chapters a day, most intelligent writers know to post maybe every other day or once a week so that readers don't get bogged down in trying to keep up with constant updates. But other than that, your writing isn't too bad at all.
Vee