for Muppet Treasure Planet6/2/2012 c19 
55JJB88
Awsome.
Loved it.
Here is a idea:
We go to the party at Jim's new Inn and we see JJ and Sabrina dancing.
"Oh man Sabrina this is one heck of a party." JJ said.
"I know." Sabrina said. "I am glad we are safe."
They then see Jim by the window and go to him.
55JJB88Awsome.
Loved it.
Here is a idea:
We go to the party at Jim's new Inn and we see JJ and Sabrina dancing.
"Oh man Sabrina this is one heck of a party." JJ said.
"I know." Sabrina said. "I am glad we are safe."
They then see Jim by the window and go to him.
6/2/2012 c19 VISION-KING
Excellent here Jus.
The action was great, especially the little Power Ranger scenery, as the action displayed here really brings it to life, even making some of us remember the old days.
Another idea you can go for, is Rizzo stating that if they lost any of the rat tourist, or they got killed, he be sued for everything he's worth, including the fast bucks he made in pulling of a tourist cruise.
Here's an idea, from the Muppet Treasure Island scene, where Long John was in a cage, when he played around until he felt something that lead to his cell's keys, used it to escape. So, what if during Long John, he went missing from the gang, ends up seeing Clueless Morgan, Mad Monty and Polly Lobster in a cage, and they perform his escape part since Silver can't in this space story.
Example:
At this moment, the other pirates were still tied up for their mutiny, but only Clueless Morgon, Mad Monty & Polly Lobster were in a cage far from their mutiny mates.
"Arrrh, this is it boys, once we get back, they'll throw the book at us?" Polly Lobster signs in grieving for their moment.
"Hugh, but why would they want us to read?" Clueless Morgon responded confused for a moment now?
"Shut it, the clueless fool?" Mad Monty snapped off to remark near the muppet goat before signing himself. "Arrrugh, maybe we should rethink our line of work?" Mad Monty expressed in sorrow, starting to think this might not be the life for them?
"Yeah, if we ever get outta this alive, I'll change my ways! I'll never be an evil pirate again!" Polly Lobster proclaimed against his bars before stopping from realizing something. "Well, okay a pirate, but more like how Silver, JJ & Sabrina are, good pirates." The muppet could be a pirate, only no evil, just living the fun & excitement of the sea of space.
"Wow, that sounds nice?" Clueless Morgon smiled stupidly at the idea.
"Well keep dreaming, we ain't getting out of here that easily?" Mad Monty dryly remarked that such a dream won't come true where they be going.
"Well, I can keep myself busy with these?" Clueless Morgon spoke from bringing out something to swirl around his fingers that were...keys?
"Wait! Where you get those keys?" Polly Lobster yelped in surprise, those look like the keys to their cage, how they appear here with the muppet holding them?
"That Fender bot was playing with them before they slipped and I caught them when everyone else was fleeing the planet?" Clueless Morgon explain that from the chaos of the doomed planet, Fender musta played with the keys, but lost them without realizing it which came into his possession. "He did it like this?" The goat was continuing to play the swirling of the keys.
"Wait! Don't do that, we..." Mad Monty shouted to stop the act, but then the dimwitted muppet didn't see he threw the keys off and away from their cage. "Nice work, there goes our means to escape!" The muppet snapped at this clueless half-wit for throwing their chances of escape away.
"Oops?" Clueless Morgon responded slow in seeing he made a mistake.
"So much for living the second chance in life? Arrugh!" Polly Lobster signed in depression, that's it, these three are done for now?
"You boys looking for a better life?" A voice spoke in offering a deal to the three. The muppets in the cage looked up to see that the voice belonged to...Lohn John Silver, their captain who appeared from the shadows.
"Silver!" The trio muppet pirates exclaimed, surprised to see their captain alive.
"I'll set you three free, if...you keep to your words to change your ways." Long John spoke that he'll free these three, but only if they truly, change their ways.
"Oh-oh, we promise! We promise!" Polly Lobster nodded without hesitation, followed by muffled happy noises from Mad Monty & Clueless Morgon in agreement to that term.
"And two, if you like to be pirates, but of the good variety, I'll gladly be your captain...so long as you never plan a mutiny on my shoulder." Long John offered that he'll keep these guys as his crew, so that he can watch them and perhaps be better of themselves then the dirty cutthroats they thought of being.
"Yes! Yes! We'll do it!" Polly Lobster nodded quickly in response, followed buy the other two's muffle and cheery sounding voices in agreeing to follow along.
"And thirdly...any of the picked up treasure you managed to swipe, will be split down." Long John stated his final request of these three, to bring up all their treasure they got from Flint's stash to be piled up for him to split down.
"WHAT?" The trio pirates yelped in shock, they have to give up their share of the collected treasure they risk to steal before the planet pulled off a big bang?
"Arrrugh, you be thinking of keeping more to ye self?" Mad Monty snarled in thinking this was a trick, to make them have less booty then before?
"No, so that we each be given fair shares." Long John assured the old, or former cutthroat pirate of his good reasons. "After all, a little of that stuff could buy us the cost for a whole town or even a planet." A lot of that made sense to the trapped pirates, as they decided to obey their captain's request. "And of course, we'll need to buy another ship so that we can sail freely. After, we load up supplies, the treasure you scavenger up, and leave before anyone notices anything out of the blue?" Mr. Silver stated lastly in what they'll also have to do, escape from here while no one notices where he is or even cares while just trying to get back home.
"Wow, that's really nice of you to think about us like that?" Clueless Morgon exclaimed that what Silver was doing was...really thoughtful, and honost?
"Yeah captain, you use to be mean & fearful to control us, what brought this soft side to be more nicer to scumbags like us?" Polly Lobster asked in feeling rather touched, even Mad Monty nodded with a solid face that he too, felt a little warmth in his cold blooded heart.
"Well, let's just say that when you go soft...you see things from a different perspective?" Long John Silver exclaimed with a hidden smile on his face. Truth be, that he never would have become this if...he hadn't meant Jim & his crazy sailing buddies, they ended up changing the cutthroat pirate to learn to care for someone other then himself.
Soon the pirate had put the keys into the cage, and unlocked it, freeing Mad Monty, Clueless Morgon, and Polly Lobster who climbed up top on his captain's shoulder.
"Now get ready boys, we're sailing outta here...to freedom!" Long John issued out his order with being for the first time, more pride in himself.
"Aye-aye!" Mad Monty, Clueless Morgon & Polly Lobster responded with a salute before this small group lead by the notorious, or should be, former notorious captain: Long John Silver, quickly and quietly moved out from where they were. All in planning to take a longboat below the ship, so that none would see them leaving with some supplies, and a bit of treasure too boot.
Well there you go, hope this little scene makes your story all the more exciting Jus. Use it however you choose, you've seen the film, so you'll know just where to store this clip to make it interesting. If not, then hey, that's your call to make, and I have no problem with that.
Until the next time, good luck and I'll be hoping to see how well the final chapter turns out. Also, what else you got stored to present on your site? A new story, it's anyone's guess? So, good luck, matey!
Excellent here Jus.
The action was great, especially the little Power Ranger scenery, as the action displayed here really brings it to life, even making some of us remember the old days.
Another idea you can go for, is Rizzo stating that if they lost any of the rat tourist, or they got killed, he be sued for everything he's worth, including the fast bucks he made in pulling of a tourist cruise.
Here's an idea, from the Muppet Treasure Island scene, where Long John was in a cage, when he played around until he felt something that lead to his cell's keys, used it to escape. So, what if during Long John, he went missing from the gang, ends up seeing Clueless Morgan, Mad Monty and Polly Lobster in a cage, and they perform his escape part since Silver can't in this space story.
Example:
At this moment, the other pirates were still tied up for their mutiny, but only Clueless Morgon, Mad Monty & Polly Lobster were in a cage far from their mutiny mates.
"Arrrh, this is it boys, once we get back, they'll throw the book at us?" Polly Lobster signs in grieving for their moment.
"Hugh, but why would they want us to read?" Clueless Morgon responded confused for a moment now?
"Shut it, the clueless fool?" Mad Monty snapped off to remark near the muppet goat before signing himself. "Arrrugh, maybe we should rethink our line of work?" Mad Monty expressed in sorrow, starting to think this might not be the life for them?
"Yeah, if we ever get outta this alive, I'll change my ways! I'll never be an evil pirate again!" Polly Lobster proclaimed against his bars before stopping from realizing something. "Well, okay a pirate, but more like how Silver, JJ & Sabrina are, good pirates." The muppet could be a pirate, only no evil, just living the fun & excitement of the sea of space.
"Wow, that sounds nice?" Clueless Morgon smiled stupidly at the idea.
"Well keep dreaming, we ain't getting out of here that easily?" Mad Monty dryly remarked that such a dream won't come true where they be going.
"Well, I can keep myself busy with these?" Clueless Morgon spoke from bringing out something to swirl around his fingers that were...keys?
"Wait! Where you get those keys?" Polly Lobster yelped in surprise, those look like the keys to their cage, how they appear here with the muppet holding them?
"That Fender bot was playing with them before they slipped and I caught them when everyone else was fleeing the planet?" Clueless Morgon explain that from the chaos of the doomed planet, Fender musta played with the keys, but lost them without realizing it which came into his possession. "He did it like this?" The goat was continuing to play the swirling of the keys.
"Wait! Don't do that, we..." Mad Monty shouted to stop the act, but then the dimwitted muppet didn't see he threw the keys off and away from their cage. "Nice work, there goes our means to escape!" The muppet snapped at this clueless half-wit for throwing their chances of escape away.
"Oops?" Clueless Morgon responded slow in seeing he made a mistake.
"So much for living the second chance in life? Arrugh!" Polly Lobster signed in depression, that's it, these three are done for now?
"You boys looking for a better life?" A voice spoke in offering a deal to the three. The muppets in the cage looked up to see that the voice belonged to...Lohn John Silver, their captain who appeared from the shadows.
"Silver!" The trio muppet pirates exclaimed, surprised to see their captain alive.
"I'll set you three free, if...you keep to your words to change your ways." Long John spoke that he'll free these three, but only if they truly, change their ways.
"Oh-oh, we promise! We promise!" Polly Lobster nodded without hesitation, followed by muffled happy noises from Mad Monty & Clueless Morgon in agreement to that term.
"And two, if you like to be pirates, but of the good variety, I'll gladly be your captain...so long as you never plan a mutiny on my shoulder." Long John offered that he'll keep these guys as his crew, so that he can watch them and perhaps be better of themselves then the dirty cutthroats they thought of being.
"Yes! Yes! We'll do it!" Polly Lobster nodded quickly in response, followed buy the other two's muffle and cheery sounding voices in agreeing to follow along.
"And thirdly...any of the picked up treasure you managed to swipe, will be split down." Long John stated his final request of these three, to bring up all their treasure they got from Flint's stash to be piled up for him to split down.
"WHAT?" The trio pirates yelped in shock, they have to give up their share of the collected treasure they risk to steal before the planet pulled off a big bang?
"Arrrugh, you be thinking of keeping more to ye self?" Mad Monty snarled in thinking this was a trick, to make them have less booty then before?
"No, so that we each be given fair shares." Long John assured the old, or former cutthroat pirate of his good reasons. "After all, a little of that stuff could buy us the cost for a whole town or even a planet." A lot of that made sense to the trapped pirates, as they decided to obey their captain's request. "And of course, we'll need to buy another ship so that we can sail freely. After, we load up supplies, the treasure you scavenger up, and leave before anyone notices anything out of the blue?" Mr. Silver stated lastly in what they'll also have to do, escape from here while no one notices where he is or even cares while just trying to get back home.
"Wow, that's really nice of you to think about us like that?" Clueless Morgon exclaimed that what Silver was doing was...really thoughtful, and honost?
"Yeah captain, you use to be mean & fearful to control us, what brought this soft side to be more nicer to scumbags like us?" Polly Lobster asked in feeling rather touched, even Mad Monty nodded with a solid face that he too, felt a little warmth in his cold blooded heart.
"Well, let's just say that when you go soft...you see things from a different perspective?" Long John Silver exclaimed with a hidden smile on his face. Truth be, that he never would have become this if...he hadn't meant Jim & his crazy sailing buddies, they ended up changing the cutthroat pirate to learn to care for someone other then himself.
Soon the pirate had put the keys into the cage, and unlocked it, freeing Mad Monty, Clueless Morgon, and Polly Lobster who climbed up top on his captain's shoulder.
"Now get ready boys, we're sailing outta here...to freedom!" Long John issued out his order with being for the first time, more pride in himself.
"Aye-aye!" Mad Monty, Clueless Morgon & Polly Lobster responded with a salute before this small group lead by the notorious, or should be, former notorious captain: Long John Silver, quickly and quietly moved out from where they were. All in planning to take a longboat below the ship, so that none would see them leaving with some supplies, and a bit of treasure too boot.
Well there you go, hope this little scene makes your story all the more exciting Jus. Use it however you choose, you've seen the film, so you'll know just where to store this clip to make it interesting. If not, then hey, that's your call to make, and I have no problem with that.
Until the next time, good luck and I'll be hoping to see how well the final chapter turns out. Also, what else you got stored to present on your site? A new story, it's anyone's guess? So, good luck, matey!
5/31/2012 c18 VISION-KING
Hi Jus, show JJB88's review, and might have an idea to use it, sorta?
What if somewhere along the planet about to explode, JJ & Sabrina get seperated from the gang. Then, in a miracle, JJ finds the strength to change, getting him & Sabrina to...I don't know, break through the planet's metal surface if they fell down into it, etc.? It's a small idea to work with his and the part of what I gave you.
By the way, hope you're doing alright with the next chapter, if you needed any word descriptions of Zord to Megazord battles, my Kingdom Hearts fanmake has got just about it all.
Til next time we chat, good luck here. Oh, and when you do post your next chapter and need an idea for the happy ending. What if Kermit & Piggy's children were in the style look of the Muppet Babies?
Hint: And picture the three little piggies showing off their mother's karate moves when 'someone' says how cute they are, only to get kick, chop, or arm-thrust throw judo style to smack against the wall. That'll lead to a comedy part that them little piggies are strong, and that no big bad wolf should mess with them.
Well that's all, til the next chatter Jus!
Hi Jus, show JJB88's review, and might have an idea to use it, sorta?
What if somewhere along the planet about to explode, JJ & Sabrina get seperated from the gang. Then, in a miracle, JJ finds the strength to change, getting him & Sabrina to...I don't know, break through the planet's metal surface if they fell down into it, etc.? It's a small idea to work with his and the part of what I gave you.
By the way, hope you're doing alright with the next chapter, if you needed any word descriptions of Zord to Megazord battles, my Kingdom Hearts fanmake has got just about it all.
Til next time we chat, good luck here. Oh, and when you do post your next chapter and need an idea for the happy ending. What if Kermit & Piggy's children were in the style look of the Muppet Babies?
Hint: And picture the three little piggies showing off their mother's karate moves when 'someone' says how cute they are, only to get kick, chop, or arm-thrust throw judo style to smack against the wall. That'll lead to a comedy part that them little piggies are strong, and that no big bad wolf should mess with them.
Well that's all, til the next chatter Jus!
5/31/2012 c18 55JJB88
Awsome.
Loved it.
Here is a idea:
When everyone sees the planet about to explode they see something.
It is a robot dinosaur with a tail drill.
"GouJyuJin" A voice is heard.
Jim and everyone is shocked.
"OH NO A GIANT ROBOT DINOSAURE!" Sam screamed . "WE ARE DOOMED!"
However Jim sees Sabrina and smiles.
"No Sam that there is JJ." Jim said.
55JJB88Awsome.
Loved it.
Here is a idea:
When everyone sees the planet about to explode they see something.
It is a robot dinosaur with a tail drill.
"GouJyuJin" A voice is heard.
Jim and everyone is shocked.
"OH NO A GIANT ROBOT DINOSAURE!" Sam screamed . "WE ARE DOOMED!"
However Jim sees Sabrina and smiles.
"No Sam that there is JJ." Jim said.
5/31/2012 c18 35Skullgal94
Oh boy, now the planet's about to blow up, what Jim and the others do now? Great job and good luck!:)
35Skullgal94Oh boy, now the planet's about to blow up, what Jim and the others do now? Great job and good luck!:)
5/31/2012 c18 sonicfighter21354
I hope they get out of Treasure Planet before they get blown to kingdom come.
I hope they get out of Treasure Planet before they get blown to kingdom come.
5/31/2012 c18 VISION-KING
Nicely done here Jus.
And if you need any Zord or Megazord battle scenes or moves, heck, even the data, then just check it out on my Kingdom Hearts fanmake. If you've seen the chapters, you'll know where each and everyone from the first Power Rangers to the current knowledge scenes that have appeared so far. My place, is open to all and any that need PR related things they wanna use and know about.
But man, I can't wait for what comes next? I be surprised if those two muppets on the ship's hood-ornament make a joke from escaping the exploding planet.
Like so?
"Well this is a fine mess?"
"You're telling me?"
"I feel like I would lose my temper for whoever got us into this situation."
"Well I know who's got a bigger temper-tantrum to dish out?"
"And who would that be?"
"The whole planet, apparently?"
"Sure, a planet's rage is nothing compared to women?"
"Bwohohohoh!" They both laugh at their joke, even in this situation?
Well, you can sort this line out, if you find it suiting that is? Til next time, happy trails here Jus!
Nicely done here Jus.
And if you need any Zord or Megazord battle scenes or moves, heck, even the data, then just check it out on my Kingdom Hearts fanmake. If you've seen the chapters, you'll know where each and everyone from the first Power Rangers to the current knowledge scenes that have appeared so far. My place, is open to all and any that need PR related things they wanna use and know about.
But man, I can't wait for what comes next? I be surprised if those two muppets on the ship's hood-ornament make a joke from escaping the exploding planet.
Like so?
"Well this is a fine mess?"
"You're telling me?"
"I feel like I would lose my temper for whoever got us into this situation."
"Well I know who's got a bigger temper-tantrum to dish out?"
"And who would that be?"
"The whole planet, apparently?"
"Sure, a planet's rage is nothing compared to women?"
"Bwohohohoh!" They both laugh at their joke, even in this situation?
Well, you can sort this line out, if you find it suiting that is? Til next time, happy trails here Jus!
5/30/2012 c17 Neros Urameshi
They have made it to the treasure...only to trip an alarm for the booby trap!
Please continue!
They have made it to the treasure...only to trip an alarm for the booby trap!
Please continue!
5/29/2012 c17 Skullgal94
Wow, the group have found the treasure, but I got a feeling something is going to happen next. Great job and good luck!:)
Wow, the group have found the treasure, but I got a feeling something is going to happen next. Great job and good luck!:)
5/29/2012 c17 Billy Arratoon
Good song and chapter :)
The Knight Of Ponyville:
villains: Black Knight
Night Dragon and Bowser's Great Adventure:
FLying Dragon Race: (shortly after "Flying Mahyem")
Villains: Roclan and Lorcan Hyde
Diamond's Apology:
Of Scooters and Chickens:
Villains:
And for "Big Brother Team-Up"
Song: "Too Diferent To Ever Be Pals" (Family Guy song; sung by Lorcan and Shining)
And for Lorcan's Wrath:
songs: "Be Prepared" (sung by the Brotherhood and Lorcan; with different lryics)
1. (after the "duites on broad" line)
Lorcan: Soon the pony race will die
And I will rule everything
But from me you must learn to defend
For i will smite defying beings
2. And at the end of the song:
"A Decade of exile is simply why I'll
Avenge my dear father and go even
Further with his oh, birllaint plan
Yes, my spells and ambitions are bared"
If not, I understand :)
Good song and chapter :)
The Knight Of Ponyville:
villains: Black Knight
Night Dragon and Bowser's Great Adventure:
FLying Dragon Race: (shortly after "Flying Mahyem")
Villains: Roclan and Lorcan Hyde
Diamond's Apology:
Of Scooters and Chickens:
Villains:
And for "Big Brother Team-Up"
Song: "Too Diferent To Ever Be Pals" (Family Guy song; sung by Lorcan and Shining)
And for Lorcan's Wrath:
songs: "Be Prepared" (sung by the Brotherhood and Lorcan; with different lryics)
1. (after the "duites on broad" line)
Lorcan: Soon the pony race will die
And I will rule everything
But from me you must learn to defend
For i will smite defying beings
2. And at the end of the song:
"A Decade of exile is simply why I'll
Avenge my dear father and go even
Further with his oh, birllaint plan
Yes, my spells and ambitions are bared"
If not, I understand :)
5/29/2012 c17 VISION-KING
Nicely done Jus, and here's a little something for the flashy end for the Grievous scene. (Note: if you want to add the Rescue Megazord for the final end to the villain guarding the treasure room, that's good. If not, then hey, you can use a different Megazord to receive the big weaponry to make it just as nice, right?)
Suddenly at that moment, some of the rat tourest followed the groups to the secret treasure room, saw the big fight and were just thinking it was apart of the show?
"Oh honey, this looks fantastic, this needs some music though?" The rat wife spoke to her husband from loving this, but wanted something extra for this scenery.
"Okay honey, give me a sec.? Hey Franky, give this scene the music works, would ya?" The rat husband responded to his wife before shouting next to him a rat named Franky to help a rat out or something like that.
"You gotta here's one!" The rat named Franky responded, as he brought out a boom-box radio. The he pressed a button, as it started to play "You Are The Power Team" By Super Power, but skipped to the last parts of the song for this final outcome scene. "Okay, let's enjoy the show!" The song began to play the long extended version again, but this time, for the grand final.
(Note: Make the BOLD & Italian style for the words covered that are the singing chorus group, if you please)
(AH...)
Back at battle where the appears of Artillatron was, JJ, as the (Rescue Megazord) lift it's arms up, then received the Cannons from Artillatron as it's main weapons.
"Time I ended this!" JJ shouted off in preparing for the final attack.
(AH...)
The Gatling Cannon was in the (Rescue Megazord's) right hand and the Flamethrower in it's left hand.
"Oh wow, this is gonna be the most dangerous stunt EVER!" Gonzo cheered for JJ transformed to let that villain have what's coming.
(AH...)
"Artillery Power Now!" JJ said off for the final attack to be unleashed. "BOOMhhh! BOOM-BOOM-BOMhhhh!" Then the (Rescue Megazord) fire both the Flamethrower and Gatling Cannon's at Grievous's direction.
(OH...)
It fire energy bullets and a giant fireball were coming right at Grievous piloting his own giant bot. "Woosssh! Fuuusshh!" They were soon making contact with the Metallosaurus, explosions, sparks, everything, taking in so much damage even he couldn't take it.
(AH-OH...)
"KABOOM-KABOOM! KABOOMhhh!" Grievous's giant robot took it all, unabling himself to defend in the slightest chances of surveying this while groaning his moanful cries of pain of each attack that exploded on contact with him. "OH-No! THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE! AURGH!" As he held his hands above his head, he felt more explosion happening all around him that distracted him just now. "KABOOM! KABOOM!" Instruments now playing at this part when the attack had ceased: "ARrruughhhh!" Grievous shouted out his final words, before the Metallosaurus dropped it's arms, and the body falling to the ground with a big explosion after that. "KA-BOOOMMMMhhhh!" That explosion sent many of the treasure scattering over the room, but it was clear that this security guard that wanted to kill the intruders, was defeated and down for the count.
"Now that's what I'm talking about." JJ said this after seeing he had won, as he lowered his arms a bit, knowing it had won the battle. Soon the track song had ended, with JJ now returning to his normal appearance.
"Hoagie, weega gotta get them big weapons, they pack a punch!" Stitch begged his partner for them to get JJ to give them such nice weapons.
"Well we can try, but after we handle something here?" Hoagie responded that it's a 'maybe' after handling one more thing?
"What's that?" Stitch asked before the shaking of the ground & falling treasure reminded the koala of their current situation. "Oh, the planet about to take us out with it?" Stitch responded in now recalling the danger they still have to deal with?
"Yep, that covers it?" Hoagie nodded in seeing his partner got the messenge.
"Then what do we do when it looks like we got only who knows how long left?" Stitch asked a random dumb question in how long they got til they go out with a planet size big bang?
"Panic and screaming is my guess?" Hoagie shrug off in thinking of what else can they do here now?
"Okay? AAAHHHHH, WERE GONNA DIE WITH THE TREASURE!" Stitch replied dryly before screaming at the top of his lungs.
"JJ, couldn't you transform into something to get us out of here?" Sabrina asked her boyfriend if he could try changing into another Megazord, something that could fly them to safety to avoid this planet's destruction...while thinking of saving little bit of the treasure as can be, but their lives come firstly?
"Sorry, that last battle took a lot of my strength, afraid I couldn't hold it long even if I wanted to?" JJ shrug off to that question, that battle really tired the poor guy out.
Then somewhere later on, you can use an idea in stating the thought of the future if there will be a Freelance Police Season 4 Game.
Hoagie noticed Stitch looking green, or more like he wasn't feeling well? "Stitch, you okay?"
"Ohhh, meega have a tummy ache?" Stitch responded in a quizzy response, but covered his mouth until... "BLaarrugh!" Yes, the koala threw up his cookies, in a way of speaking?
"Oh great, you just chucked up...nuggets made of gold?" Hoagie almost compalined, if he didn't see that the nuggets on the ground that Stitch threw up...WERE MADE OF GOLD?
"Yeah, meega found them in the treasure room, thought they look tasty?" Stitch responded in a small response, still feeling a bit sick from losing his meal?
"Well Stitch, looks like you just struck some gold nuggets, but not for eating I'm afraid to say." Hoagie explained with a smile that his partner struck gold while using it as a pun joke.
"Aww, meega would snap at that bad joke if meega weren't just recovering?" Stitch moans to groan that if he was better, he snap with a remark at Hoagie's jokes, but for now, he'll let it slide.
"You know, with these little gold nuggets, we might return back to our time to help fix up our office building?" Hoagie explained to his partner, as he took a bag, scooped the gold nuggets up in how they can use this.
"Do weega really fix place up like that?" Stitch asked now fully recovered to wonder if they fix their office with this?
"Can't say how, but until the next Sam & Max Freelance Police Season 4 Game comes out to explain how our office gets fixed up, then from the Season 3 version, it's still in ruins." Hoagie shrug off to explain that not even he knows what to do, but until then, might as well just say, they fixed their place up in their 'own' way of doing things, to avoid complications.
"Boy was that an adventure weega can't forget?" Stitch shook his head in just remembering that adventure. "But don't you think Jim or the others would need that?" The koala mentioned that maybe Jim & his friends need the cash more then they do?
"Normally yes, but it looks like everybody's happy with the loot of their spoils from our adventure to last for a good time." Hoagie explained to Stitch from looking around, seeing how the little treasure & friends in the bar have turn out to be, looks like Jim's group have earn some good respect and a legend of their own story to tell.
"Sweet, then let's take these nuggets to break the bad guy nuggets with! Heheehheh!" Stitch replied before a wicked smile appeared while laughing at the idea on how to beat up bad guys with their gold.
"As usual, you crack me up, little buddy." Hoagie shook his head with a smile, Stitch will always be Stitch even when they got a little riches, like they havn't before.
Well that's all from me, so good luck here Jus, it's gotta be a BIG ONE in the next story to come. Not to mention, what happens when Sweetums turns good, or that after they escaped death, some of the captured crew complains to say 'Hey wait! We may have survived, but we're going to jail?' which leads to frowns until one of them says this 'Well at least we're not dead?' to try bring up some positive news? And for whatever happens after, you can decide on the earlier reviews if you're thinking of using them or not? Like the one if Long John is going alone, or takes Mad Monty, Clueless Morgen and Polly Lobster so long as they behave, etc.? It's gonna be one of those things that we just can't wait to see what happens afterwards?
Til then, keep sailing on the adventure here!
Nicely done Jus, and here's a little something for the flashy end for the Grievous scene. (Note: if you want to add the Rescue Megazord for the final end to the villain guarding the treasure room, that's good. If not, then hey, you can use a different Megazord to receive the big weaponry to make it just as nice, right?)
Suddenly at that moment, some of the rat tourest followed the groups to the secret treasure room, saw the big fight and were just thinking it was apart of the show?
"Oh honey, this looks fantastic, this needs some music though?" The rat wife spoke to her husband from loving this, but wanted something extra for this scenery.
"Okay honey, give me a sec.? Hey Franky, give this scene the music works, would ya?" The rat husband responded to his wife before shouting next to him a rat named Franky to help a rat out or something like that.
"You gotta here's one!" The rat named Franky responded, as he brought out a boom-box radio. The he pressed a button, as it started to play "You Are The Power Team" By Super Power, but skipped to the last parts of the song for this final outcome scene. "Okay, let's enjoy the show!" The song began to play the long extended version again, but this time, for the grand final.
(Note: Make the BOLD & Italian style for the words covered that are the singing chorus group, if you please)
(AH...)
Back at battle where the appears of Artillatron was, JJ, as the (Rescue Megazord) lift it's arms up, then received the Cannons from Artillatron as it's main weapons.
"Time I ended this!" JJ shouted off in preparing for the final attack.
(AH...)
The Gatling Cannon was in the (Rescue Megazord's) right hand and the Flamethrower in it's left hand.
"Oh wow, this is gonna be the most dangerous stunt EVER!" Gonzo cheered for JJ transformed to let that villain have what's coming.
(AH...)
"Artillery Power Now!" JJ said off for the final attack to be unleashed. "BOOMhhh! BOOM-BOOM-BOMhhhh!" Then the (Rescue Megazord) fire both the Flamethrower and Gatling Cannon's at Grievous's direction.
(OH...)
It fire energy bullets and a giant fireball were coming right at Grievous piloting his own giant bot. "Woosssh! Fuuusshh!" They were soon making contact with the Metallosaurus, explosions, sparks, everything, taking in so much damage even he couldn't take it.
(AH-OH...)
"KABOOM-KABOOM! KABOOMhhh!" Grievous's giant robot took it all, unabling himself to defend in the slightest chances of surveying this while groaning his moanful cries of pain of each attack that exploded on contact with him. "OH-No! THIS IS NOT POSSIBLE! AURGH!" As he held his hands above his head, he felt more explosion happening all around him that distracted him just now. "KABOOM! KABOOM!" Instruments now playing at this part when the attack had ceased: "ARrruughhhh!" Grievous shouted out his final words, before the Metallosaurus dropped it's arms, and the body falling to the ground with a big explosion after that. "KA-BOOOMMMMhhhh!" That explosion sent many of the treasure scattering over the room, but it was clear that this security guard that wanted to kill the intruders, was defeated and down for the count.
"Now that's what I'm talking about." JJ said this after seeing he had won, as he lowered his arms a bit, knowing it had won the battle. Soon the track song had ended, with JJ now returning to his normal appearance.
"Hoagie, weega gotta get them big weapons, they pack a punch!" Stitch begged his partner for them to get JJ to give them such nice weapons.
"Well we can try, but after we handle something here?" Hoagie responded that it's a 'maybe' after handling one more thing?
"What's that?" Stitch asked before the shaking of the ground & falling treasure reminded the koala of their current situation. "Oh, the planet about to take us out with it?" Stitch responded in now recalling the danger they still have to deal with?
"Yep, that covers it?" Hoagie nodded in seeing his partner got the messenge.
"Then what do we do when it looks like we got only who knows how long left?" Stitch asked a random dumb question in how long they got til they go out with a planet size big bang?
"Panic and screaming is my guess?" Hoagie shrug off in thinking of what else can they do here now?
"Okay? AAAHHHHH, WERE GONNA DIE WITH THE TREASURE!" Stitch replied dryly before screaming at the top of his lungs.
"JJ, couldn't you transform into something to get us out of here?" Sabrina asked her boyfriend if he could try changing into another Megazord, something that could fly them to safety to avoid this planet's destruction...while thinking of saving little bit of the treasure as can be, but their lives come firstly?
"Sorry, that last battle took a lot of my strength, afraid I couldn't hold it long even if I wanted to?" JJ shrug off to that question, that battle really tired the poor guy out.
Then somewhere later on, you can use an idea in stating the thought of the future if there will be a Freelance Police Season 4 Game.
Hoagie noticed Stitch looking green, or more like he wasn't feeling well? "Stitch, you okay?"
"Ohhh, meega have a tummy ache?" Stitch responded in a quizzy response, but covered his mouth until... "BLaarrugh!" Yes, the koala threw up his cookies, in a way of speaking?
"Oh great, you just chucked up...nuggets made of gold?" Hoagie almost compalined, if he didn't see that the nuggets on the ground that Stitch threw up...WERE MADE OF GOLD?
"Yeah, meega found them in the treasure room, thought they look tasty?" Stitch responded in a small response, still feeling a bit sick from losing his meal?
"Well Stitch, looks like you just struck some gold nuggets, but not for eating I'm afraid to say." Hoagie explained with a smile that his partner struck gold while using it as a pun joke.
"Aww, meega would snap at that bad joke if meega weren't just recovering?" Stitch moans to groan that if he was better, he snap with a remark at Hoagie's jokes, but for now, he'll let it slide.
"You know, with these little gold nuggets, we might return back to our time to help fix up our office building?" Hoagie explained to his partner, as he took a bag, scooped the gold nuggets up in how they can use this.
"Do weega really fix place up like that?" Stitch asked now fully recovered to wonder if they fix their office with this?
"Can't say how, but until the next Sam & Max Freelance Police Season 4 Game comes out to explain how our office gets fixed up, then from the Season 3 version, it's still in ruins." Hoagie shrug off to explain that not even he knows what to do, but until then, might as well just say, they fixed their place up in their 'own' way of doing things, to avoid complications.
"Boy was that an adventure weega can't forget?" Stitch shook his head in just remembering that adventure. "But don't you think Jim or the others would need that?" The koala mentioned that maybe Jim & his friends need the cash more then they do?
"Normally yes, but it looks like everybody's happy with the loot of their spoils from our adventure to last for a good time." Hoagie explained to Stitch from looking around, seeing how the little treasure & friends in the bar have turn out to be, looks like Jim's group have earn some good respect and a legend of their own story to tell.
"Sweet, then let's take these nuggets to break the bad guy nuggets with! Heheehheh!" Stitch replied before a wicked smile appeared while laughing at the idea on how to beat up bad guys with their gold.
"As usual, you crack me up, little buddy." Hoagie shook his head with a smile, Stitch will always be Stitch even when they got a little riches, like they havn't before.
Well that's all from me, so good luck here Jus, it's gotta be a BIG ONE in the next story to come. Not to mention, what happens when Sweetums turns good, or that after they escaped death, some of the captured crew complains to say 'Hey wait! We may have survived, but we're going to jail?' which leads to frowns until one of them says this 'Well at least we're not dead?' to try bring up some positive news? And for whatever happens after, you can decide on the earlier reviews if you're thinking of using them or not? Like the one if Long John is going alone, or takes Mad Monty, Clueless Morgen and Polly Lobster so long as they behave, etc.? It's gonna be one of those things that we just can't wait to see what happens afterwards?
Til then, keep sailing on the adventure here!
5/29/2012 c17 sonicfighter21354
Look like both our heroes and the badx guys has finally found the treasure. But enither of them know that they set off a trap.
Look like both our heroes and the badx guys has finally found the treasure. But enither of them know that they set off a trap.