for Can I have a Mommy, Lord Sesshomaru?7/17/2012 c9 angel boo
Will their be a next chapter
Will their be a next chapter
7/17/2012 c9 
8Kagurami
well I ike it buti really want the chap was more... long?
please update soon :p
(sorry my english )
ja ne
8Kaguramiwell I ike it buti really want the chap was more... long?
please update soon :p
(sorry my english )
ja ne
7/13/2012 c4 ApprenticeDaman
I love the concept of the story but the errors take away far too much from the story, please pay closer attention to grammar and punctuations. I don't get the point of them switching in and out of first and third person when their talking about themselves, it's confusing me.
I love the concept of the story but the errors take away far too much from the story, please pay closer attention to grammar and punctuations. I don't get the point of them switching in and out of first and third person when their talking about themselves, it's confusing me.
6/30/2012 c8 12AriXAmi
This really good so far, but I hate to point out that your grammar is terrible. I would really like to edit for you if you'd let me. Shoot me a PM if you'd like to take me up on my offer.
12AriXAmiThis really good so far, but I hate to point out that your grammar is terrible. I would really like to edit for you if you'd let me. Shoot me a PM if you'd like to take me up on my offer.
6/5/2012 c8 15SuperAlpha96
I think u need to show sesshomaru back one of his castles (hideout/whatever) and there be a complicated/lovey mushy moment between the full demon and the reincarnation. Or... switch the scene over to Naraku to see what HIS reaction to all of this is... he's probably laughing his "A" off!
15SuperAlpha96I think u need to show sesshomaru back one of his castles (hideout/whatever) and there be a complicated/lovey mushy moment between the full demon and the reincarnation. Or... switch the scene over to Naraku to see what HIS reaction to all of this is... he's probably laughing his "A" off!
5/27/2012 c7 kate
Please put up chapter 8 soon and hurry
Please put up chapter 8 soon and hurry
5/25/2012 c6 SuperAlpha96
Well, you know I read your stories now.
XD
Thanks for mentioning me in your A/n!
Well, you know I read your stories now.
XD
Thanks for mentioning me in your A/n!
5/25/2012 c6 kate
Please put up chapter 7 soon and hurry
Please put up chapter 7 soon and hurry
5/23/2012 c5 Kagome12345
Hurry up all ready you are driving me craesy hurry up!!!ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL !
Hurry up all ready you are driving me craesy hurry up!!!ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL !
5/21/2012 c5 kate
Please put up chapter 6 soon and hurry
Please put up chapter 6 soon and hurry
5/20/2012 c4 kate
Please put up chapter 5 soon and hurry
Please put up chapter 5 soon and hurry