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7fernfury
This is really cool. I mean ya, our favourite characters are being tortured and during, but it is still really awesome. Please continue!
7fernfuryThis is really cool. I mean ya, our favourite characters are being tortured and during, but it is still really awesome. Please continue!
1/9 c6 WitchChild17
I love how someone isn't afraid to write a tragedy, but at the same time I'm so upset over the deaths. Death is a part life of course, and it is a Hunger Games crossover. If someone wants a happy ending they need to read a different story. Please continue, and thank you for your brilliant talent.
The One and Only,
Witch Child 17
I love how someone isn't afraid to write a tragedy, but at the same time I'm so upset over the deaths. Death is a part life of course, and it is a Hunger Games crossover. If someone wants a happy ending they need to read a different story. Please continue, and thank you for your brilliant talent.
The One and Only,
Witch Child 17
8/22/2012 c5 WitchChild17
You are a great writer, but I have fallen in love with these characters as I was reading their stories that made me swell with love and joy, and the fact they are being pinned against each other in a blood thirsty race to kill has brought me to tears. I can't imagine all these characters I have made real connections with, and felt like I've been with them through their battles amd struggles, ruthlessly huntimg each other down and just killing and not caring these are their friends. The Hunger Games made me cry when Rue and Thresh died, and I barely knew their characters. But these characters I feel as if I'm laying in bed at 2 in the morning reading about my best friends killing each other. Do you remember the scene in Thierry's mansion when Hannah met the Circle Daybreak? How everyone was so in love, and they were all messing around like one big happy family? I was ecstatic and giddy, like I had goosebumps knowing all my favorite characters had found the Circle Daybreak and finally knew each other, but I still had the feeling there was more happiness to come. And reading that story I know one pair of soulmates is supposed to come out alive, while the rest are lying in the arena cut up and dead. Great, my cat just came to me and now all I can think is what about Tiggy and all the animals Thea and Eric planned to help. I've been thinking this for quite a while now too, after the games, whatever was in that syringe is goimg to wear off and whoever won probaly won't want to live because of all the memories of how they murdered their family and all their best friends in cold blood just si they could live. The guilt and selfishnes I would feel would kill me if I gadn't already done the job before I got to that point. The Hunger Games is wrong, and from reading this I know how the families of Panem felt knowing their child was never coming home again. I just hope America mever turns to this option, and if they do I want to be one of the rebels that stop it or die trying to see this sick cruelity brought down.
You are a great writer, but I have fallen in love with these characters as I was reading their stories that made me swell with love and joy, and the fact they are being pinned against each other in a blood thirsty race to kill has brought me to tears. I can't imagine all these characters I have made real connections with, and felt like I've been with them through their battles amd struggles, ruthlessly huntimg each other down and just killing and not caring these are their friends. The Hunger Games made me cry when Rue and Thresh died, and I barely knew their characters. But these characters I feel as if I'm laying in bed at 2 in the morning reading about my best friends killing each other. Do you remember the scene in Thierry's mansion when Hannah met the Circle Daybreak? How everyone was so in love, and they were all messing around like one big happy family? I was ecstatic and giddy, like I had goosebumps knowing all my favorite characters had found the Circle Daybreak and finally knew each other, but I still had the feeling there was more happiness to come. And reading that story I know one pair of soulmates is supposed to come out alive, while the rest are lying in the arena cut up and dead. Great, my cat just came to me and now all I can think is what about Tiggy and all the animals Thea and Eric planned to help. I've been thinking this for quite a while now too, after the games, whatever was in that syringe is goimg to wear off and whoever won probaly won't want to live because of all the memories of how they murdered their family and all their best friends in cold blood just si they could live. The guilt and selfishnes I would feel would kill me if I gadn't already done the job before I got to that point. The Hunger Games is wrong, and from reading this I know how the families of Panem felt knowing their child was never coming home again. I just hope America mever turns to this option, and if they do I want to be one of the rebels that stop it or die trying to see this sick cruelity brought down.
7/9/2012 c5 8Winterowl312
Dang girl...I wish I could write like you. In one chapter you managed to capture everyone's emotions and make them incredibly believable (and I have no idea if I even spelled that right. Been out of school too long, I guess.). The idea that some of the tributes would enjoy the Games, the alliances formed-everything falls into place effortlessly, and it's incredibly detailed.
Winterowl312
8Winterowl312Dang girl...I wish I could write like you. In one chapter you managed to capture everyone's emotions and make them incredibly believable (and I have no idea if I even spelled that right. Been out of school too long, I guess.). The idea that some of the tributes would enjoy the Games, the alliances formed-everything falls into place effortlessly, and it's incredibly detailed.
Winterowl312
6/27/2012 c4 Winterowl312
Yeah, some Delos/Maggie action! I was so happy to come home from camp to see your update, and this, though short, was just what I was hoping for. Keep up the good work, and good luck with those little monsters!
Winterowl312
Yeah, some Delos/Maggie action! I was so happy to come home from camp to see your update, and this, though short, was just what I was hoping for. Keep up the good work, and good luck with those little monsters!
Winterowl312
5/31/2012 c3 7xXlamia vampressXx
This, I can already tell, has great potential to be a stunning story. It started out beautifully; thrusting you into the drama instantly, easily grabbing my attention. It's a brilliant beginning, no doubt, that exceeds on every chapter. The characters are also very much in character as well. Overall, the whole thing is amazing.
The writing proves to be adept as well. It's flawless and has the adequate pace this story needs.
I like it. (: and I very much want to see how it progresses; especially when they're thrown into the arena.
Now; just one question.
Jez, Delos, and Illianna have a huge advantage. They're Wildpowers; which, literally, make them the most invincible people in this competition. And gives them the probability of most likely to w
7xXlamia vampressXxThis, I can already tell, has great potential to be a stunning story. It started out beautifully; thrusting you into the drama instantly, easily grabbing my attention. It's a brilliant beginning, no doubt, that exceeds on every chapter. The characters are also very much in character as well. Overall, the whole thing is amazing.
The writing proves to be adept as well. It's flawless and has the adequate pace this story needs.
I like it. (: and I very much want to see how it progresses; especially when they're thrown into the arena.
Now; just one question.
Jez, Delos, and Illianna have a huge advantage. They're Wildpowers; which, literally, make them the most invincible people in this competition. And gives them the probability of most likely to w
5/30/2012 c3 8Winterowl312
An update! I realized that I'm your sole reviewer at the moment, so I'm going to type you a long one:
The serum thing was clever. I was wondering how you'd get them to fight each other without erasing almost a year's worth of friendships and alliances and turning them into complete strangers. Great job on that, and reviving a new character.
I especially liked Rashel teaching Quinn how to use a sword, and Ash and Mare fighting each other. I'm a hopeless fangirl for both of those ships!
One thing though: it's Gillian, not Gilligan. Just thought I'd let you know.
Keep writing,
Winterowl312
P.S. This was typed on a phone, so I apologize for any glaring mistakes made by my hopelessly clumsy fingers.
8Winterowl312An update! I realized that I'm your sole reviewer at the moment, so I'm going to type you a long one:
The serum thing was clever. I was wondering how you'd get them to fight each other without erasing almost a year's worth of friendships and alliances and turning them into complete strangers. Great job on that, and reviving a new character.
I especially liked Rashel teaching Quinn how to use a sword, and Ash and Mare fighting each other. I'm a hopeless fangirl for both of those ships!
One thing though: it's Gillian, not Gilligan. Just thought I'd let you know.
Keep writing,
Winterowl312
P.S. This was typed on a phone, so I apologize for any glaring mistakes made by my hopelessly clumsy fingers.
5/20/2012 c2 Winterowl312
Please update this! This is the only competent and honestly enjoyable Night World crossover I've read, and I'd hate it if it were to be discontinued. If you'd like (and if it would encourage you to write another chapter faster) I could put up a link for this on my profile. I know how frustrating it is when your fics you work so ** are ignored by readers, and crossover stories seem to suffer more. Keep writing!
Winterowl312
Please update this! This is the only competent and honestly enjoyable Night World crossover I've read, and I'd hate it if it were to be discontinued. If you'd like (and if it would encourage you to write another chapter faster) I could put up a link for this on my profile. I know how frustrating it is when your fics you work so ** are ignored by readers, and crossover stories seem to suffer more. Keep writing!
Winterowl312