for The Boy in the Black and White Pajamas6/2/2012 c3 
20BerryEbilBunny
I really love your works and I love this one too so far. Please update soon!
20BerryEbilBunnyI really love your works and I love this one too so far. Please update soon!
5/29/2012 c3 13FutureAirbender18
Well this kind of bites that you are done for the summer. :/ But hey, you're the author.
Just gotta say one thing. I have high hopes for this story. It's cute, and I'm eager to see where you were going to take this...if you were planning on finishing it. If you weren't, and this was the last chapter...I do kind of like the way you ended. :) But whatever the choice was, I'm glad you've at least written these 3 chapters. They were a wonderful read.
13FutureAirbender18Well this kind of bites that you are done for the summer. :/ But hey, you're the author.
Just gotta say one thing. I have high hopes for this story. It's cute, and I'm eager to see where you were going to take this...if you were planning on finishing it. If you weren't, and this was the last chapter...I do kind of like the way you ended. :) But whatever the choice was, I'm glad you've at least written these 3 chapters. They were a wonderful read.
5/29/2012 c1 FutureAirbender18
I gotta say, this is really cute thus far, and it's only the first chapter. I have a good feeling this is going to be an awesome story! ;) Can't wait to read the next couple of chapters. :D And on to them I go!
I gotta say, this is really cute thus far, and it's only the first chapter. I have a good feeling this is going to be an awesome story! ;) Can't wait to read the next couple of chapters. :D And on to them I go!
5/27/2012 c2 DPraven
I love it! And half ghost please, is victoria Sam's sister
I love it! And half ghost please, is victoria Sam's sister
5/24/2012 c3 4writers-block-Bgone
That was great! Good job with the reveal, I really like where this is going. See you on the next update!
4writers-block-BgoneThat was great! Good job with the reveal, I really like where this is going. See you on the next update!
5/24/2012 c3 18VampireFrootloopsRule
Oh i hopeypou return soon! Do not leave us on such n eeeevil cliffy! Evil evil... but Thats what makes you awesome! You write beautifully! Using dicton to the full
18VampireFrootloopsRuleOh i hopeypou return soon! Do not leave us on such n eeeevil cliffy! Evil evil... but Thats what makes you awesome! You write beautifully! Using dicton to the full
5/23/2012 c3 LandofMidnightRain
This is so cute! I love this story. I love the interaction between young Danny and young Sam. It's adorable how she comforts him. Great job! I can't wait to read more soon.
MidnightRain
This is so cute! I love this story. I love the interaction between young Danny and young Sam. It's adorable how she comforts him. Great job! I can't wait to read more soon.
MidnightRain
5/23/2012 c3 MsFrizzle
Dear YourFavoriteCONTRACTOR,
I wish you a great summer. I hope you continue the story on your return.
Not that it needs to be explained at this point in the story, but I was wondering what triggered Danny's change back to human form.
It is also unclear why a 5 year old would see the need to conceal his identity from Sam. I would think he would tell her he's still the same Danny and even insist on it if she didn't believe it.
Sam's parents might also question his appearance although since the story is told from Sam's point of view, she might not have caught on to her parents concern at finding a lost 5 year old.
It is also a good thing that they were able to figure out where he lived. Not every five year old knows their address - then again if he could give them his last name, the infamous Fenton sign might have be enough of a landmark.
Dear YourFavoriteCONTRACTOR,
I wish you a great summer. I hope you continue the story on your return.
Not that it needs to be explained at this point in the story, but I was wondering what triggered Danny's change back to human form.
It is also unclear why a 5 year old would see the need to conceal his identity from Sam. I would think he would tell her he's still the same Danny and even insist on it if she didn't believe it.
Sam's parents might also question his appearance although since the story is told from Sam's point of view, she might not have caught on to her parents concern at finding a lost 5 year old.
It is also a good thing that they were able to figure out where he lived. Not every five year old knows their address - then again if he could give them his last name, the infamous Fenton sign might have be enough of a landmark.