for Foot, Meet Mouth6/1/2012 c1 
49scousemuz1k
Poor Tim, under compulsion and still trying not to put his foot in it...
Great Poppa Gibbs!
49scousemuz1kPoor Tim, under compulsion and still trying not to put his foot in it...
Great Poppa Gibbs!
5/21/2012 c1 suchaun
Love this chapter! Looking forward to more. I love that Gibbs just knows. Would love to hear about how Tony learned that Gibbs didn't mean him harm by nit letting go!
Love this chapter! Looking forward to more. I love that Gibbs just knows. Would love to hear about how Tony learned that Gibbs didn't mean him harm by nit letting go!
5/16/2012 c1 guest
Lovely! Thank you :-)
Lovely! Thank you :-)
5/14/2012 c1 Tony's-a-hottie
it's actually Peoria, not Pedora. He's worked in Philly, Peoria, Baltimore and now DC. but good story anyway
it's actually Peoria, not Pedora. He's worked in Philly, Peoria, Baltimore and now DC. but good story anyway
5/14/2012 c1 41binkeybella
Sometimes I feel sorry for McGee with his open mouth insert foot babbling - the rest of the time I want to kick him in the- uh - shin. Yeah, the shin. Luckily Gibbs knows when to intervene, even if he can't change things for Tony, he can just be there and understand. Thanks for writing and posting!
41binkeybellaSometimes I feel sorry for McGee with his open mouth insert foot babbling - the rest of the time I want to kick him in the- uh - shin. Yeah, the shin. Luckily Gibbs knows when to intervene, even if he can't change things for Tony, he can just be there and understand. Thanks for writing and posting!
5/14/2012 c1 Gloworm41
Great job I loved the last part with PapaBear Gibbs he is the best and so good for Tony to know how muck his surrogate father cares about him.
Great job I loved the last part with PapaBear Gibbs he is the best and so good for Tony to know how muck his surrogate father cares about him.
5/14/2012 c1 skittle2bg
Really enjoyed this. Character reactions and dialogue are very in line with the show. Good job!
Really enjoyed this. Character reactions and dialogue are very in line with the show. Good job!
5/14/2012 c1 4sopmire
Ooo, nice! Good explanation for how Tony's Mom died too, and that he seems very used to pretending to be ok with it after all this time.
"I'm always worried about you." Aw, so nice that he's actually saying it out loud.
Great start!
4sopmireOoo, nice! Good explanation for how Tony's Mom died too, and that he seems very used to pretending to be ok with it after all this time.
"I'm always worried about you." Aw, so nice that he's actually saying it out loud.
Great start!
5/14/2012 c1 Anne
Nice work, really well written !
Nice work, really well written !