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15Serena R. Snape
Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing that bothered me a bit was that you misspelled Rudolphus Lestrange. It's Rodolphus. And Delores Umbridge is Dolores. And Ginerva Weasley is Ginevra.
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Sorry, it's one of my pet-peeves. I always have to correct someone if they misspell things.
15Serena R. SnapeGreat story, I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing that bothered me a bit was that you misspelled Rudolphus Lestrange. It's Rodolphus. And Delores Umbridge is Dolores. And Ginerva Weasley is Ginevra.
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Sorry, it's one of my pet-peeves. I always have to correct someone if they misspell things.
5/7 c18 Ez21
This is pretty good, but I would like to read more about the AU part of this story and less about the books.
Keep up the good work
This is pretty good, but I would like to read more about the AU part of this story and less about the books.
Keep up the good work
4/28 c18 2Stormglass
LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP! The only way you would lose me as a reader is if you delete the story. :D
2StormglassLOVE IT! KEEP IT UP! The only way you would lose me as a reader is if you delete the story. :D
4/28 c18 1serenityselena
oh my... interesting discoveries... and new reading companions too...
can't wait to read more :)
1serenityselenaoh my... interesting discoveries... and new reading companions too...
can't wait to read more :)
4/27 c18 Guest
This is the best "reading the Harry Potters" -fic I've ever read! You actually have a plot other than people commenting on everything and getting all friendly with each others! I mean, yeah, you have that too, but you have so much more in the story! An actual plot! Gosh I love this! I can't wait for the next chapter!
This is the best "reading the Harry Potters" -fic I've ever read! You actually have a plot other than people commenting on everything and getting all friendly with each others! I mean, yeah, you have that too, but you have so much more in the story! An actual plot! Gosh I love this! I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/27 c18 Moi
"Tom expects us to bring the wolf and the pyromaniac along." *snicker* Best sentence in the entire chapter! *laugh* Pyromaniac, my arse. What will Severus' (and others') reactions be once they read up on Hermione's very distinct involvement during the next few years/books? Stealing, Polyjuice, time-turners (was there more to it than her magical curse load why she got it; Bill did twelve OWLs, two more than Hermione took in the end without mention of time-turners necessary) and Buckbeak's defense (even if Hagrid mucked it up royally, though I'd love to hear Lucius' account of the hearing), using unbelievably advanced charms (protean) very casually, organizing activist groups with varying success (S.P.E.W. and the DA), directly going against Umbridge by sicking the centaurs on her, not even counting her co-break in at the Ministry.
Oh, and I'd love to see her reaction on some of the things Harry thought with regards to her, as it is rare you get to find out what people think in the privacy of their minds uncensored. *smirk*
I cannot imagine people like Severus, Draco and Pansy above everyone else to let the chance pass to needle Hermione a bit. Harry might be seen 'delicate' *cough* at the moment, so everyone might go extra soft on him, Hermione however is in perfect health. Though I wonder if her person (or Lupin, etc.) was meddled with as well to a smaller extent over the years. Hermione's first encounter with an emotional and unstable Bellatrix might be interesting. And the fact remains that Hermione was badly injured, maybe even nearly killed by Antonin Dolohov at the DoM. I wonder how much she has succeeded in teaching herself Occlumency by reading about it ever since she heard about that branch of magic one and a half years ago.
I am curious how you will work Lupin into the story, particularly in the light that it was Fenrir who bit him as a young child. So far canon-Lupin claimed that his father had some kind of disagreement with Greyback which resulted in his being bitten to get back at his father, thus cursing him to become a monster every full moon.
I am really looking forward how things will go from there. As Fred and George don't have the time currently to go through the first book, I'd only like to find out about Hermione's and Lupin's reaction for the time being. For that matter, why is it that Lupin never even contacted or visited little Harry?
Ciao, ;)
Moi
"Tom expects us to bring the wolf and the pyromaniac along." *snicker* Best sentence in the entire chapter! *laugh* Pyromaniac, my arse. What will Severus' (and others') reactions be once they read up on Hermione's very distinct involvement during the next few years/books? Stealing, Polyjuice, time-turners (was there more to it than her magical curse load why she got it; Bill did twelve OWLs, two more than Hermione took in the end without mention of time-turners necessary) and Buckbeak's defense (even if Hagrid mucked it up royally, though I'd love to hear Lucius' account of the hearing), using unbelievably advanced charms (protean) very casually, organizing activist groups with varying success (S.P.E.W. and the DA), directly going against Umbridge by sicking the centaurs on her, not even counting her co-break in at the Ministry.
Oh, and I'd love to see her reaction on some of the things Harry thought with regards to her, as it is rare you get to find out what people think in the privacy of their minds uncensored. *smirk*
I cannot imagine people like Severus, Draco and Pansy above everyone else to let the chance pass to needle Hermione a bit. Harry might be seen 'delicate' *cough* at the moment, so everyone might go extra soft on him, Hermione however is in perfect health. Though I wonder if her person (or Lupin, etc.) was meddled with as well to a smaller extent over the years. Hermione's first encounter with an emotional and unstable Bellatrix might be interesting. And the fact remains that Hermione was badly injured, maybe even nearly killed by Antonin Dolohov at the DoM. I wonder how much she has succeeded in teaching herself Occlumency by reading about it ever since she heard about that branch of magic one and a half years ago.
I am curious how you will work Lupin into the story, particularly in the light that it was Fenrir who bit him as a young child. So far canon-Lupin claimed that his father had some kind of disagreement with Greyback which resulted in his being bitten to get back at his father, thus cursing him to become a monster every full moon.
I am really looking forward how things will go from there. As Fred and George don't have the time currently to go through the first book, I'd only like to find out about Hermione's and Lupin's reaction for the time being. For that matter, why is it that Lupin never even contacted or visited little Harry?
Ciao, ;)
Moi
4/27 c18 1Sailor Sayuri
YAY! Update! *squeals**happy dance*
This chapter was GREAT! LOVED how Harry is so powerful and has so many different kinds of magic!*grins*
You did a great job on this chapter as well! Still love how you write!Well done! *winks**thumbs up*
But if you want to experiment with other styles,,,*shrugs* Well! Wrighting is an art, so I'm all for you trying and we'll see what it'll be like! Good luck on that new idea! *winks*
I REALLY want to know what happens next! *wails*
Please update soon!? Pweety Pwease with a LOT of Chocolate Frogs on top!? *Dobby starry eyes*
Good luck for next chapter! _
Kisses!
1Sailor SayuriYAY! Update! *squeals**happy dance*
This chapter was GREAT! LOVED how Harry is so powerful and has so many different kinds of magic!*grins*
You did a great job on this chapter as well! Still love how you write!Well done! *winks**thumbs up*
But if you want to experiment with other styles,,,*shrugs* Well! Wrighting is an art, so I'm all for you trying and we'll see what it'll be like! Good luck on that new idea! *winks*
I REALLY want to know what happens next! *wails*
Please update soon!? Pweety Pwease with a LOT of Chocolate Frogs on top!? *Dobby starry eyes*
Good luck for next chapter! _
Kisses!
4/26 c18 julesa66
Love the story can't wait for the next chapter. Only part of the story I don't like is having hermonie there. She is going to cause problem with being a know it all and opening her mouth all of the time. Everyone will get fed up with her and there will be a lot of tension. Harry doesn't need her around. He has moved on from her interference.
Love the story can't wait for the next chapter. Only part of the story I don't like is having hermonie there. She is going to cause problem with being a know it all and opening her mouth all of the time. Everyone will get fed up with her and there will be a lot of tension. Harry doesn't need her around. He has moved on from her interference.
4/26 c18 82Sheankelor
Ah, this was a perfectly satisfying chapter. Thank you for it. Sorry that I didn't get to reading and reviewing the last one until now. So, a bit a bout the last chapter. I do love haw Harry fooled everyone but Severus about being asleep. And that Severus let him. Fernir is just going to be unsatisfied for a bit longer.
Now, this chapter... thank you for making Griphook good. I do like the way your wrote out the scene, just enough deviousness and working together between all present.
Now Hermione and Remus are there... lets see what this shall bring.
82SheankelorAh, this was a perfectly satisfying chapter. Thank you for it. Sorry that I didn't get to reading and reviewing the last one until now. So, a bit a bout the last chapter. I do love haw Harry fooled everyone but Severus about being asleep. And that Severus let him. Fernir is just going to be unsatisfied for a bit longer.
Now, this chapter... thank you for making Griphook good. I do like the way your wrote out the scene, just enough deviousness and working together between all present.
Now Hermione and Remus are there... lets see what this shall bring.