for So This is Life
205/24/2012 c6 James Birdsong
Nice two chapters _
Nice two chapters _
5/20/2012 c4 James Birdsong
Cool two chapters
Cool two chapters
5/17/2012 c2 James Birdsong
Excellent
Excellent
5/15/2012 c1 James Birdsong
It seems an okay first chapter. One big typo though. Please remember there should not be an e in the word sighs. Also more paragraph breaks please. One for each time a different character speaks. Maybe as you did it is a stylistic choice I guess.
It seems an okay first chapter. One big typo though. Please remember there should not be an e in the word sighs. Also more paragraph breaks please. One for each time a different character speaks. Maybe as you did it is a stylistic choice I guess.