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10Yanagi Uxinta
Re-reading this has prompted me into my first review of one of your stories, though I've read most, if not all of them and adore them. I think you are a brilliant writer, and always love seeing one of your updates in my inbox. Having just seen Thor, Avengers etc. for the first time this week, I immediately wanted to re-read your Thor fics now that I knew the backstory instead of relying on my hazy knowledge of Norse mythology. I understand if you have lost your inspiration for this fic, but I would love to see it continued if the spark is still there since, from a new addition to the fanbase, it sounds as though you've captured the characters perfectly, as always. Even if not this fic, I hope you keep writing as you really have a gift for it.
- Yana.
10Yanagi UxintaRe-reading this has prompted me into my first review of one of your stories, though I've read most, if not all of them and adore them. I think you are a brilliant writer, and always love seeing one of your updates in my inbox. Having just seen Thor, Avengers etc. for the first time this week, I immediately wanted to re-read your Thor fics now that I knew the backstory instead of relying on my hazy knowledge of Norse mythology. I understand if you have lost your inspiration for this fic, but I would love to see it continued if the spark is still there since, from a new addition to the fanbase, it sounds as though you've captured the characters perfectly, as always. Even if not this fic, I hope you keep writing as you really have a gift for it.
- Yana.
12/11/2012 c4 Guest
I love this please do more of it I will bookmark it and shall be looking for part 5
I love this please do more of it I will bookmark it and shall be looking for part 5
7/24/2012 c4 Bolts Lady
Oh, I do hope you haven't abandoned this. It has so much potential and it is wonderfully written. Please continue! I really want to see where this goes.
Oh, I do hope you haven't abandoned this. It has so much potential and it is wonderfully written. Please continue! I really want to see where this goes.
7/23/2012 c4 fieldsoffebruary
Interesting dynamic between them. Can't wait to read how you'll develop them. Heal each other or destroy each other? Or perhaps, they must destroy each other first then rebuild each other. xD
Update soon! I do so enjoy character study fics.
Interesting dynamic between them. Can't wait to read how you'll develop them. Heal each other or destroy each other? Or perhaps, they must destroy each other first then rebuild each other. xD
Update soon! I do so enjoy character study fics.
7/3/2012 c4 Guest
I love this story! so original.
I love this story! so original.
6/23/2012 c4 NixedChaos
I think you write well, a nice mix of dialogue and description. I do hope you choose to continue! I love where you are going with this. Character based stories are so fascinating because I loving seeing how other people see the world, and how they think the characters would as well. I do have a couple of questions though...
How is Loki going to get back to Asgard, his Asgard, or is he going to be able to get back at all? Is the time travel going to cause an alternate universe or going to be worked into the original story line of the movie Thor?
I kind of hope you do write a scene where Jane and Loki are learning to cook... Hope to hear more from you!
I think you write well, a nice mix of dialogue and description. I do hope you choose to continue! I love where you are going with this. Character based stories are so fascinating because I loving seeing how other people see the world, and how they think the characters would as well. I do have a couple of questions though...
How is Loki going to get back to Asgard, his Asgard, or is he going to be able to get back at all? Is the time travel going to cause an alternate universe or going to be worked into the original story line of the movie Thor?
I kind of hope you do write a scene where Jane and Loki are learning to cook... Hope to hear more from you!
6/21/2012 c4 MadMissMissy
Wow, the dynamics between the both of them is so intriguing. How they are both attempting to dissect the other while keeping up a defensive shield around their own tattered emotions... Very good. Looking forward to more chapters.
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Wow, the dynamics between the both of them is so intriguing. How they are both attempting to dissect the other while keeping up a defensive shield around their own tattered emotions... Very good. Looking forward to more chapters.
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6/21/2012 c3 MadMissMissy
The thought of Him of all people playing with his food sends me into giggles. Jane has a lot to deal with. The way Loki acts throughout this chapter, all holier-than-thou is just priceless. You really have a knack at characterization. You surprise me.
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The thought of Him of all people playing with his food sends me into giggles. Jane has a lot to deal with. The way Loki acts throughout this chapter, all holier-than-thou is just priceless. You really have a knack at characterization. You surprise me.
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6/21/2012 c2 MadMissMissy
Your storytelling is wonderful. Loki's breakdown was appropriate at that particular scene. It's like losing one of your limbs or senses. Something you take advantage of daily... Then suddenly gone... Hnnnn many aspects of Loki's loss connects perfectly with Jane's current dilemma. I like what you did there. Brilliant chapter yet again.
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Your storytelling is wonderful. Loki's breakdown was appropriate at that particular scene. It's like losing one of your limbs or senses. Something you take advantage of daily... Then suddenly gone... Hnnnn many aspects of Loki's loss connects perfectly with Jane's current dilemma. I like what you did there. Brilliant chapter yet again.
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