for Insanity3/20 c23 letsjustdance
OK, well, I sort of figured out he was married to Bella but didn't know it was 'Kate' until now. I wasn't sure how it would turn out if Edward realized Ethan was his...but, I guess he'd lose all he has regained if he mentioned it. I'm glad they all got their HEA in the end. *hugs*
OK, well, I sort of figured out he was married to Bella but didn't know it was 'Kate' until now. I wasn't sure how it would turn out if Edward realized Ethan was his...but, I guess he'd lose all he has regained if he mentioned it. I'm glad they all got their HEA in the end. *hugs*
12/5/2012 c23 Guest
I loved this story! and I was taken by complete surprise and shock to realize that who I thought was Bella was not! Great story!
I just finished reading both One and Two of The One that Never Was...loved those also. It was those stories that caused me to read more that you had written...something I have never done before.
I also loved your personal banters at the end of each chapter...great to see that you are just a normal person too!
Well, gotta go...I am on my way to read another Mamasutra tale!
I loved this story! and I was taken by complete surprise and shock to realize that who I thought was Bella was not! Great story!
I just finished reading both One and Two of The One that Never Was...loved those also. It was those stories that caused me to read more that you had written...something I have never done before.
I also loved your personal banters at the end of each chapter...great to see that you are just a normal person too!
Well, gotta go...I am on my way to read another Mamasutra tale!
10/10/2012 c23 Lulabell75
First of all, I have to say if it wasn't for the AN stating that you almost disclosed Doll's real name, I wouldn't have caught on until the very end. Secondly, I have to say how AWESOME is it that beegurl13 was your pre-reader when this story is so much like Baby. I'm feeling pretty much the same way I did when I finished Baby. Confused with my emotions. Thinking you were reading one POV to find out its another. It's awesome!
Lula
First of all, I have to say if it wasn't for the AN stating that you almost disclosed Doll's real name, I wouldn't have caught on until the very end. Secondly, I have to say how AWESOME is it that beegurl13 was your pre-reader when this story is so much like Baby. I'm feeling pretty much the same way I did when I finished Baby. Confused with my emotions. Thinking you were reading one POV to find out its another. It's awesome!
Lula

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