for Bella Gerant Alii5/24/2012 c1 
12SuavePanda
Short, but good! I read this on a recommendation, and I have to say it has a ton of potential! Your writing is great. But-and I know you said this fic isn't totally accurate-it takes more than one test flight to get into the Air Force. It isn't a big detail, though.
Besides that, I love how you worked in a different scenario from the one in Leviathan, using Jaspert as Dylan. I'm excited to see the next chapter :)
12SuavePandaShort, but good! I read this on a recommendation, and I have to say it has a ton of potential! Your writing is great. But-and I know you said this fic isn't totally accurate-it takes more than one test flight to get into the Air Force. It isn't a big detail, though.
Besides that, I love how you worked in a different scenario from the one in Leviathan, using Jaspert as Dylan. I'm excited to see the next chapter :)
5/24/2012 c1 6MyNameIsAwesome
OMG this is amazing! I'm a failure at typing on michelles phone! How did u think of this? This is so amazingly clever and amazingly... amazingS love us cookie! Update soon!
6MyNameIsAwesomeOMG this is amazing! I'm a failure at typing on michelles phone! How did u think of this? This is so amazingly clever and amazingly... amazingS love us cookie! Update soon!