for Lost and Found6/16/2012 c1 Jade
Excellent story. Loved how you explained Allison's feelings and fears.
Excellent story. Loved how you explained Allison's feelings and fears.
5/18/2012 c1 Sheri
I enjoyed your story, I hope you write more. I didn't think that Jack would have moved on either.
I enjoyed your story, I hope you write more. I didn't think that Jack would have moved on either.
5/18/2012 c1 
19cendella
First off, let me say WOW. You habe manages to capture the esscence of Allison's real fear. She is so in love, yet feels umdeserving of him. She is afraid to lose his love. I wish Jamie would have taken a page out of your book and veered the story in this direction. I do not and cannot see Jack having a relationship with Jo. You nailed it when he saod he couldn't love anyone like he does her. One of my new favorites. I can't wait to read more Jack and Allison fan fic.
19cendellaFirst off, let me say WOW. You habe manages to capture the esscence of Allison's real fear. She is so in love, yet feels umdeserving of him. She is afraid to lose his love. I wish Jamie would have taken a page out of your book and veered the story in this direction. I do not and cannot see Jack having a relationship with Jo. You nailed it when he saod he couldn't love anyone like he does her. One of my new favorites. I can't wait to read more Jack and Allison fan fic.
5/17/2012 c1 akel
Brilliant! I have been waiting for someone to write a Jack/Allie story for the present season. You nailed it :) Everything I've wanted them to say to each other, you had them say. It's so obvious that she is all Jack has ever wanted & this story shows that! Thanks for this, it's beautiful :)
Brilliant! I have been waiting for someone to write a Jack/Allie story for the present season. You nailed it :) Everything I've wanted them to say to each other, you had them say. It's so obvious that she is all Jack has ever wanted & this story shows that! Thanks for this, it's beautiful :)
5/17/2012 c1 12fangirlu
I loved this glimpse into Allison's head. It was very realistic and in character. Actually, your entire premise for the matrix is more realistic than what the show is giving us so far. I wish they would have left it at the crew bringing their subconcious fears to life instead of a probability algorithm. It would have been much more interesting and the drama would feel a lot more organic and much less forced (as it does now, IMO). Great job.
12fangirluI loved this glimpse into Allison's head. It was very realistic and in character. Actually, your entire premise for the matrix is more realistic than what the show is giving us so far. I wish they would have left it at the crew bringing their subconcious fears to life instead of a probability algorithm. It would have been much more interesting and the drama would feel a lot more organic and much less forced (as it does now, IMO). Great job.
5/17/2012 c1 Anon
Love it. Thanks for writing this and giving Allison a voice to say what she is feelings. The show has been all over the place and hasn't let Allison speak to what is going on with her.
Hope to read more from you.
Love it. Thanks for writing this and giving Allison a voice to say what she is feelings. The show has been all over the place and hasn't let Allison speak to what is going on with her.
Hope to read more from you.
5/17/2012 c1 Anon
Just lovely.
Just lovely.
5/16/2012 c1 11AllyrienDM
I have to admit, every time somebody publishes another story, I sigh a little in relief that they haven't completely torpedoed the fandom. I think this is a pretty logical analysis of what's going on with Allison right now. This whole Astraeus plotline has been pretty disastrous for her, hasn't it?
11AllyrienDMI have to admit, every time somebody publishes another story, I sigh a little in relief that they haven't completely torpedoed the fandom. I think this is a pretty logical analysis of what's going on with Allison right now. This whole Astraeus plotline has been pretty disastrous for her, hasn't it?