4/19 c9 5thunder-shaymin
eh. It's ok. You can't be expected to write with no errors. Besides it's a good story.

4/8 c6 thunder-shaymin
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

4/8 c4 thunder-shaymin
hold the phone

4/8 c1 thunder-shaymin
Remember me? Love the beginning. Your words flow fluently.

3/17 c9 6lizzie-rivers
Aww! That's so cute :3 I'm glad they're happy. This was a really great story and I hope to hear more from here in the future!

(Sorry I'm only reviewing now. My e-mail has been playing up. I finally got it sorted and all these e-mails with all sorts of alerts appeared, including this on :D).

3/5 c2 rinlenlove
it's, oh gooods the FEELS Q_Q

2/17 c8 VocaloidFan135
PLEASE DO MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY!

12/29/2012 c1 Guest
I love this