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1/19 c1 6srhittson
cute story
5/19/2012 c1 wolfers
that was so cute. i could so see that happening thanks it put a smile on my face and i needed it.
5/18/2012 c1 Anon
Awww cute, I enjoyed this BUT you do need some help with grammer, there was some odd tenses in that & misuse of words. You should try asking for a beta on one of the forums. Your storytelling was good it's just a beta would make it that much better.
5/18/2012 c1 27Centon4Eva
That was really cute. Great job.
5/18/2012 c1 Swishla
So are they having another child or what? Based on the conversation, I'm guessing (and we all know how much Maura dislikes guessing) that Maura had the kids. Loved the nicknames for their stuffed animals - very cute. Not to mention Maura telling Jane she has her "whisked." Had me on the floor with that one. Very nicely done and thanks for sharing.
5/18/2012 c1 4afret2010
Very sweet but now I have this image in my head of Maura "whisking" Jane-very strange ;-)
5/18/2012 c1 5Imagination Genius
omg! could they get anymore cuter! If i ever decide to write a rizzoli fic you must let me use the names detective cuddles and doctor hugs. I loved it you should write more to it!

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