for Parasomnia11/4/2012 c1 
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
6/19/2012 c1 Guest
Your character development is flawless, and your plot is intriguing... I love how you put it in different POVs so that we get a glimpse of what's going on, but it's just vague enough to keep us guessing :) I'd love to see this updated! ;)
Your character development is flawless, and your plot is intriguing... I love how you put it in different POVs so that we get a glimpse of what's going on, but it's just vague enough to keep us guessing :) I'd love to see this updated! ;)
6/4/2012 c1 4well then
Snape was good.
Ron was a little out of character because he seemed much too cooly analytical.
'Twas all very interesting.
Keep writing.
Ja ne
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4well thenSnape was good.
Ron was a little out of character because he seemed much too cooly analytical.
'Twas all very interesting.
Keep writing.
Ja ne
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5/22/2012 c1 7Allanasha ke kiri
Huh, well, this definitely seems interesting. Both Snape and Ron seem to be in Character so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
7Allanasha ke kiriHuh, well, this definitely seems interesting. Both Snape and Ron seem to be in Character so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
5/21/2012 c1 Rachel
Nice interesting I wait to read the rest when there is more
Nice interesting I wait to read the rest when there is more
5/20/2012 c1 I am Devotion to you
I feel it necessary to comment on the love I have for this chapter. I adored it.
You're Severus Snape is completely wonderful, he is snide and snarky, while all the while utterly unflappable and keeping his thoughts and feelings completely well hidden. I found his involvement intriguing and mysterious and delicious.
His minds workings are fascinating to me, and I hope that there are perhaps more instances where they shall occur.
You're Ron was well founded. He was concerned for his friend, knowing that if there was something wrong in the room - it was undoubtedly going to involve Harry, yet he purposely waited to check on him last in a desperate attempt to hope that he was wrong. I found it encouraging to see him looking out for Harry - most people write him off as a bumbling idiot and your version of him does not, I appreciate that a lot. I literally had my jaw drop in surprise when Harry then Obliviated him!
I think this whole chapter was fantastic. It was beautiful and worded in just the right way to entice the mind and ensnare
the senses...
I wish that certain other people could have seen this before foolishly opening their mouths (or perhaps just typing) and spewing such nonsense and drivel about something that I personally, now feel is a great loss.
I hope that your inspiration for this (and you're other Snarry's/Sirry's - yes I know of them and will be on my way to review THOSE later tonight too) returns and I hope it is sooner rather than later. The world would be an empty and depressing place should you lose your inspiration for too long... and I would be lost without your divine work.
I truly hope that you recover from such disgustingly appalling treatment, and I hope that when you do - you bring with you the next fantastic addition's to your Harry Potter works
I feel it necessary to comment on the love I have for this chapter. I adored it.
You're Severus Snape is completely wonderful, he is snide and snarky, while all the while utterly unflappable and keeping his thoughts and feelings completely well hidden. I found his involvement intriguing and mysterious and delicious.
His minds workings are fascinating to me, and I hope that there are perhaps more instances where they shall occur.
You're Ron was well founded. He was concerned for his friend, knowing that if there was something wrong in the room - it was undoubtedly going to involve Harry, yet he purposely waited to check on him last in a desperate attempt to hope that he was wrong. I found it encouraging to see him looking out for Harry - most people write him off as a bumbling idiot and your version of him does not, I appreciate that a lot. I literally had my jaw drop in surprise when Harry then Obliviated him!
I think this whole chapter was fantastic. It was beautiful and worded in just the right way to entice the mind and ensnare
the senses...
I wish that certain other people could have seen this before foolishly opening their mouths (or perhaps just typing) and spewing such nonsense and drivel about something that I personally, now feel is a great loss.
I hope that your inspiration for this (and you're other Snarry's/Sirry's - yes I know of them and will be on my way to review THOSE later tonight too) returns and I hope it is sooner rather than later. The world would be an empty and depressing place should you lose your inspiration for too long... and I would be lost without your divine work.
I truly hope that you recover from such disgustingly appalling treatment, and I hope that when you do - you bring with you the next fantastic addition's to your Harry Potter works
5/20/2012 c1 DawnScarlet19610
I didn't really like Ron's POV. I'd much rather Harry and Voldemort. Didn't really like Snape's either. I don't feel that you really captured Ron or Snape properly. Could you do Harry and Voldemort next? I like where this is going, but it's supposed to be a Harry/Voldemort story. I don't care about Ron and Snape.
I didn't really like Ron's POV. I'd much rather Harry and Voldemort. Didn't really like Snape's either. I don't feel that you really captured Ron or Snape properly. Could you do Harry and Voldemort next? I like where this is going, but it's supposed to be a Harry/Voldemort story. I don't care about Ron and Snape.
5/19/2012 c1 oo
woah! more please.
woah! more please.