for I carry your picture in my wallet4/23 c5 Guest
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I really want to see this story to the end. Peace. Love . Write!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I really want to see this story to the end. Peace. Love . Write!
1/18 c5 Guest
okaay, time for you to dig yourself out of this hole
okaay, time for you to dig yourself out of this hole
1/18 c1 Guest
beauty is in the eye of the beholder, much shorter than writing all that crap. also. costed not coasted
beauty is in the eye of the beholder, much shorter than writing all that crap. also. costed not coasted
1/11 c5 
2EmlynMara
I'm surprised that Lizzy hasn't picked up that Darcy was injured - Caroline did specifically mention it, and the rehab, and the inability to return for another tour. She seems bright and should have put more pieces together. I do not like her mother or Lydia. They seem downright nasty and vicious. It's nice that she has at least Jane and her father on her side. The story is definitely worth continuing, imho.
2EmlynMaraI'm surprised that Lizzy hasn't picked up that Darcy was injured - Caroline did specifically mention it, and the rehab, and the inability to return for another tour. She seems bright and should have put more pieces together. I do not like her mother or Lydia. They seem downright nasty and vicious. It's nice that she has at least Jane and her father on her side. The story is definitely worth continuing, imho.
8/23/2012 c5 Guest
Brilliant story so far, I like Darcy as a soldier, it is a different twist then most other FF. I am really looking forward for an update on the story even if it is been a while since you last updated. So I hope you do it soon.
Brilliant story so far, I like Darcy as a soldier, it is a different twist then most other FF. I am really looking forward for an update on the story even if it is been a while since you last updated. So I hope you do it soon.
6/12/2012 c5 1Pluxu
It was a pain to dance with me...though I begin to suspect it was because his leg had been hurt in the war. Was what I was hoping for. Fruitlessly apparently...)
1PluxuIt was a pain to dance with me...though I begin to suspect it was because his leg had been hurt in the war. Was what I was hoping for. Fruitlessly apparently...)
6/11/2012 c5 4leafclover0120
Good chapter. I love that Will comforted Lizzy although it does seem out of character.
Good chapter. I love that Will comforted Lizzy although it does seem out of character.
6/5/2012 c4 15Whosepride
I like your story so far. There are quite a few spelling errors. Correcting them would be a welcome addition.
Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work!
15WhoseprideI like your story so far. There are quite a few spelling errors. Correcting them would be a welcome addition.
Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work!
6/4/2012 c4 Elisabeth
This is a wonderful setting and story so i hope that you update soon :-p
This is a wonderful setting and story so i hope that you update soon :-p
5/31/2012 c3 5Dragongirl224
I really like your story so far. There are quite a few word mix ups that make it a little distracting, but it's a good concept.
To do a line break, click Edit/preview before adding the chapter to your story, go down and put your cursor where you want your line break to be, and click the button that is just a single line in the editing bar. It's that sixth one in, rigt beside the centre text option
Hope I helped!
Dragongirl
5Dragongirl224I really like your story so far. There are quite a few word mix ups that make it a little distracting, but it's a good concept.
To do a line break, click Edit/preview before adding the chapter to your story, go down and put your cursor where you want your line break to be, and click the button that is just a single line in the editing bar. It's that sixth one in, rigt beside the centre text option
Hope I helped!
Dragongirl
5/25/2012 c3 1ILoveCherryLimeade
Thank you for the new chapter. I was excited about the first meeting can't wait to see more.
1ILoveCherryLimeadeThank you for the new chapter. I was excited about the first meeting can't wait to see more.
5/24/2012 c3 Avanell
Interesting update...loved the Twilight quip. Made one while testing out a report the other day (among others); office staff laughed at it ;)
Interesting update...loved the Twilight quip. Made one while testing out a report the other day (among others); office staff laughed at it ;)