for Parents9/28/2012 c3 thedarkenchanter63
Dr. Barlow kinda scares me... No wonder she turned out the way she did.
Dr. Barlow kinda scares me... No wonder she turned out the way she did.
5/25/2012 c2 
4EllieStone
Awwwww, now I've got all sorts of Newkirk feelings. Great job with that. Update soon!
4EllieStoneAwwwww, now I've got all sorts of Newkirk feelings. Great job with that. Update soon!
5/25/2012 c2 10Anchorgurl1
Yay! Awsomesauce! This is great and I like how you did an explanation of the da!
10Anchorgurl1Yay! Awsomesauce! This is great and I like how you did an explanation of the da!
5/25/2012 c2 5Magical Marnie
I absolutely love this fic! I haven't seen a genuinely well-written fic like this in a while and it's quite refreshing to have a realistic story. So thank you for that, and also, your writing is amazing! I really look forward to reading everything you write :)
Now I have a request. Can you write about Dr. Barlow's parents next? I'm quite curious about what they were like. And can you, at some point, write about Newkirk's father? I'm wondering how his relationship with Newkirk was...
Great writing, and I look forward to reading your next chapters!
5Magical MarnieI absolutely love this fic! I haven't seen a genuinely well-written fic like this in a while and it's quite refreshing to have a realistic story. So thank you for that, and also, your writing is amazing! I really look forward to reading everything you write :)
Now I have a request. Can you write about Dr. Barlow's parents next? I'm quite curious about what they were like. And can you, at some point, write about Newkirk's father? I'm wondering how his relationship with Newkirk was...
Great writing, and I look forward to reading your next chapters!
5/24/2012 c1 8Winterowl312
Awww... That was so sweet. Seriously, I was almost crying. I would love it if you wrote more of these.
Winterowl312
8Winterowl312Awww... That was so sweet. Seriously, I was almost crying. I would love it if you wrote more of these.
Winterowl312
5/22/2012 c1 10Anchorgurl1
You should do one showing Newkirk an his ma(I don't think he has a da) just before she sends him off to war!
10Anchorgurl1You should do one showing Newkirk an his ma(I don't think he has a da) just before she sends him off to war!
5/21/2012 c1 4EllieStone
Oh, this is gorgeous! I really love reading anything that elaborates on Deryn's family and her relationship with them, and this is just perfect. I think you've really captured her voice well here. Keep it up :D
4EllieStoneOh, this is gorgeous! I really love reading anything that elaborates on Deryn's family and her relationship with them, and this is just perfect. I think you've really captured her voice well here. Keep it up :D
5/21/2012 c1 jibblitmuffins3675
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE IT! I would have cried, but my sis is in the room with me. :3
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE IT! I would have cried, but my sis is in the room with me. :3