for Things That Go Bump In The Night12/16/2012 c11 
2badwolfette21
Damn u continue noooowwwww I refuse to think that she is dead continue! Gaaaahhhh what am I supposed to do jjjeeesssuuuusss continue u heartless bastard!
Don't take that literally... Seriously don't take offense cuz I need u to continue this story now!
2badwolfette21Damn u continue noooowwwww I refuse to think that she is dead continue! Gaaaahhhh what am I supposed to do jjjeeesssuuuusss continue u heartless bastard!
Don't take that literally... Seriously don't take offense cuz I need u to continue this story now!
10/22/2012 c11 Lasonya
Damn I need more!
Damn I need more!
8/10/2012 c11 36francis2
Oh no, Riley! Please write more, now Steve won't rest until Wo Fat is finally done for.
36francis2Oh no, Riley! Please write more, now Steve won't rest until Wo Fat is finally done for.
6/20/2012 c6 francis2
Sometimes I have a hard time figuring out who is speaking in a dialogue you write. Would be easier with some description. And it bugs me that you don't use any 'apostrophe'. But I really like the storyline. How did Steve get prove that Spike was a vampire? I think I missed something there.
Sometimes I have a hard time figuring out who is speaking in a dialogue you write. Would be easier with some description. And it bugs me that you don't use any 'apostrophe'. But I really like the storyline. How did Steve get prove that Spike was a vampire? I think I missed something there.
6/16/2012 c5 maya
great chapter, thanks for sharing ;]
great chapter, thanks for sharing ;]
6/16/2012 c5 francis2
Wow, this is good. So Victor is Spike with darker hair? Can't wait to see where this is heading.
Wow, this is good. So Victor is Spike with darker hair? Can't wait to see where this is heading.
6/6/2012 c4 francis2
Oh Steve, you just don't do something like that. Didn't you remember you were a fugitive once, too? Did you arrest Max, huh? Can't wait to read more.
Oh Steve, you just don't do something like that. Didn't you remember you were a fugitive once, too? Did you arrest Max, huh? Can't wait to read more.