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16Karalora
Nice to see more SatW fans taking the plunge into writing. :) I've seen you do a lot of fanart of these two over on deviantART and I'm interested to see how you develop the pairing in a different medium.
I'm a little confused by the backstory though. Did Scotland and Sister England already know each other? Or is this their first meeting?
As a note for writing in general, each line of dialogue should be its own paragraph. You have a few paragraphs here with some back-and-forth conversation and it's all mashed up.
16KaraloraNice to see more SatW fans taking the plunge into writing. :) I've seen you do a lot of fanart of these two over on deviantART and I'm interested to see how you develop the pairing in a different medium.
I'm a little confused by the backstory though. Did Scotland and Sister England already know each other? Or is this their first meeting?
As a note for writing in general, each line of dialogue should be its own paragraph. You have a few paragraphs here with some back-and-forth conversation and it's all mashed up.