for Our Master's Legacy3/8 c8 Maxinum-McDreich
Read this in about two sittings, and very much enjoyed everything. Actually, my head's already accidentally believing that this is an actual sequel, it's so well written, I see it very well in my head.
I look forward to reading more. Thankyou very much
Read this in about two sittings, and very much enjoyed everything. Actually, my head's already accidentally believing that this is an actual sequel, it's so well written, I see it very well in my head.
I look forward to reading more. Thankyou very much
3/6 c8 
4HarpieKing07
Action packed chapter. Nice... hoo boy... wasnt an easy fight for them. The A10 and A11 seemed to have an almost human characters... wonder whats the story behind them... and why they didnt self-destruct like the first As. Positively loved the hero teamwork - gee... Invisi-gal and Ebony make a powerfull duo. Also I see a potentional love interest for our dear Ebony :) Wonder where Multi-Jack ended up and how did Quick Flash, GC and their team deal with A9. Already looking forward to the next chapter.
4HarpieKing07Action packed chapter. Nice... hoo boy... wasnt an easy fight for them. The A10 and A11 seemed to have an almost human characters... wonder whats the story behind them... and why they didnt self-destruct like the first As. Positively loved the hero teamwork - gee... Invisi-gal and Ebony make a powerfull duo. Also I see a potentional love interest for our dear Ebony :) Wonder where Multi-Jack ended up and how did Quick Flash, GC and their team deal with A9. Already looking forward to the next chapter.
1/16 c7 HarpieKing07
The story is very cool I cant wait to see what happens next :)
The old characters are nicely done and the new ones are amazing. Even the Parr kids with their super identities... plus the new teenage supers are also cool. Dingo, Intagi-Bill, Megumi and the rest, hm... I think theyd be cool as a crime-fighting team, under the leadership of Quick-flash and GC. And of course, Dash and Anabel are a cute couple. I cant wait to see, what youve got in store for them...
Plus you gave a nice background story to Anabel...
The story is very cool I cant wait to see what happens next :)
The old characters are nicely done and the new ones are amazing. Even the Parr kids with their super identities... plus the new teenage supers are also cool. Dingo, Intagi-Bill, Megumi and the rest, hm... I think theyd be cool as a crime-fighting team, under the leadership of Quick-flash and GC. And of course, Dash and Anabel are a cute couple. I cant wait to see, what youve got in store for them...
Plus you gave a nice background story to Anabel...
8/29/2012 c6 tinkfan14
Wow, this story is so awesome! Hey, dont feel bad. Besides school starting for me, I have also gotten a music making app and Colors 3D for my 3DS and I am totally addicted to them. I also ran out of lives in Level 3 part 2 in the underminer game, so my story hasnt been making much progress because of that. Omg, I could never create that many unique supers! I love GC a lot, and Ebony sounds awesome! Hmmm... its a real mystery as to who "the master" is still.
Wow, this story is so awesome! Hey, dont feel bad. Besides school starting for me, I have also gotten a music making app and Colors 3D for my 3DS and I am totally addicted to them. I also ran out of lives in Level 3 part 2 in the underminer game, so my story hasnt been making much progress because of that. Omg, I could never create that many unique supers! I love GC a lot, and Ebony sounds awesome! Hmmm... its a real mystery as to who "the master" is still.
8/2/2012 c5 LTA
Sooo, I really really like it. And I think you should update soon. I'm kinda hoping the Tony isn't REALLY A duche bag and that he will back together with Vi.
Sooo, I really really like it. And I think you should update soon. I'm kinda hoping the Tony isn't REALLY A duche bag and that he will back together with Vi.
7/25/2012 c5 5tinkfan14
Yay! A new chapter! Yeah, I had a problem stopping my chapter for another story. I could go on and on... Hmmm...GC reminds me of Merida. (bow and arrows!) Idk if she is supposed to be super Merida or something. :D I cant w8 for the training session! Id better go work on my Incredibles story now...
5tinkfan14Yay! A new chapter! Yeah, I had a problem stopping my chapter for another story. I could go on and on... Hmmm...GC reminds me of Merida. (bow and arrows!) Idk if she is supposed to be super Merida or something. :D I cant w8 for the training session! Id better go work on my Incredibles story now...
6/11/2012 c3 tinkfan14
Wow!You are absolutely amazing!This should be made into a movie! I cant w8 2 see what happens next!
Wow!You are absolutely amazing!This should be made into a movie! I cant w8 2 see what happens next!
6/5/2012 c2 tinkfan14
Ooohh... This is going to be an awesome story! I love The Incredibles! They have such neat lives and any story about them is captivating, especially yours! The robot reminds me of the Underminer's robots. I've been playing the video game of it lately, and actually started a story on here about my version of The Rise of the Underminer, with the same title. You should read it sometime! Ive more of Violet to the story.
Ooohh... This is going to be an awesome story! I love The Incredibles! They have such neat lives and any story about them is captivating, especially yours! The robot reminds me of the Underminer's robots. I've been playing the video game of it lately, and actually started a story on here about my version of The Rise of the Underminer, with the same title. You should read it sometime! Ive more of Violet to the story.
6/3/2012 c1 tinkfan14
Awesome story, but um... I'm actually in the middle of writing a story with the main character besides Violet named Magnegirl. I just wanted to let you know Im not copying you or anything oon purpose. I would never do that! In fact shes younger and has a different colored outfit abd shes not black ! So thats different than yours... :)
Awesome story, but um... I'm actually in the middle of writing a story with the main character besides Violet named Magnegirl. I just wanted to let you know Im not copying you or anything oon purpose. I would never do that! In fact shes younger and has a different colored outfit abd shes not black ! So thats different than yours... :)
6/3/2012 c1 2Samtastic V2.0
Whoa! Wonder if the kids are gonna get in trouble. And I wonder if Violet's gonna be mad at Kari. And what's going on with Tony?
Update soon :)
2Samtastic V2.0Whoa! Wonder if the kids are gonna get in trouble. And I wonder if Violet's gonna be mad at Kari. And what's going on with Tony?
Update soon :)
6/2/2012 c1 Andy Nonomous
Looks good so fAR. cAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO THE KIDS. hOPE THEY DON'T GET (sorry, just realized c"capital lock" was on) in too much trouble. And can't wait to see what's up with Tony.
Update Soon
Looks good so fAR. cAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO THE KIDS. hOPE THEY DON'T GET (sorry, just realized c"capital lock" was on) in too much trouble. And can't wait to see what's up with Tony.
Update Soon