for SYOC Unite6/4/2012 c5 The Apprentice of Pisces
Yo. :) I can't wait for the story. :3
Some personal advice for you and/or your co. writer:
1. I recommend that when you post the story, all the author's notes/chapters, forms, etc. should be removed immediately. That way, you would have a less chance of being reported.
2. Put an A/N somewhere that has a list of the characters being used, whether they're main or minor, etc.
3. If you have an update schedule, tell your readers when you will be updating. If not, then forget what I just said. :3
4. Have fun writing! If you need help with anything, don't be shy to ask the submitters and such!
A Bit of Writing advice:
1. Don't be too clinched (that's an obvious one...).
2. Be descriptive, but not too much, seeing that this is an SYOC. In other words, don't go introducing the many new characters at once, because it gets incredulously confusing. Put more detail into them as you go along.
3. Make the story interesting! Be focused a good deal on the main plot, but add lots of twists and turns!
Heh. Not much, but I guess it somewhat helps to know that someone out there wants to be of your assistance. :)
I await your next update.
-The-Daughter-of-Deaths-
Yo. :) I can't wait for the story. :3
Some personal advice for you and/or your co. writer:
1. I recommend that when you post the story, all the author's notes/chapters, forms, etc. should be removed immediately. That way, you would have a less chance of being reported.
2. Put an A/N somewhere that has a list of the characters being used, whether they're main or minor, etc.
3. If you have an update schedule, tell your readers when you will be updating. If not, then forget what I just said. :3
4. Have fun writing! If you need help with anything, don't be shy to ask the submitters and such!
A Bit of Writing advice:
1. Don't be too clinched (that's an obvious one...).
2. Be descriptive, but not too much, seeing that this is an SYOC. In other words, don't go introducing the many new characters at once, because it gets incredulously confusing. Put more detail into them as you go along.
3. Make the story interesting! Be focused a good deal on the main plot, but add lots of twists and turns!
Heh. Not much, but I guess it somewhat helps to know that someone out there wants to be of your assistance. :)
I await your next update.
-The-Daughter-of-Deaths-
6/4/2012 c5 
1calamity11
I'm confused, when you say story do you mean it as in each chapter? OR you have multple things planned after this story?
1calamity11I'm confused, when you say story do you mean it as in each chapter? OR you have multple things planned after this story?
6/4/2012 c2 9Savvy the Hunter of Artemis
Basic Info
Name: Emily Lee May Chee Blake
Age: 15-ish
Godly parent: Apollo
Mortal parent: Amy Lee May Yan Blake, she's SUPER strict and is very straightforward on Emily. She always wants Emily to be the best in class and is a super competetive mom, she always force Emily to study day and night, even though Emily have ADHD Dylexsia. Once, Emily have a C- for her English test and she use her brother's basketball trophy (which was huge) and beat her untill she bleed and made her stand outside of the house (during winter with no coat and just in tank tops and shorts) the whole night for her to learn her lesson. Emily must lived up to her mom expectations or not she'll face the conscequences:
Must speak Mandrin at all times in the house or not get your mouth whacked with a pair of chopsticks on your mouth for every English word you utter
Must be ahead of the students in math for at least two years
If don't practice paino and violin for two hours a day, mom would burn all of her msuic CDs and iPods. [Once she was practicing piano with her mom and she can't get the song right, her mom said this: "IF YOU EVER GET ONE MORE DAMN NOTE WRONG ON THIS WRETCHED PAINO, I PROMISE YOU I'LL BURN ALL OF YOUR STUFFED TOYS!"
Must get straight A everytime or not must stand outside the house the entire night
Her mom is tough, super tough and has a heart made out of stone but Emily know deep inside her mom wants her to be the best. Her mother has dark silky hair and a pretty, kind Chinese face with fair skin and ruby red lips. She works as a law professor in Yale, we were all so surprise Apollo fall in love with someone who actually went into an Ivy League school
Mortal family: John Blake, a stepdad who treats Emily well enough and sometimes try and stop her mom from half killing Emily. He works as an author and has dark curly hair and dark brown eyes.
Hometown: Ashburn, Georgia. The peanut capital of the world, half the population is African American.
Appearance
Eye color: Ice green
Hair color: Black as night, silky and straight. Just like her mother.
Hair style: Slightly wavy, it's cut in layers to frame her angular face.
Skin color: Golden-ish yellow.
Height: 5'4 and that's plenty tall for a Chinese, mind you.
Body type: Petite, curvy and not too proky but not too thin.
Usual clothes: A huge variation of olive, black, brown, navy or blue tops, tank-tops or long-sleeves tops, simple jeans, black tights or normal shorts and sneakers or slippers.
Fall or Spring Clothing: Pretty much the same up there. But for the fall she would wear a t-shirt or a long sleeve with a light wool or leather jacket.
Winter Clothing: Thick wooly, furry jacket that made her looked buffer than ever and lost of layers of tops and light jackets underneath the thick jacket and tights with shorts or jeans with uggs.
Formal Clothing: Eh. The fanciest ever, if she get to choose, would be a silk black tank top and the least most fade-out jeans with her best pair of converse. But if her mother was there she would put on a burgundy, red-wine colored knee-lenght dress with thin delicate satin bands holding up her back, her hair would be tousled into delicate curls, she would be wearing one of her mom's satin strapped high heels and her lips would be colored into a very deep red. She would probably looked like an Asian vampire.
Pajamas: Simple heart shape boxers with a black comfy shirt.
Usual facial expression: Passive and friendly to others. Nervous and slight-frightened with her mother.
Backstory: Her mother is Chinese and is strict on 'traditional' ways, in other words her mom is a sticker with good grades and the college Harvard. She lived with her mom for five years (the most horrible five years) and then John came in and her mom got...humbler and when a satyr found her and her mother (who knows) let her got to camp as long as she stayed for the school year and studied with the Athena cabin for two hours and practice regularly her violin and piano.
Favorite type of weather: Summer. It's beautiful no matter what and she gets to go to camp and get away from her mom.
Least favorite type of weather: It's the worse thing ever, she hates the cold. And is the worst part of the year to stand outside for the rest of the night because you got a C on your test.
Favorite food: Chinese food. She lives in it everyday.
Least favorite food: Eh. Indian food, seafood, and many others. Though her mom trained (more like yell at) her to not be fussy with food so secretly she dislikes it but she force it down her throat.
How they act around other people: Nice, polite and respectful, her mother teached her the respectful terms Chinese use.
How they act when they're by themselves: Moody, tired and stressed.
Relationship with their mortal family: With John is alright, he take her out to baseball games (her mother disapprove obviously) for some 'fun' sometimes and with her mom...eh.
Personality: She's hyper-obedient. She always wants to impress people (forced in by her mom) and she's always very closed about her feelings. She's has her dad's optimistic, bubbly and friendly shiny ways but she can be a s firmed and harsh as her mother sometimes. She's polite, respectful and is what you call an 'angel' child on the outside but on the inside, she's sad that no matter how hard she tries her mother would never be sastisfied.
Other Likes: Playing the Piano and violin, at frist she HATES it. It was boring and unfun (that's when she was three) but as the years passed by, the music sort of calms her down and takes the stress down a bit. listening to music and seeing her mom in a good mood and John's baseball games.
Dislikes: Her mom being mad at her, bad grades (for OBVIOUS) reasons, people calling her a 'goody-two shoe' and rock, loud msuic. She also hates it when ever she did something good, her mother doesn't compliment her or even give her a reaasuring smile.
Fatal Flaw: Doubt. It's everywhere. Stress.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to): An African American friend Miya, who is actually the one who found out she was a demigod, Miya is a child of Aphrodite), Sophia Turner, she's awesome and she's cool and kinda reminded her of her own self (well, except for the whole crazy, raging mom thing) and this boy called Aaron Dunst, when she first met him she was blushing like amd and she still have a crush on him. Just one teensy bit. The whole Athena cabin, she's probably the only Apollo kid who can talk to Athena kids about algebra.
Enemies: Ares and Hades, they don't like her too much.
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?: Aaron Dunst. He's the child of Dementer with curly, ruffly dark blonde hair and jade green eyes taht make her knees weak. He's a freak for nature and can be a sweet softie, but he has a tough side too sometimes. He's sort of like Peeta from the Hunger Games.
Powers (optional): Healing and knowing when people are lying.
Year Round? Summer?: Summer camper because no way in hell would her mom let her stay year round.
Extra: Nope.
Biggest Fear: Her mom. Seriously, it's her mom.
Weapon(s): She sucks at Archery which is really a disappointment for an Apollo kids, but she's an A-Okay with the dagger that, Malcolm help her find.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: Some fading brusies from her mom.
Strengths: Math, art, truth-picking, healing and is sort-of good with the dagger.
Weaknesses: English (SHE HATES POETRY, which is kinda funny considering Apollo is the god of poetry), archery, swordplay, running, anything to do with sports and being 'rebellious' with her mom.
Main or minor character?: Eh. It's up to you but it would be nice if she was Main. :)
9Savvy the Hunter of ArtemisBasic Info
Name: Emily Lee May Chee Blake
Age: 15-ish
Godly parent: Apollo
Mortal parent: Amy Lee May Yan Blake, she's SUPER strict and is very straightforward on Emily. She always wants Emily to be the best in class and is a super competetive mom, she always force Emily to study day and night, even though Emily have ADHD Dylexsia. Once, Emily have a C- for her English test and she use her brother's basketball trophy (which was huge) and beat her untill she bleed and made her stand outside of the house (during winter with no coat and just in tank tops and shorts) the whole night for her to learn her lesson. Emily must lived up to her mom expectations or not she'll face the conscequences:
Must speak Mandrin at all times in the house or not get your mouth whacked with a pair of chopsticks on your mouth for every English word you utter
Must be ahead of the students in math for at least two years
If don't practice paino and violin for two hours a day, mom would burn all of her msuic CDs and iPods. [Once she was practicing piano with her mom and she can't get the song right, her mom said this: "IF YOU EVER GET ONE MORE DAMN NOTE WRONG ON THIS WRETCHED PAINO, I PROMISE YOU I'LL BURN ALL OF YOUR STUFFED TOYS!"
Must get straight A everytime or not must stand outside the house the entire night
Her mom is tough, super tough and has a heart made out of stone but Emily know deep inside her mom wants her to be the best. Her mother has dark silky hair and a pretty, kind Chinese face with fair skin and ruby red lips. She works as a law professor in Yale, we were all so surprise Apollo fall in love with someone who actually went into an Ivy League school
Mortal family: John Blake, a stepdad who treats Emily well enough and sometimes try and stop her mom from half killing Emily. He works as an author and has dark curly hair and dark brown eyes.
Hometown: Ashburn, Georgia. The peanut capital of the world, half the population is African American.
Appearance
Eye color: Ice green
Hair color: Black as night, silky and straight. Just like her mother.
Hair style: Slightly wavy, it's cut in layers to frame her angular face.
Skin color: Golden-ish yellow.
Height: 5'4 and that's plenty tall for a Chinese, mind you.
Body type: Petite, curvy and not too proky but not too thin.
Usual clothes: A huge variation of olive, black, brown, navy or blue tops, tank-tops or long-sleeves tops, simple jeans, black tights or normal shorts and sneakers or slippers.
Fall or Spring Clothing: Pretty much the same up there. But for the fall she would wear a t-shirt or a long sleeve with a light wool or leather jacket.
Winter Clothing: Thick wooly, furry jacket that made her looked buffer than ever and lost of layers of tops and light jackets underneath the thick jacket and tights with shorts or jeans with uggs.
Formal Clothing: Eh. The fanciest ever, if she get to choose, would be a silk black tank top and the least most fade-out jeans with her best pair of converse. But if her mother was there she would put on a burgundy, red-wine colored knee-lenght dress with thin delicate satin bands holding up her back, her hair would be tousled into delicate curls, she would be wearing one of her mom's satin strapped high heels and her lips would be colored into a very deep red. She would probably looked like an Asian vampire.
Pajamas: Simple heart shape boxers with a black comfy shirt.
Usual facial expression: Passive and friendly to others. Nervous and slight-frightened with her mother.
Backstory: Her mother is Chinese and is strict on 'traditional' ways, in other words her mom is a sticker with good grades and the college Harvard. She lived with her mom for five years (the most horrible five years) and then John came in and her mom got...humbler and when a satyr found her and her mother (who knows) let her got to camp as long as she stayed for the school year and studied with the Athena cabin for two hours and practice regularly her violin and piano.
Favorite type of weather: Summer. It's beautiful no matter what and she gets to go to camp and get away from her mom.
Least favorite type of weather: It's the worse thing ever, she hates the cold. And is the worst part of the year to stand outside for the rest of the night because you got a C on your test.
Favorite food: Chinese food. She lives in it everyday.
Least favorite food: Eh. Indian food, seafood, and many others. Though her mom trained (more like yell at) her to not be fussy with food so secretly she dislikes it but she force it down her throat.
How they act around other people: Nice, polite and respectful, her mother teached her the respectful terms Chinese use.
How they act when they're by themselves: Moody, tired and stressed.
Relationship with their mortal family: With John is alright, he take her out to baseball games (her mother disapprove obviously) for some 'fun' sometimes and with her mom...eh.
Personality: She's hyper-obedient. She always wants to impress people (forced in by her mom) and she's always very closed about her feelings. She's has her dad's optimistic, bubbly and friendly shiny ways but she can be a s firmed and harsh as her mother sometimes. She's polite, respectful and is what you call an 'angel' child on the outside but on the inside, she's sad that no matter how hard she tries her mother would never be sastisfied.
Other Likes: Playing the Piano and violin, at frist she HATES it. It was boring and unfun (that's when she was three) but as the years passed by, the music sort of calms her down and takes the stress down a bit. listening to music and seeing her mom in a good mood and John's baseball games.
Dislikes: Her mom being mad at her, bad grades (for OBVIOUS) reasons, people calling her a 'goody-two shoe' and rock, loud msuic. She also hates it when ever she did something good, her mother doesn't compliment her or even give her a reaasuring smile.
Fatal Flaw: Doubt. It's everywhere. Stress.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to): An African American friend Miya, who is actually the one who found out she was a demigod, Miya is a child of Aphrodite), Sophia Turner, she's awesome and she's cool and kinda reminded her of her own self (well, except for the whole crazy, raging mom thing) and this boy called Aaron Dunst, when she first met him she was blushing like amd and she still have a crush on him. Just one teensy bit. The whole Athena cabin, she's probably the only Apollo kid who can talk to Athena kids about algebra.
Enemies: Ares and Hades, they don't like her too much.
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?: Aaron Dunst. He's the child of Dementer with curly, ruffly dark blonde hair and jade green eyes taht make her knees weak. He's a freak for nature and can be a sweet softie, but he has a tough side too sometimes. He's sort of like Peeta from the Hunger Games.
Powers (optional): Healing and knowing when people are lying.
Year Round? Summer?: Summer camper because no way in hell would her mom let her stay year round.
Extra: Nope.
Biggest Fear: Her mom. Seriously, it's her mom.
Weapon(s): She sucks at Archery which is really a disappointment for an Apollo kids, but she's an A-Okay with the dagger that, Malcolm help her find.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: Some fading brusies from her mom.
Strengths: Math, art, truth-picking, healing and is sort-of good with the dagger.
Weaknesses: English (SHE HATES POETRY, which is kinda funny considering Apollo is the god of poetry), archery, swordplay, running, anything to do with sports and being 'rebellious' with her mom.
Main or minor character?: Eh. It's up to you but it would be nice if she was Main. :)
6/3/2012 c1 1Yzonnev
Haha why are all those people submitting characters at the reviews xD? Haven't they read what you said... Well atleast ehhm I already just submitted my character (Gabriel Style, son of Aphrodite) but you wanted a few ideas for the story so well here I am :P;
I don't know if they are any good but I'll just say a few things I can come up too and I hope you like any. As for any questions or things please just PM me :P
-How about a new enemy of the Olympians? Then you have quite the space to write about any part you want...
-You could say there is an object stolen from one of the Olympians or even a god(dess) abducted and there is a quest needed to release him/her.
-There could be a challenge between campers who can find the worst monster living at the moment and in small groups they have to go out in the wild and capture (or kill) one.
-You could just describe quite a time at camp (capture the flag, maybe a hunter's visit, a few struggles and fights, maybe some new games or a new staff member.. some romance)
These are just a few ideas I now came up with but when you need more or want to develop an idea, please just PM (or IM?) me haha
x
Yzonnev
1YzonnevHaha why are all those people submitting characters at the reviews xD? Haven't they read what you said... Well atleast ehhm I already just submitted my character (Gabriel Style, son of Aphrodite) but you wanted a few ideas for the story so well here I am :P;
I don't know if they are any good but I'll just say a few things I can come up too and I hope you like any. As for any questions or things please just PM me :P
-How about a new enemy of the Olympians? Then you have quite the space to write about any part you want...
-You could say there is an object stolen from one of the Olympians or even a god(dess) abducted and there is a quest needed to release him/her.
-There could be a challenge between campers who can find the worst monster living at the moment and in small groups they have to go out in the wild and capture (or kill) one.
-You could just describe quite a time at camp (capture the flag, maybe a hunter's visit, a few struggles and fights, maybe some new games or a new staff member.. some romance)
These are just a few ideas I now came up with but when you need more or want to develop an idea, please just PM (or IM?) me haha
x
Yzonnev
6/3/2012 c1 4Wintertrain
Basic Info
Name: Sophia Turner
Age: 17
Godly parent: Aphrodite
Mortal parent: Gregory Turner – a politician (any type is fine by me)
Mortal family: Step-mother named Victoria Hunt-Turner, older step-brother named Alexander Hunt
Hometown: Lincoln, Illinois
Appearance
Eye color: Intimidating blue
Hair color: Sandy blonde
Hair style: A side ponytail for the most part; when occasionally down, her hair is long and straight
Skin color: Somewhere between tan and fair
Height: 5’7”
Body type: Attractive build (uh, duh) with just the right amount of muscles so she doesn’t look like a freak.
Usual clothes: Jean shorts with her Camp Half-Blood t-shirt. Rope necklace with six beads on it.
Fall or Spring Clothing: Oddly patterned pants that she somehow manages to make look good paired with her camp shirt
Winter Clothing: A stylish leather jacket and dark skinny jeans.
Formal Clothing: A little black dress
Pajamas: Plaid boxers and a Hawaii Rainbows shirt (it’s a college, don’t ask why I love it so much)
Usual facial expression: A smile and big eyes, or laughter, because she finds everything funny and is nice to everyone (except monsters)
Backstory: Lived in Illinois with her father, step-mother, and step-brother for several years until she started to fail school at age 10 – not because she didn’t try, but because she couldn’t read anything because of her dyslexia. Her dad sent her to Camp Half-Blood, which he told her was a boot camp for troubled kids like her. Despite making it sound like Sophia was a bad person, they still have a close relationship.
Favorite type of weather: Snow
Least favorite type of weather: Rain
Favorite food: Grilled Cheese
Least favorite food: Veggie Pizza (she hates being healthy)
How they act around other people: Generally is a happy and relaxed person, but sometimes gets easily irritated depending on the person.
How they act when they're by themselves: Neurotic (or, you know, easily worried and paranoid) and thoughtful
Relationship with their mortal family: Has a good relationship with father. Step-mother is practically her real mother. Step-brother is a bit annoying but is easy to get along with when he is in town.
Personality: Brave, caring, thoughtful, worrisome, a bit crazy, and definitely happy
Other Likes: Sophia is a sucker for old music and movies, like Star Wars or Ghostbusters
Dislikes: Rap. It literally makes no sense.
Fatal Flaw: Hubris (deadly pride). She feels like she can do anything and won’t give a second thought about it before trying to do so.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to): Gets along with Annabeth and the Athena Cabin, but is closely tied to the Apollo cabin, as if they were all siblings. Also likes her own cabin.
Enemies: Is not particularly fond of the Ares cabin.
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?: Once had a little thing going on with Michael Yew before he went missing in action. Likes smart-mouth, solid friend type of people. Does not necessarily go for looks, unlike the rest of her cabin.
Powers (optional): Speaks French fluently, just like Aphrodite.
Year Round? Summer?: Year round camper
Biggest Fear: Seeing people she knows die
Weapon(s): A sword that folds itself up into a cameo bracelet.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: Has a scar running diagonally from her shoulder to her hipbone. Received this from the Second Olympian War.
Strengths: Fairly good at archery, and is a good strategist. Also is amazing at hair and makeup.
Weaknesses: Speaking in front of important people
Main or minor character?: That’s up to you, isn’t it?
4WintertrainBasic Info
Name: Sophia Turner
Age: 17
Godly parent: Aphrodite
Mortal parent: Gregory Turner – a politician (any type is fine by me)
Mortal family: Step-mother named Victoria Hunt-Turner, older step-brother named Alexander Hunt
Hometown: Lincoln, Illinois
Appearance
Eye color: Intimidating blue
Hair color: Sandy blonde
Hair style: A side ponytail for the most part; when occasionally down, her hair is long and straight
Skin color: Somewhere between tan and fair
Height: 5’7”
Body type: Attractive build (uh, duh) with just the right amount of muscles so she doesn’t look like a freak.
Usual clothes: Jean shorts with her Camp Half-Blood t-shirt. Rope necklace with six beads on it.
Fall or Spring Clothing: Oddly patterned pants that she somehow manages to make look good paired with her camp shirt
Winter Clothing: A stylish leather jacket and dark skinny jeans.
Formal Clothing: A little black dress
Pajamas: Plaid boxers and a Hawaii Rainbows shirt (it’s a college, don’t ask why I love it so much)
Usual facial expression: A smile and big eyes, or laughter, because she finds everything funny and is nice to everyone (except monsters)
Backstory: Lived in Illinois with her father, step-mother, and step-brother for several years until she started to fail school at age 10 – not because she didn’t try, but because she couldn’t read anything because of her dyslexia. Her dad sent her to Camp Half-Blood, which he told her was a boot camp for troubled kids like her. Despite making it sound like Sophia was a bad person, they still have a close relationship.
Favorite type of weather: Snow
Least favorite type of weather: Rain
Favorite food: Grilled Cheese
Least favorite food: Veggie Pizza (she hates being healthy)
How they act around other people: Generally is a happy and relaxed person, but sometimes gets easily irritated depending on the person.
How they act when they're by themselves: Neurotic (or, you know, easily worried and paranoid) and thoughtful
Relationship with their mortal family: Has a good relationship with father. Step-mother is practically her real mother. Step-brother is a bit annoying but is easy to get along with when he is in town.
Personality: Brave, caring, thoughtful, worrisome, a bit crazy, and definitely happy
Other Likes: Sophia is a sucker for old music and movies, like Star Wars or Ghostbusters
Dislikes: Rap. It literally makes no sense.
Fatal Flaw: Hubris (deadly pride). She feels like she can do anything and won’t give a second thought about it before trying to do so.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to): Gets along with Annabeth and the Athena Cabin, but is closely tied to the Apollo cabin, as if they were all siblings. Also likes her own cabin.
Enemies: Is not particularly fond of the Ares cabin.
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?: Once had a little thing going on with Michael Yew before he went missing in action. Likes smart-mouth, solid friend type of people. Does not necessarily go for looks, unlike the rest of her cabin.
Powers (optional): Speaks French fluently, just like Aphrodite.
Year Round? Summer?: Year round camper
Biggest Fear: Seeing people she knows die
Weapon(s): A sword that folds itself up into a cameo bracelet.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: Has a scar running diagonally from her shoulder to her hipbone. Received this from the Second Olympian War.
Strengths: Fairly good at archery, and is a good strategist. Also is amazing at hair and makeup.
Weaknesses: Speaking in front of important people
Main or minor character?: That’s up to you, isn’t it?
6/3/2012 c4 Little purple bookworm
Here is a hunter of Artemis if you need one. I already submitted a daughter of ares.
Basic Info
Name:Angela "angie" watson
Age:15, would be 20
Godly parent:Apollo, is a hunter of Artemis
Mortal parent:Fred Watson
Mortal family:twin brother named James
Hometown:L.A.
Appearance
Eye color:green
Hair color:dark brown
Hair style:wavey
Skin color:Very tan
Height:5'5"
Body type:don't care
Usual clothes:black tee shirt and jeans
Fall or Spring Clothing:silver shirt and capris
Winter Clothing:silver parka and jeans
Formal Clothing:Long one shoulder silver dress
Pajamas:silver silk PJ's
Usual facial expression:small smile
Backstory:joined hunters to leave boys and travel the country
Favorite type of weather:around 70 degrees, sunny
Least favorite type of weather:burning hot summer days
Favorite food:moon pies ( is a real dessert!)
Least favorite food:red velvet cake
How they act around other people:funny and cheery
How they act when they're by themselves:mysterious
Relationship with their mortal family:keeps in touch
Personality:happy, funny, caring
Other Likes:being with friends, wolves
Dislikes:cocky boys, some daughters of Aphrodite
Fatal Flaw:hubris
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):Thalia, annabeth, most girls, some boys
Enemies:some daughters of aphrodite
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?:no
Powers (optional):none
Year Round? Summer?:summer, during winter she is with the hunters
Extra:
Biggest Fear:snakes
Weapon(s):knife, bow and arrow
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:small moon earrings
Strengths:loyal, small for age
Weaknesses:small for age ( you can add more)
Main or minor character?:don't care
Here is a hunter of Artemis if you need one. I already submitted a daughter of ares.
Basic Info
Name:Angela "angie" watson
Age:15, would be 20
Godly parent:Apollo, is a hunter of Artemis
Mortal parent:Fred Watson
Mortal family:twin brother named James
Hometown:L.A.
Appearance
Eye color:green
Hair color:dark brown
Hair style:wavey
Skin color:Very tan
Height:5'5"
Body type:don't care
Usual clothes:black tee shirt and jeans
Fall or Spring Clothing:silver shirt and capris
Winter Clothing:silver parka and jeans
Formal Clothing:Long one shoulder silver dress
Pajamas:silver silk PJ's
Usual facial expression:small smile
Backstory:joined hunters to leave boys and travel the country
Favorite type of weather:around 70 degrees, sunny
Least favorite type of weather:burning hot summer days
Favorite food:moon pies ( is a real dessert!)
Least favorite food:red velvet cake
How they act around other people:funny and cheery
How they act when they're by themselves:mysterious
Relationship with their mortal family:keeps in touch
Personality:happy, funny, caring
Other Likes:being with friends, wolves
Dislikes:cocky boys, some daughters of Aphrodite
Fatal Flaw:hubris
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):Thalia, annabeth, most girls, some boys
Enemies:some daughters of aphrodite
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?:no
Powers (optional):none
Year Round? Summer?:summer, during winter she is with the hunters
Extra:
Biggest Fear:snakes
Weapon(s):knife, bow and arrow
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:small moon earrings
Strengths:loyal, small for age
Weaknesses:small for age ( you can add more)
Main or minor character?:don't care
6/3/2012 c4 7junkfoodjamie
I know it says Apollo wasn't one of the parents used, but when I PM'ed you, I asked to be Apollo's daughter. Are you just using multiple from each?
Just curious :)
M.i.T.
7junkfoodjamieI know it says Apollo wasn't one of the parents used, but when I PM'ed you, I asked to be Apollo's daughter. Are you just using multiple from each?
Just curious :)
M.i.T.
6/2/2012 c3 He4artBreaker101
Basic Info
Name:Alisa night
Age:16(she would be 116 but she's a hunter)
Godly parent:Ares
Mortal parent:Rachel Night
Mortal family:mom, Noah( little brother)
Hometown:Greece
Appearance:she has long wavy black hair. She also has a ring that turns into a sword.
Eye color:silver and specks of red
Hair color:black
Hair style:Long and wavy
Skin color:tan
Height:5ft 10"
Body type:lean and muscular
Usual clothes:she wears a hunting boots and a leather jacket. Jeans and a top.
Fall or Spring Clothing:Usual clothes
Winter Clothing:usual clothes
Formal Clothing:she has a black no sleeve dress. It has silver swirls that start at the hip.
Pajamas:tank top and shorts
Usual facial expression:Blank
Backstory:she's been with the hunters since she was betrayed by the one she loved. So she joined the hunt. Her famliy died by his father because they loved eachother. He left her so her fatal flaw is that she doesn't trust easily because she doesn't want her past to repeat itself.
Favorite type of weather:sunny days
Least favorite type of weather:Snow. It's harder to move if your on the hunt
Favorite food:stew
Least favorite food:Vegies
How they act around other people:She usaly has an emotional mask up so no one can tell what she fells.
How they act when they're by themselves:she usaly plays guitar and writes.
Relationship with their mortal family:all of her family is dead.
Personality:She can be very protective. She also has a grudge with boys.
Other Likes:She likes to play her guitar.
Dislikes:Preps, Drew, Bully's
Fatal Flaw:Bad memories. She has alought of them.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):Percy, Annabeth, Nico, Leo, Thalia, Jason, Piper and Grover
Enemies:Drew, preps, and bully's
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?:Leo or Nico
Powers (optional):she has all the powers of a daughter of Ares.
Year Round? Summer?:Year Rounder
Extra:She's a hunter
Biggest Fear:Falling in love with someone that will break her heart.
Weapon(s):She has a sword named heartbreaker.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:She has a scar from her eyebrow to her cheek. that she got trying to protect her family
Strengths:swordsmanship
Weaknesses:love
Main or minor character?:please make it a main character because no one ever chooses me.
Basic Info
Name:Alisa night
Age:16(she would be 116 but she's a hunter)
Godly parent:Ares
Mortal parent:Rachel Night
Mortal family:mom, Noah( little brother)
Hometown:Greece
Appearance:she has long wavy black hair. She also has a ring that turns into a sword.
Eye color:silver and specks of red
Hair color:black
Hair style:Long and wavy
Skin color:tan
Height:5ft 10"
Body type:lean and muscular
Usual clothes:she wears a hunting boots and a leather jacket. Jeans and a top.
Fall or Spring Clothing:Usual clothes
Winter Clothing:usual clothes
Formal Clothing:she has a black no sleeve dress. It has silver swirls that start at the hip.
Pajamas:tank top and shorts
Usual facial expression:Blank
Backstory:she's been with the hunters since she was betrayed by the one she loved. So she joined the hunt. Her famliy died by his father because they loved eachother. He left her so her fatal flaw is that she doesn't trust easily because she doesn't want her past to repeat itself.
Favorite type of weather:sunny days
Least favorite type of weather:Snow. It's harder to move if your on the hunt
Favorite food:stew
Least favorite food:Vegies
How they act around other people:She usaly has an emotional mask up so no one can tell what she fells.
How they act when they're by themselves:she usaly plays guitar and writes.
Relationship with their mortal family:all of her family is dead.
Personality:She can be very protective. She also has a grudge with boys.
Other Likes:She likes to play her guitar.
Dislikes:Preps, Drew, Bully's
Fatal Flaw:Bad memories. She has alought of them.
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):Percy, Annabeth, Nico, Leo, Thalia, Jason, Piper and Grover
Enemies:Drew, preps, and bully's
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?:Leo or Nico
Powers (optional):she has all the powers of a daughter of Ares.
Year Round? Summer?:Year Rounder
Extra:She's a hunter
Biggest Fear:Falling in love with someone that will break her heart.
Weapon(s):She has a sword named heartbreaker.
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:She has a scar from her eyebrow to her cheek. that she got trying to protect her family
Strengths:swordsmanship
Weaknesses:love
Main or minor character?:please make it a main character because no one ever chooses me.
6/2/2012 c1 Little purple bookworm
I sent you a daughter of Ares, but in chap. 3 you said you needed one, so her she is...again.
Name:Melissa robyn jones
Age:15
Godly parent:ares
Mortal parent:mom, Sarah jones
Mortal family:only her mom
Hometown:orlando florida
Appearance:
Eye color:fierce gray
Hair color:black
Hair style:curly, goes to small of back
Skin color:normal tan
Height:5'8"
Body type:muscular and lean
Usual clothes:red tank top and shorts
Fall or Spring Clothing:capri pants and loose fitting tee shirt
Winter Clothing:red jacket with white fur collar, jeans
Formal Clothing:red dress,
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Pajamas:red silk PJ's
Usual facial expression:depends on mood
Backstory:her mom was killed when Melissa was 11, but she escaped. for 3 years, she was running from monsters and they people who killed her mom. Finally, ares helped her find her way to Camp Half blood.
Favorite type of weather:bright, sunny, warm day
Least favorite type of weather:gray and gloomy weather
Favorite food:spicy buffalo wings
Least favorite food:Anchovies
How they act around other people:depends who she's with. When you first meet her, she is very quiet, but with friends she talks and shares her thoughts
How they act when they're by themselves:some times talks to herself, maybe sad because she is remembering her mom's death
Relationship with their mortal family:had a strong bond with her mom
Personality:melissa is a great friend. she is very serious, but always wants to help people. is a bit of a rebel.
Other Likes:dogs, the coors red&purple, knifes(weapon), capture the flag
Dislikes:girly girls, too cocky boys, children of hades(not on purpose-just because her mom died)
Fatal Flaw:loyalty
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):you can choose
Enemies:you can choose
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?if you want
Powers (optional):none
Year Round? Summer?:year round
Extra:
Biggest Fear:losing friends after she lost her mom
Weapon(s):knifes
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:wears ruby stud earrings
Strengths:not being like her siblings
Weaknesses:fighting in crowds
Main or minor character?:main, please
hope you like her!
I sent you a daughter of Ares, but in chap. 3 you said you needed one, so her she is...again.
Name:Melissa robyn jones
Age:15
Godly parent:ares
Mortal parent:mom, Sarah jones
Mortal family:only her mom
Hometown:orlando florida
Appearance:
Eye color:fierce gray
Hair color:black
Hair style:curly, goes to small of back
Skin color:normal tan
Height:5'8"
Body type:muscular and lean
Usual clothes:red tank top and shorts
Fall or Spring Clothing:capri pants and loose fitting tee shirt
Winter Clothing:red jacket with white fur collar, jeans
Formal Clothing:red dress,
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Go to this looooooong url, it is the third dress across
Pajamas:red silk PJ's
Usual facial expression:depends on mood
Backstory:her mom was killed when Melissa was 11, but she escaped. for 3 years, she was running from monsters and they people who killed her mom. Finally, ares helped her find her way to Camp Half blood.
Favorite type of weather:bright, sunny, warm day
Least favorite type of weather:gray and gloomy weather
Favorite food:spicy buffalo wings
Least favorite food:Anchovies
How they act around other people:depends who she's with. When you first meet her, she is very quiet, but with friends she talks and shares her thoughts
How they act when they're by themselves:some times talks to herself, maybe sad because she is remembering her mom's death
Relationship with their mortal family:had a strong bond with her mom
Personality:melissa is a great friend. she is very serious, but always wants to help people. is a bit of a rebel.
Other Likes:dogs, the coors red&purple, knifes(weapon), capture the flag
Dislikes:girly girls, too cocky boys, children of hades(not on purpose-just because her mom died)
Fatal Flaw:loyalty
Friends (if you have other OC's IM me them to):you can choose
Enemies:you can choose
Romance? With Who/what kind of person?if you want
Powers (optional):none
Year Round? Summer?:year round
Extra:
Biggest Fear:losing friends after she lost her mom
Weapon(s):knifes
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:wears ruby stud earrings
Strengths:not being like her siblings
Weaknesses:fighting in crowds
Main or minor character?:main, please
hope you like her!
6/2/2012 c3 Little purple bookworm
What do you mean, no children of ares? I sent you one! if you dont use her, that's ok, I am sanding you a hunter of artemis.
What do you mean, no children of ares? I sent you one! if you dont use her, that's ok, I am sanding you a hunter of artemis.
6/2/2012 c3 3Hades-Little-Girl-Mela
Hahahahah you used my form when I saw that I started laughing and my parents looked at me like I was crazy
3Hades-Little-Girl-MelaHahahahah you used my form when I saw that I started laughing and my parents looked at me like I was crazy
6/1/2012 c2 1calamity11
I have multiple characters AND a plot idea, but it's too late right now for me to write it all down. I promise I'll submit in twelve hours or so, just a heads up! :D
1calamity11I have multiple characters AND a plot idea, but it's too late right now for me to write it all down. I promise I'll submit in twelve hours or so, just a heads up! :D