for gimli8/20/2012 c1 Miss Cynical
oh my god this is hysterical! how bad can you get? half of me wants to whack you over the head with a dictionary and the other half wants to collapse of my chair with tears on my face! there are so many things wrong with this: the spelling (can be improved), the plot (make one?) and the characterisation (...was that word to big for you?). but honestly, this is funny enough as it is.
i would say keep writing, but i think someone would strangle me.
oh my god this is hysterical! how bad can you get? half of me wants to whack you over the head with a dictionary and the other half wants to collapse of my chair with tears on my face! there are so many things wrong with this: the spelling (can be improved), the plot (make one?) and the characterisation (...was that word to big for you?). but honestly, this is funny enough as it is.
i would say keep writing, but i think someone would strangle me.
8/20/2012 c1 Shaun The Sheep
Shaun the Sheep would like to complain about the spelling of 'magical'. Shaun The Sheep is mad because it's magycal not 'magical'.
Anyways Shaun the Sheep does very much like this story.
Shaun the Sheep would like to complain about the spelling of 'magical'. Shaun The Sheep is mad because it's magycal not 'magical'.
Anyways Shaun the Sheep does very much like this story.
6/4/2012 c1 anonym
Well, I was going to leave this alone, but temptation got the best of me XP.
As I'm no flamer, I'll put it delicately. There is a GREAT, ENORMOUS, BALROG-SIZED contrast between the quality of your summary and your story itself, that gives me the impression that you're trolling.
Dear Lord, I sure HOPE you're trolling :P. If so, we can both go and mourn Mr. Trololo today :(. A sad event, 'tis. If not, well, goodbye.
Well, I was going to leave this alone, but temptation got the best of me XP.
As I'm no flamer, I'll put it delicately. There is a GREAT, ENORMOUS, BALROG-SIZED contrast between the quality of your summary and your story itself, that gives me the impression that you're trolling.
Dear Lord, I sure HOPE you're trolling :P. If so, we can both go and mourn Mr. Trololo today :(. A sad event, 'tis. If not, well, goodbye.
6/4/2012 c1 
4Fernstrike
You know, I can't even begin to list how many different kinds of doctors I need to call in to be treated for the horrors I have been exposed to with this.
It's worse than the sparkly pink mush that would happen if Bella and Enoby met Laura and adopted Starkit. After reading this I feel like effing Bruce Banner when he got hit by all that gamma. It is one thing to butcher the English language and another to decimate Tolkien, but make it a 2-in-1 and I'd have that "bar log" dragging you down to the Dark Lard before either of us can resent it.
Get the hell of FF or get yourself a dictionary.
4FernstrikeYou know, I can't even begin to list how many different kinds of doctors I need to call in to be treated for the horrors I have been exposed to with this.
It's worse than the sparkly pink mush that would happen if Bella and Enoby met Laura and adopted Starkit. After reading this I feel like effing Bruce Banner when he got hit by all that gamma. It is one thing to butcher the English language and another to decimate Tolkien, but make it a 2-in-1 and I'd have that "bar log" dragging you down to the Dark Lard before either of us can resent it.
Get the hell of FF or get yourself a dictionary.
6/3/2012 c1 lotr gimli
this sux! gimli is awesome and ur killing him! next time write better or just dont write!
this sux! gimli is awesome and ur killing him! next time write better or just dont write!
6/3/2012 c1 lotr gimli
this sux! gimli is awesome and ur killing him! next time write better or just dont write!
this sux! gimli is awesome and ur killing him! next time write better or just dont write!
6/2/2012 c1 7Mai Lynn Bennet
Oh my dead wizard batman this was terrible! Have you read LotR at ALL? Heres a tip - next time you write a fanfic - DON'T!
7Mai Lynn BennetOh my dead wizard batman this was terrible! Have you read LotR at ALL? Heres a tip - next time you write a fanfic - DON'T!
6/2/2012 c1 WTF is this
LOLZ u fail at writing you should not write get away from the PC b4 u hurt urself
LOLZ u fail at writing you should not write get away from the PC b4 u hurt urself
6/2/2012 c1 11Kuchiki-koo
Spellcheck. Heard of it? Actually, I don't think you've every heard of spelling in the first place. Or 'plot'. So, another Mary Sue, for the LOTR fandom, eh? Die in my flame, idiot. Or better yet, my 'fireh'.
11Kuchiki-kooSpellcheck. Heard of it? Actually, I don't think you've every heard of spelling in the first place. Or 'plot'. So, another Mary Sue, for the LOTR fandom, eh? Die in my flame, idiot. Or better yet, my 'fireh'.