for Rise of Omega12/11/2012 c18 Malek
Ultimate respect to you dude. I loved the ending. Ahsoka gets a new Jeid temple, Mark is making a school for heroes, and that General is still hanging around.
I have to say that leaving at least one villain in is a good idea as it means the story can continue. Will the General build a new Omega? Will the FE rise again? Will Mark go back to coffee?
Looking forward to your future projects.
Ultimate respect to you dude. I loved the ending. Ahsoka gets a new Jeid temple, Mark is making a school for heroes, and that General is still hanging around.
I have to say that leaving at least one villain in is a good idea as it means the story can continue. Will the General build a new Omega? Will the FE rise again? Will Mark go back to coffee?
Looking forward to your future projects.
12/9/2012 c18 
5patattack
nice chapter. Sad stuff, but still good. Personally, I think this should just have been the end, and that Maraxus should've just died and that if you really needed to follow up, it could have been a new intergalactic threat instead of the same people, but whatever. hope this means you'll be working on warriors of the force V2 more often.
5patattacknice chapter. Sad stuff, but still good. Personally, I think this should just have been the end, and that Maraxus should've just died and that if you really needed to follow up, it could have been a new intergalactic threat instead of the same people, but whatever. hope this means you'll be working on warriors of the force V2 more often.
12/9/2012 c18 2WildDev13
Great ending, ahsoka got a jedi temple 2 train future jedi and everyone's going 2 help her, mark created a school 4 the gifted and maraxus is remaking the omega. Cant wait 4 the sixth crossover. :)
2WildDev13Great ending, ahsoka got a jedi temple 2 train future jedi and everyone's going 2 help her, mark created a school 4 the gifted and maraxus is remaking the omega. Cant wait 4 the sixth crossover. :)
12/7/2012 c17 5patattack
Curious, but why did you include Dr. Fate? Seems strange since you had batman, superman and the others away.
5patattackCurious, but why did you include Dr. Fate? Seems strange since you had batman, superman and the others away.
12/7/2012 c17 2WildDev13
awesome chapter, tia, kiva, demoness and vampira r back, markala has a crazy beast side and mark iv is gone. Update Soon. :)
2WildDev13awesome chapter, tia, kiva, demoness and vampira r back, markala has a crazy beast side and mark iv is gone. Update Soon. :)
12/3/2012 c16 5patattack
Maekoneous still alive? That's unexpected.
Just one thing... why didn't you have Superman join the fight? In his prime, he can juggle the planet with one hand, and even when he's not, he's still Superman.
5patattackMaekoneous still alive? That's unexpected.
Just one thing... why didn't you have Superman join the fight? In his prime, he can juggle the planet with one hand, and even when he's not, he's still Superman.
12/3/2012 c16 Malek
Sweet fighting dude. So he beats Ismau, he is able to outlast Talsmau, and now he's going to fight Ronin? DUDE! Awesome!
Sweet fighting dude. So he beats Ismau, he is able to outlast Talsmau, and now he's going to fight Ronin? DUDE! Awesome!
12/3/2012 c15 Malek
DUDE! A fusion of Ismau and Talsein vs Mark IV and Omega. This is one heck of a match!
DUDE! A fusion of Ismau and Talsein vs Mark IV and Omega. This is one heck of a match!
12/1/2012 c15 2WildDev13
awesome chapter, luv the family reunion part it's so sweet and the return of talsamu was cool. Hope they can defeat mark soon. Update Soon. :)
2WildDev13awesome chapter, luv the family reunion part it's so sweet and the return of talsamu was cool. Hope they can defeat mark soon. Update Soon. :)
11/22/2012 c14 5patattack
kicks A** chapter. Liked the part with Ichigo and Kenpachi (he's a wicked awesome fighting machine).
5patattackkicks A** chapter. Liked the part with Ichigo and Kenpachi (he's a wicked awesome fighting machine).
11/22/2012 c14 2WildDev13
Awesome chapter, the battle is getting more intense, plus im gald ahsoka didnt killed morticia, but im happy morticia dead. Update Soon. :)
2WildDev13Awesome chapter, the battle is getting more intense, plus im gald ahsoka didnt killed morticia, but im happy morticia dead. Update Soon. :)
11/22/2012 c14 Malek
Just when I think this couldnt get any better. Morticia's dead, Ismau's upgraded, Katalia's on a rampage epic stuff.
One thing I noticed. When Ahsoka is fighting Morticia you put it as Normal Pov but it's wrote in Ahsoka's pov.
Normal pov)
'Morticia and I continued our fight as we fought all over the destroyed fake Titan's tower.'
Just might want to correct that. Anyway, awesome as usual dude. Desperate for the next chapter
Just when I think this couldnt get any better. Morticia's dead, Ismau's upgraded, Katalia's on a rampage epic stuff.
One thing I noticed. When Ahsoka is fighting Morticia you put it as Normal Pov but it's wrote in Ahsoka's pov.
Normal pov)
'Morticia and I continued our fight as we fought all over the destroyed fake Titan's tower.'
Just might want to correct that. Anyway, awesome as usual dude. Desperate for the next chapter
10/31/2012 c13 Malek
Happy Halloween dude. As for this chapter... AWESOME!
Happy Halloween dude. As for this chapter... AWESOME!