for Who doesn't like a bad girl?10/28/2012 c1 Guest
i like it! I aways wondered, when we have that episode or so when maras different, why none of the other boys ask her out or anything. Perfect!
i like it! I aways wondered, when we have that episode or so when maras different, why none of the other boys ask her out or anything. Perfect!
6/24/2012 c1 peddiefangirl
why should I review
why should I review
6/7/2012 c1 
16OnTheBrinkOfInsanity
I like how you made it rain while they were outside. Weird, but i did. Don't know why...
Great story
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16OnTheBrinkOfInsanityI like how you made it rain while they were outside. Weird, but i did. Don't know why...
Great story
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6/7/2012 c1 50MyGhela
Kyyaaa (I say that too much)
It was predictable in a way that it wasn't predictable
I have no idea what I just said
just...
KYYAAA
50MyGhelaKyyaaa (I say that too much)
It was predictable in a way that it wasn't predictable
I have no idea what I just said
just...
KYYAAA
6/7/2012 c1 LizzyKat2
i saw it coming too! definetly not your usual style of writing or maybe its not the usual kind of story i like. i dont really like how you described mara, i think she would want to be unpredictable, but she wouldnt take that much leave of her senses.
i saw it coming too! definetly not your usual style of writing or maybe its not the usual kind of story i like. i dont really like how you described mara, i think she would want to be unpredictable, but she wouldnt take that much leave of her senses.