for Fire and Metal12/28/2012 c7 deadman mockingbird123
Im loving this story! :D please update soon i must know what happens :D
Im loving this story! :D please update soon i must know what happens :D
7/5/2012 c7 
9mochiusagi
Wow, it seems like the dream was more of a foreshadowing than just a dream. More please!
9mochiusagiWow, it seems like the dream was more of a foreshadowing than just a dream. More please!
6/16/2012 c7 2schlo5398
O.o this better be all the similarities between the reality and Roy's dreams! If Edward dies. . . I don't even want to think about it especially since Roy was the one who lead them there, he would feel so extremely bad .
Anywho, this update was very exciting! Please keep up the writing! :D
2schlo5398O.o this better be all the similarities between the reality and Roy's dreams! If Edward dies. . . I don't even want to think about it especially since Roy was the one who lead them there, he would feel so extremely bad .
Anywho, this update was very exciting! Please keep up the writing! :D
6/16/2012 c4 31LeFay Strent
*sings* It was only just a dream
Yeah, that song popped into my head as I read this. Roy has creepy ** dreams.
31LeFay Strent*sings* It was only just a dream
Yeah, that song popped into my head as I read this. Roy has creepy ** dreams.
6/16/2012 c3 LeFay Strent
Wow, Adalric is seriously creepy. With the cake and tea party in a dirty place like that and the giant bird and the CREEPY song. Oh! And let's not forget the bunches of people he has trapped there.
You have successfully creeped me out. You're a great writer!
Wow, Adalric is seriously creepy. With the cake and tea party in a dirty place like that and the giant bird and the CREEPY song. Oh! And let's not forget the bunches of people he has trapped there.
You have successfully creeped me out. You're a great writer!
6/16/2012 c7 14MelodyDTK
Its okay, don't feel bad about not updating, even though I really like this story! Yeah, slumps suck! I ENJOYED! :D You're writing is as good as ever!
14MelodyDTKIts okay, don't feel bad about not updating, even though I really like this story! Yeah, slumps suck! I ENJOYED! :D You're writing is as good as ever!
6/16/2012 c6 2schlo5398
Oh my god! I really wish Edward had stayed with Roy but at the same time I suppose he needs to go save those two . . . . maybe he could get help from Roy ;D
Anywho, update soon please!
2schlo5398Oh my god! I really wish Edward had stayed with Roy but at the same time I suppose he needs to go save those two . . . . maybe he could get help from Roy ;D
Anywho, update soon please!
6/14/2012 c6 SaraMatta
*.* oh.. wow... can't wait to read what will happen next!
Oh! and tha kiss's scene? *.* i really liked it XD God..i'm such a sappy O_O
*.* oh.. wow... can't wait to read what will happen next!
Oh! and tha kiss's scene? *.* i really liked it XD God..i'm such a sappy O_O
6/11/2012 c4 MelodyDTK
Your story was amazing. The lyrics you chose were perfect! I loved your story and your style of writing is truly amazing. Please update.
Your story was amazing. The lyrics you chose were perfect! I loved your story and your style of writing is truly amazing. Please update.