for Alliances and War12/31/2012 c12 Rhea
Very good and interesting!
Very good and interesting!
8/23/2012 c12 
5Emuerz
Oh man! That's not what I expected at all.. quite the interesting twist you threw in there. It's intriguing since I've never even considered the idea of Laufey actually being interested in Loki. It's an original idea, can't wait to see where this goes!
5EmuerzOh man! That's not what I expected at all.. quite the interesting twist you threw in there. It's intriguing since I've never even considered the idea of Laufey actually being interested in Loki. It's an original idea, can't wait to see where this goes!
8/19/2012 c12 jadedheart25
Wow great chapter I wish it was longer Loki finding out his entire life was based on a lie and he's just a pawn in a big game of chest it so sad and I also feel sorry for Finwë because he also just another pawn being used and now he torn between Loki his husband and mother of his child his loyalties to the rest of his family and rem.
Wow great chapter I wish it was longer Loki finding out his entire life was based on a lie and he's just a pawn in a big game of chest it so sad and I also feel sorry for Finwë because he also just another pawn being used and now he torn between Loki his husband and mother of his child his loyalties to the rest of his family and rem.
8/19/2012 c12 6GreenLoki
Oh my, gosh. Wow. Really!? I have to say, I definitely did not expect this at all. I've read so many stories where Laufey hates Loki, how he couldn't care less what happened to him. I guess I assumed that it would be the same in this story, as well, but I'm so surprised! Laufey never hated Loki, he wanted Loki back, and he entered the war for him. I feel so bad for Loki. I mean, he really doesn't belong anywhere. He was told he was hated by Jotunheim his entire life, he's not related to Odin, Frigga, or Thor, he's not a true Asgardian, he was forced to marry Finwe to create and alliance with Alfheim. He's stuck in the middle of these three Realms, but not truly belonging to any of them. It's horrible and I just feel so bad for him!
Regardless of this crazy twist, I am so enjoying this story very much, and am so glad that you finally updated this story. This was the first story from yours that I fell in love with, so it's great to get a bit more of it. I hope you update soon!
6GreenLokiOh my, gosh. Wow. Really!? I have to say, I definitely did not expect this at all. I've read so many stories where Laufey hates Loki, how he couldn't care less what happened to him. I guess I assumed that it would be the same in this story, as well, but I'm so surprised! Laufey never hated Loki, he wanted Loki back, and he entered the war for him. I feel so bad for Loki. I mean, he really doesn't belong anywhere. He was told he was hated by Jotunheim his entire life, he's not related to Odin, Frigga, or Thor, he's not a true Asgardian, he was forced to marry Finwe to create and alliance with Alfheim. He's stuck in the middle of these three Realms, but not truly belonging to any of them. It's horrible and I just feel so bad for him!
Regardless of this crazy twist, I am so enjoying this story very much, and am so glad that you finally updated this story. This was the first story from yours that I fell in love with, so it's great to get a bit more of it. I hope you update soon!
8/13/2012 c1 2Cartlin
You have created a Gary Stu. Feel ashamed, embarrassed, and live with this knowledge, that you are looked down upon by good fan fiction authors. Many of us have done it (this or created a Mary Sue) but we've been smart enough to NEVER post our shame, and try to forget we ever wrote it.
2CartlinYou have created a Gary Stu. Feel ashamed, embarrassed, and live with this knowledge, that you are looked down upon by good fan fiction authors. Many of us have done it (this or created a Mary Sue) but we've been smart enough to NEVER post our shame, and try to forget we ever wrote it.
7/26/2012 c11 5Emuerz
Adorable is what I think of Elledan! I've been with my little nephews today so I can picture the baby exactly. I'm very intrigued as to what has happened with Laufey... since the war is with Svartalfheim and Jotunheim...
5EmuerzAdorable is what I think of Elledan! I've been with my little nephews today so I can picture the baby exactly. I'm very intrigued as to what has happened with Laufey... since the war is with Svartalfheim and Jotunheim...
7/26/2012 c11 Guest
CONTINUACION !
CONTINUACION !
7/25/2012 c11 carbonitedoubleohneg
Awwwwww! IRL I hate babies, they shriek and cry and people take them the most inappropriate places. But awwwwwwwwww! I'm glad Finwe's back okay XD And I can't wait for what happens next!
Thank you very much for the PM, it warmed my heart.
Awwwwww! IRL I hate babies, they shriek and cry and people take them the most inappropriate places. But awwwwwwwwww! I'm glad Finwe's back okay XD And I can't wait for what happens next!
Thank you very much for the PM, it warmed my heart.
7/25/2012 c11 3maraudersbanana
Aaaahhhhhhh! What about Laufey? What has he done now? or what has happened to him?
please update soon
3maraudersbananaAaaahhhhhhh! What about Laufey? What has he done now? or what has happened to him?
please update soon
7/25/2012 c11 6GreenLoki
First of all, I couldn't stop awing over Elledan! I could totally picture dark hair, pointy ears, and grey eyes, and it was the most adorable thing ever! The reunion between them was absolutely perfect. I loved how they ran into each others' arms! It's the beginning stages of love!
Secondly, HOW IN THE HELL COULD YOU HAVE LEFT THE CHAPTER LIKE THIS! LIKE OMG! WHAT ABOUT LAUFEY! WHAT IS GOING ON! I NEED SPOILERS OR SOMETHING BEFORE I HYPERVENTILATE AND DIE!
6GreenLokiFirst of all, I couldn't stop awing over Elledan! I could totally picture dark hair, pointy ears, and grey eyes, and it was the most adorable thing ever! The reunion between them was absolutely perfect. I loved how they ran into each others' arms! It's the beginning stages of love!
Secondly, HOW IN THE HELL COULD YOU HAVE LEFT THE CHAPTER LIKE THIS! LIKE OMG! WHAT ABOUT LAUFEY! WHAT IS GOING ON! I NEED SPOILERS OR SOMETHING BEFORE I HYPERVENTILATE AND DIE!
7/18/2012 c10 carbonitedoubleohneg
I'm glad that Loki has Thor and his family to support him. It's heartwarming.
Finwe's comment about thinking about Loki made my heart squeeze with squee!
I'm glad that Loki has Thor and his family to support him. It's heartwarming.
Finwe's comment about thinking about Loki made my heart squeeze with squee!
7/6/2012 c10 6GreenLoki
Aw, that's upsetting that Celegorm and Elessar are dead! I mean, granted, I wanted to smack Celegorm upside the head a few times with a heavy rock, but I didn't want him to die. I kind of wanted him to see how awesome Loki and Finwe are together. I also couldn't help but aw super loud when Finwe said that he thought about Loki every day when they were apart. That was so cute! I just want these two to kiss for real now! Darn you! I want to hate Finwe! I'm starting to love him now. I love those moments when Thor and Loki just smile at each other. It just makes the whole world light up. Brilliant chapter! Keep it up, girlie!
6GreenLokiAw, that's upsetting that Celegorm and Elessar are dead! I mean, granted, I wanted to smack Celegorm upside the head a few times with a heavy rock, but I didn't want him to die. I kind of wanted him to see how awesome Loki and Finwe are together. I also couldn't help but aw super loud when Finwe said that he thought about Loki every day when they were apart. That was so cute! I just want these two to kiss for real now! Darn you! I want to hate Finwe! I'm starting to love him now. I love those moments when Thor and Loki just smile at each other. It just makes the whole world light up. Brilliant chapter! Keep it up, girlie!