for What I did for Fax fans10/15/2012 c8 Maximumridewings
I have a confession...
I saw you mouthed off one of my favorite writers so I flamed you without reading...
I wrote the five reviews.
I'm really sorry I did that, because I just read your stories. They are actually really good...
I'm so sorry.
I have a confession...
I saw you mouthed off one of my favorite writers so I flamed you without reading...
I wrote the five reviews.
I'm really sorry I did that, because I just read your stories. They are actually really good...
I'm so sorry.
10/15/2012 c1 Guest
Your name isn't Holly Shepard, is it?
Your name isn't Holly Shepard, is it?
10/11/2012 c8 
520 Toes
Well first of all, people review stories so that they can be made better. That's what reviews are for. So you can't post a story on here and not expect some negative feedback.
I didn't read the review that you reviewed for the guest reviewer so I can't say anything about that. But here is my opinion on mean reviews. This opinion is for everybody, not just the author of this story. Please read the whole story before you make an assumption about the rest. When you assume you make an ass out of u and me. And if you are going to criticize, don't just say that it's lame or stupid, at least tell what makes it that way. And if possible, tell how they can make it better. And do not insult the author of the story. Reviews are to make stories better. Not to be mean. Its okay to be an amature on this cite. Reviews can make them into better writers, but only if you offer help on how. Nobody cares if you were practically a shakesphere when you started on this cite. There's always going to be writer that are better than you. Lastly, if you are going to post a mean review, at least have the decency to put your name on it instead of hiding behind the guest name. If you hide behind the guest and you are posting a mean review, then it's technically a flame. Now for my review to your story.
It was okay, I guess. But it is OOC and Birdie is a Mary Sue. Give her some weaknesses and flaws, and your story will much better.
520 ToesWell first of all, people review stories so that they can be made better. That's what reviews are for. So you can't post a story on here and not expect some negative feedback.
I didn't read the review that you reviewed for the guest reviewer so I can't say anything about that. But here is my opinion on mean reviews. This opinion is for everybody, not just the author of this story. Please read the whole story before you make an assumption about the rest. When you assume you make an ass out of u and me. And if you are going to criticize, don't just say that it's lame or stupid, at least tell what makes it that way. And if possible, tell how they can make it better. And do not insult the author of the story. Reviews are to make stories better. Not to be mean. Its okay to be an amature on this cite. Reviews can make them into better writers, but only if you offer help on how. Nobody cares if you were practically a shakesphere when you started on this cite. There's always going to be writer that are better than you. Lastly, if you are going to post a mean review, at least have the decency to put your name on it instead of hiding behind the guest name. If you hide behind the guest and you are posting a mean review, then it's technically a flame. Now for my review to your story.
It was okay, I guess. But it is OOC and Birdie is a Mary Sue. Give her some weaknesses and flaws, and your story will much better.
10/10/2012 c7 Guest
Don't get too excited- this isn't a review about your story. This is a response to your review on my story. Ooh, my first bad review! I'm not really hurt at all because 1) Your criticism were shallow, 2) If you had paid attention, you would have been able to satisfy all of your complaints.
For one, you said said was a boy's name. If you had been READING, you would have learned that RED is NOT her real name, and I'm having my readers vote on her name. Second, yes, she was left behind by the Flock. They were scared, terrified, pressured by Jeb, and yes, they left. Who are you to try to change the creative process of my story line? Not cool, man.
Next, Red does not have too many powers. She has weak telekinesis. She can tell lies from truth. That's it. Big deal.
THEN, you said I copied the first flight from the Angel Experiment.
1) That was a dream, not a real flight
2) They both jumped off a cliff. Red actually fell, Max jumped. Red almost killed herself and didn't fly, Max almost immediately flew. I needed a way for Red to get in the air, and she did by falling off the cliff.
After that, you said Max was OOC. IN WHAT STORY IS MAX TRULY IN CHARACTER?! Not in yours, anyway. Fanfiction was created so that people could write stories about characters in books. I had Max react to that situation in the way I interpreted she would act according to the situation. 24 other people LOOVED my story enough to review, and 14 liked it enough to Favorite and follow.
FINALLY, you said that Red can’t be fixed. You’re right. She can’t be fixed because she was NEVER BROKEN.
Okay, I’m done. I’m sure I will get tons of more bad reviews. I just wanted to respond to this one because it was stupid. And it was my first. I’m sorry to respond in such a harsh way, but I wanted you to not only give my story another try, but for you to realize you shouldn’t just review meanly when you barely paid attention to the story.
AND AT LAST, I must say a quick review on your story. Um….. I agree with the Guest Reviewer. Sorry to be harsh.
I think people are entitled to their own opinion. Please try and rethink yours.
Sincerely, Widemindedwinglover, the authour who WILL talk back!
Don't get too excited- this isn't a review about your story. This is a response to your review on my story. Ooh, my first bad review! I'm not really hurt at all because 1) Your criticism were shallow, 2) If you had paid attention, you would have been able to satisfy all of your complaints.
For one, you said said was a boy's name. If you had been READING, you would have learned that RED is NOT her real name, and I'm having my readers vote on her name. Second, yes, she was left behind by the Flock. They were scared, terrified, pressured by Jeb, and yes, they left. Who are you to try to change the creative process of my story line? Not cool, man.
Next, Red does not have too many powers. She has weak telekinesis. She can tell lies from truth. That's it. Big deal.
THEN, you said I copied the first flight from the Angel Experiment.
1) That was a dream, not a real flight
2) They both jumped off a cliff. Red actually fell, Max jumped. Red almost killed herself and didn't fly, Max almost immediately flew. I needed a way for Red to get in the air, and she did by falling off the cliff.
After that, you said Max was OOC. IN WHAT STORY IS MAX TRULY IN CHARACTER?! Not in yours, anyway. Fanfiction was created so that people could write stories about characters in books. I had Max react to that situation in the way I interpreted she would act according to the situation. 24 other people LOOVED my story enough to review, and 14 liked it enough to Favorite and follow.
FINALLY, you said that Red can’t be fixed. You’re right. She can’t be fixed because she was NEVER BROKEN.
Okay, I’m done. I’m sure I will get tons of more bad reviews. I just wanted to respond to this one because it was stupid. And it was my first. I’m sorry to respond in such a harsh way, but I wanted you to not only give my story another try, but for you to realize you shouldn’t just review meanly when you barely paid attention to the story.
AND AT LAST, I must say a quick review on your story. Um….. I agree with the Guest Reviewer. Sorry to be harsh.
I think people are entitled to their own opinion. Please try and rethink yours.
Sincerely, Widemindedwinglover, the authour who WILL talk back!
10/10/2012 c7 Guest
Lame. So totally boring and stupid
Lame. So totally boring and stupid
10/7/2012 c1 Guest
Since you were so arrogant as to say that you hate it when other authors go and ask for people not to go and immediately flame on them, I am going to warn you that this review is going to be HARSH. Just don't go crying about it with that big head of yours that you obviously have- I only came here because you basically said another MR story was a Mary Sue when it's basically the same as James Patterson's... Yours is the obvious Mary Sue.
Getting on with it, I've only read the first chapter and I'm hoping that my lost brain cells won't affect my performance in school. This is a terrible (legitimate) Mary Sue, not something that actually is possible in the Maximum Ride world. (See? I used it in the right context this time, sweetie. Not at all overused.)
Next, this story SHOWS how amateur you are. You switched from first person to third person in Fang's point of view, which is terrible. My first story that I ever wrote never gave any sign that it was actually my first fanfiction. I even got a review or two hinting that I should get it published.
By the way, I picked it up as arrogancy because it's kind of obvious... Anyone else who reads this review: please read in between the lines. This writer is bigheaded and arrogant. They think that their writing is better than everyone else's and write terribly.
That is all.
Sincerely,
An EXPERIENCED Writer.
Since you were so arrogant as to say that you hate it when other authors go and ask for people not to go and immediately flame on them, I am going to warn you that this review is going to be HARSH. Just don't go crying about it with that big head of yours that you obviously have- I only came here because you basically said another MR story was a Mary Sue when it's basically the same as James Patterson's... Yours is the obvious Mary Sue.
Getting on with it, I've only read the first chapter and I'm hoping that my lost brain cells won't affect my performance in school. This is a terrible (legitimate) Mary Sue, not something that actually is possible in the Maximum Ride world. (See? I used it in the right context this time, sweetie. Not at all overused.)
Next, this story SHOWS how amateur you are. You switched from first person to third person in Fang's point of view, which is terrible. My first story that I ever wrote never gave any sign that it was actually my first fanfiction. I even got a review or two hinting that I should get it published.
By the way, I picked it up as arrogancy because it's kind of obvious... Anyone else who reads this review: please read in between the lines. This writer is bigheaded and arrogant. They think that their writing is better than everyone else's and write terribly.
That is all.
Sincerely,
An EXPERIENCED Writer.
10/7/2012 c1 Guest
No. It shouldn't be a two shot. It's terrible. For one, Birdie is a total Mary Sue. I mean, 10% bird? Get real. And the color of her wings is so stupid. And then of course she would take Dylan away for Fax fans. Cause that would totally happen. And the E shaped house would have security around it. Plus Dylan didn't even live in the E shaped house. And you would have her only eat 50 calories a day. That's so stupid! If I were you I would scrap it or kill Birdie off.
No. It shouldn't be a two shot. It's terrible. For one, Birdie is a total Mary Sue. I mean, 10% bird? Get real. And the color of her wings is so stupid. And then of course she would take Dylan away for Fax fans. Cause that would totally happen. And the E shaped house would have security around it. Plus Dylan didn't even live in the E shaped house. And you would have her only eat 50 calories a day. That's so stupid! If I were you I would scrap it or kill Birdie off.
7/30/2012 c5 5Winged Time Wolf Ravenclaw
This is awesome. Love Birdie. SO GLAD SHE'S NOT WITH FANG BECAUSE ONLY MAX SHOULD BE WITH FANG. Apologies, just in love with Fax. Bylan is CUTE! Keep it going please!
5Winged Time Wolf RavenclawThis is awesome. Love Birdie. SO GLAD SHE'S NOT WITH FANG BECAUSE ONLY MAX SHOULD BE WITH FANG. Apologies, just in love with Fax. Bylan is CUTE! Keep it going please!
7/24/2012 c4 Stunningfire
Omg did you read Max's blog Dylan was kidnapped for a bit and I just realized its so similar to your story xP kinda
Omg did you read Max's blog Dylan was kidnapped for a bit and I just realized its so similar to your story xP kinda