for The Symbiote10/16/2012 c2 
2FollieOfMadness
FALCON, PUNCCCCCCH! Had to say it otherwise I would have shat myself. :) That, and "YOU JUST GOT KNOCKED THE ** OUT!"
Good chap, chap.
2FollieOfMadnessFALCON, PUNCCCCCCH! Had to say it otherwise I would have shat myself. :) That, and "YOU JUST GOT KNOCKED THE ** OUT!"
Good chap, chap.
10/16/2012 c1 FollieOfMadness
It wasn't THAT bad. Honestly, with all the MJ bashing I see with Movie-verses, it's nice to have one that makes her feel like an actual person. :P So yeah. Not bad chapter.
It wasn't THAT bad. Honestly, with all the MJ bashing I see with Movie-verses, it's nice to have one that makes her feel like an actual person. :P So yeah. Not bad chapter.
9/26/2012 c1 Guest
i really want to see mary jane get consumed by the symbiote but doesnt die
i really want to see mary jane get consumed by the symbiote but doesnt die
9/25/2012 c1 Guest
i think you should let her get fully consumed by the symbiote but does not die and let her kile spiderman
i think you should let her get fully consumed by the symbiote but does not die and let her kile spiderman
9/21/2012 c5 Guest
i think you should let the symbiote consume her if you know what i mean
i think you should let the symbiote consume her if you know what i mean
9/1/2012 c2 BeAsT BoOmEr17
this was really interesting i hope it gets better and not saying its bad i mean that its like really good
this was really interesting i hope it gets better and not saying its bad i mean that its like really good
11/6/2011 c3 spidermanfan1597
This was...an interesting opinion on what would happen if MJ had been the host. but there are thousands of possibilities and we don't know what one is the best. But overall very good so far.
This was...an interesting opinion on what would happen if MJ had been the host. but there are thousands of possibilities and we don't know what one is the best. But overall very good so far.
9/6/2011 c5 zeldafan12345
plz make another chapter I just hate it when people just drop the stories right in the middle of the story
plz make another chapter I just hate it when people just drop the stories right in the middle of the story
9/5/2010 c5 4crosswire
GREAT! All five chapters are a treat to read. I do have a tiny knik pick though...
Why did'nt anyone put together that this 'Venom' was female? I mean if the Sybmbiote is like spiderman's coustume then would'nt Mary Janes female figure stand out more?
But Spiderman not understanding the fact that someone has a rack never took away a single solitary moment of enjoyment from this fanfic.
I hope you continue writing!
4crosswireGREAT! All five chapters are a treat to read. I do have a tiny knik pick though...
Why did'nt anyone put together that this 'Venom' was female? I mean if the Sybmbiote is like spiderman's coustume then would'nt Mary Janes female figure stand out more?
But Spiderman not understanding the fact that someone has a rack never took away a single solitary moment of enjoyment from this fanfic.
I hope you continue writing!
6/20/2010 c5 Just a Crazy-Man
Please carry on with this story. By the way above excellent job carry on.
Please carry on with this story. By the way above excellent job carry on.