for Love You Guys Too8/23/2012 c1 
9Loomena
that was a pretty funny story xD
im not surprised it has that many favorites and likes ;) especially joshuas comments were pretty hilarious in this xD and the last story, the one that phones (whose name is still freaking neku, emphasis laid on the freaking) told xD and how people mostly refused to respect phones
9Loomenathat was a pretty funny story xD
im not surprised it has that many favorites and likes ;) especially joshuas comments were pretty hilarious in this xD and the last story, the one that phones (whose name is still freaking neku, emphasis laid on the freaking) told xD and how people mostly refused to respect phones
8/21/2012 c1 12P.T. Piranha
Say what you want, Neku, but I think Rhyme's got it figured out.
Anyway, this is a good short story.
12P.T. PiranhaSay what you want, Neku, but I think Rhyme's got it figured out.
Anyway, this is a good short story.
8/10/2012 c1 30CulinaryChef
That was the funniest thing ever ! I can totally see them doing this. It's ok Pho-Neku, we love you! I am so printing this out and posting it on my wall at college so I can always read the awesomeness.
30CulinaryChefThat was the funniest thing ever ! I can totally see them doing this. It's ok Pho-Neku, we love you! I am so printing this out and posting it on my wall at college so I can always read the awesomeness.
7/27/2012 c1 58Infamousplot
xDDDD I love this, it's hilarious xD
Awww, everyone is ganging up on Neku. Poor Phones. Their stories were all so amusing. And lol, Joshua's xDDD He would tell something like that... Beat's was funny too, but I think Neku's was my favorite xD
It's okay Phones- I mean Neku. They all love you, deep down xD
*favs*
58InfamousplotxDDDD I love this, it's hilarious xD
Awww, everyone is ganging up on Neku. Poor Phones. Their stories were all so amusing. And lol, Joshua's xDDD He would tell something like that... Beat's was funny too, but I think Neku's was my favorite xD
It's okay Phones- I mean Neku. They all love you, deep down xD
*favs*
6/30/2012 c1 1Daien
Aw, I really enjoyed this story, as short as it was. I saw a lot of potential for a continuation of this for a couple chapters, e.g reminiscing and more hilarious and close-knit moments. I really hope you'll reconsider ending this at just one chapter and maybe write a couple more.
1DaienAw, I really enjoyed this story, as short as it was. I saw a lot of potential for a continuation of this for a couple chapters, e.g reminiscing and more hilarious and close-knit moments. I really hope you'll reconsider ending this at just one chapter and maybe write a couple more.
6/15/2012 c1 12Luckenhaft
XD! shiki's story was good. Joshua's story was disturbing. beat's story was silly. rhyme's story was sweet. but neku's story was hilarious. you should do more one shots your a comedic genius. like neku's a psych genius. :)
12LuckenhaftXD! shiki's story was good. Joshua's story was disturbing. beat's story was silly. rhyme's story was sweet. but neku's story was hilarious. you should do more one shots your a comedic genius. like neku's a psych genius. :)
6/14/2012 c1 115Sakura Sango
Hahahaha! Oh man each story had me laughing! The yaoi fangirl in me screams for Joshua to continue his story. Haha
115Sakura SangoHahahaha! Oh man each story had me laughing! The yaoi fangirl in me screams for Joshua to continue his story. Haha
6/10/2012 c1 7wittyDragoon
BrDPirateMan
Thanks for the review. It was very honest. To tell the truth, I wrote this in the middle of the night when I couldn't sleep, so forgive me for the incomplete story line and typos. I found it decent enough to put on here, at least. Oh, and I wasn't trying for any BL. I just thought it was something Joshua would say
7wittyDragoonBrDPirateMan
Thanks for the review. It was very honest. To tell the truth, I wrote this in the middle of the night when I couldn't sleep, so forgive me for the incomplete story line and typos. I found it decent enough to put on here, at least. Oh, and I wasn't trying for any BL. I just thought it was something Joshua would say
6/10/2012 c1 AkaiChouNoKoe
Beat's was funny xD I wanna hear more of Joshua's story since I sensed BL in it
Beat's was funny xD I wanna hear more of Joshua's story since I sensed BL in it
6/9/2012 c1 30BrDPirateMan
Hmmm, this is an okay tale overall, though it could use a little polishing and some improvement. Seeing how the other characters portray Neku with their own stories is entertaining because it plays to their quirks and tendencies, but it doesn't really exploit their personalities to the fullest.
Of the entire crew, Beat's version of Neku's biography is the funniest, while the others' are mildly funny. It'd have been nice if Shiki added some details about people snatching Neku's clothes and fixing them without his permission, for example. And I don't much care about Joshua's shounen-ai affinity (maybe too much NekuXJoshua around here is getting tiring to me). The result is that while their mini-stories are nice, they also feel incomplete.
And if I were to nitpick, the usage of bad language here is jarring at best. Also, some words seem to be missing, most notably in Beat's story paragraph. "Love You Guys Too" is okay, but requires a little more finesse.
Verdict: 3/5 (Not bad)
30BrDPirateManHmmm, this is an okay tale overall, though it could use a little polishing and some improvement. Seeing how the other characters portray Neku with their own stories is entertaining because it plays to their quirks and tendencies, but it doesn't really exploit their personalities to the fullest.
Of the entire crew, Beat's version of Neku's biography is the funniest, while the others' are mildly funny. It'd have been nice if Shiki added some details about people snatching Neku's clothes and fixing them without his permission, for example. And I don't much care about Joshua's shounen-ai affinity (maybe too much NekuXJoshua around here is getting tiring to me). The result is that while their mini-stories are nice, they also feel incomplete.
And if I were to nitpick, the usage of bad language here is jarring at best. Also, some words seem to be missing, most notably in Beat's story paragraph. "Love You Guys Too" is okay, but requires a little more finesse.
Verdict: 3/5 (Not bad)