for The Miner's Daughter6/12/2012 c1
16Rose7
Just wanted to tell you that this batch of River/Jayne one-shots you've posted are all of them, top to bottom, fantastic. River/Jayne had never even crossed my mind before, and I think in the space of fifteen minutes you have made me a complete believer. You write Jayne's POV so pitch-perfect, and River's dialogue sounds very IC (which IMO is hard to do!) I hope you'll do more of them!
16Rose7Just wanted to tell you that this batch of River/Jayne one-shots you've posted are all of them, top to bottom, fantastic. River/Jayne had never even crossed my mind before, and I think in the space of fifteen minutes you have made me a complete believer. You write Jayne's POV so pitch-perfect, and River's dialogue sounds very IC (which IMO is hard to do!) I hope you'll do more of them!
6/10/2012 c1 Ali
Sigh...buzzkill but a good one.
Sigh...buzzkill but a good one.
6/10/2012 c1
5CaptainBluntschli
Awww. Poignant little piece...certainly tugs on the heart strings. Just...aww.
5CaptainBluntschliAwww. Poignant little piece...certainly tugs on the heart strings. Just...aww.
